FF-Bodyguard Link 2 New Thread on Pg. 150 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Davi

Awesome dear 

Great start 

Looking forward to the rest.

Love your update. don't be late cause will be waiting ...lol 

Thanks for the PM.

Aw Davi, Im sorry! I am late 😆

Originally posted by: pooh_91

LOVED IT!! 😊

loved arnavs retorts at shyam 😊 the dialogues were hot and more so when you think of barun delivering them 😉

i was thinkng about the fight yesterday..arnav bashing up all the goons and was thinking of wat state he would make of the slime 🤢 considering he meddled with his sis's and his kushi's 😉 lives...

but loved your take on the situation

pm me when your putting up the update.

Hey Priya! Im glad you liked my writing yaar! Makes me very happy😳
Yes I think he shuld beat up Shyam. wuld be a treat

Originally posted by: anita_21492

Fab first chapter

hey Anita! im glad you liked it

Originally posted by: rsk16

this was too good.very nice

thanks hun

Originally posted by: princessunara

aww this is just beautifulll!!! please do write the next part soon!! i can't wait to know what happens next!!!

hey hun! im glad you liked my writing!😃

Originally posted by: 143badra

hi dr ... simply amazing😉

sorry for the late comments was busy with exams and still is ...

omg i am totally in love with ur SS ...

btw .. wonderful name .. Aranav the bodyguard 😉 ...

looking forward to find out wht u have in store for us ... inside the room 😉 ... 

btw prefect conversations btwn all character .. i dont think it is wrong to say that u have outdone urself dr ...  i hate tht snake alottt ... i was waiting for Aranv to punch him straight in the face and all the right place 😆... oh even i have no idea of the extend to which is hate tht scum bag , good for nothing  two timer (imho) ... anyways lets leave tht aside ... i know tht it is too early to beat him in ur ff ...  right  ... but couldnt help from exploring my imagination ... replacing sham with a goon from the previous episode ... anyways i am having my fingers crossed until tht faithful day 😉 ...

love the part tht u made La vanish without too much drama ... wait without any drama at all ... and also loved the fact tht u cut to the chase with the first part itself .. straight to the body guard ... 

and pls do continue sharing ur wonderful idea and imagination .. looking forward to read more and more of ur updates .. and thanx a bunch for the pm and pls keep sending them 😊

"and any updates over the week mite be just out of my pure excitement to write! " --- i wish tht ur excitement be  at the peak ensuring us more updates 😉 ... 

so see u around ..

-  -badra

Hey badra! Im glad you found the time to read my SS.

omggg!! I hav never had such an awesome n long post! this is my first!! ^^^^

Thanks yaar! you hav no idea how awesome it feels 😆
aww im gettin all teary now 😳 Thanks for finding time to read my update!

Originally posted by: vaishali667

really very nice start  keep it up 

thanks

Originally posted by: hemvb

do add me to your pm list...

ur on!

Originally posted by: Asmita88

hey waiting desperately for the update...

updating asap

Originally posted by: meghnas

waiting eagerly for the next part - so that i don't go crazy waiting for the actual show in 8 hours 😆

haha well it will be up soon