FF:dark heart(chapter 2 pg 19)

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Posted: 12 years ago
PROLOGUE


She was trembling wid fear,frustration n love,all her emotions mixed up.c could see anger n evilness in his eyes,his smile.that was easily noticable.c couldnt biliv it was the same Abhay.

His eyes were blood red with anger,anger which had no reason behind it.he clutched her wrist tightly.she winced in pain.

"see,i m nt suitable 4 u.go away n dnt interfere in ma life.there's no space 4 u in ma DARK HEART."


Hi guys this is just an intro.this is my first attempt 2 write a ff.so plz suggest me.

Thanks to ma sis srija 4 the encouragement n thanks 2 heena di n tanzie for being my inspiration.

Regards
shirish.


Character sketch page 5
chapter 1 page 10
chapter 2 page 19Edited by dark-heart09 - 12 years ago

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cuteteddy thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear looks interesting !
ur first attempt is pretty good
continue soon n thanks for the pm
n ya welcum to the forum hope u enjoy here
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Posted: 12 years ago
A dark, evil abhay s sexy ! :D :D..cntinue soon & pm me.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteteddy

hey dear looks interesting !
ur first attempt is pretty good
continue soon n thanks for the pm
n ya welcum to the forum hope u enjoy here

thank u so much.
I m going to enjoy bashing ma sis in IF as wel.
Thanks for liking ma 1st attempt.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honey_bunch

A dark, evil abhay s sexy ! :D :D..cntinue soon & pm me.. :)

ya i think so too.
Wil continue soon.
Ya wil pm u next time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Prologue! Sounds very interesting! Looking forward to reading this FF! Continue soon and please PM me whenever you update! Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shirish toh yeh mera surprise thha.ok gud one.bt y itna 6otu update hun?
Aur yeh kya tu IF mein vi mujhe satayega.kya musibat hai yaar.
Abhay is evil.sounds interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey buddy
it luks interesting n sounds good
so pls continue soon
n pls pm me vn u update
tc ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Shirish...Welcome to the forum.😃 Continue soon. Concept is interesting and would love to read more.  Thanks for Pm. Srija told me that you are writing a new ff. All the best!😊 Edited by prerna26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -srija-

Shirish toh yeh mera surprise thha.ok gud one.bt y itna 6otu update hun?
Aur yeh kya tu IF mein vi mujhe satayega.kya musibat hai yaar.
Abhay is evil.sounds interesting.

kaisa laga mera surprise kaha thha na mein vi ff likhunga.
Funny di mujhe jhelna itna muskil hai kya?