OS : Dreams on Fire (Kastur's POV @ pg 3)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello all the Dharampankhas 🤗

 

How r u all...

 

well i dont expect u all to remember me....but let me refresh ur memory ...😳

 

i wrote an OS a long time ago on this forum...n i tries my best to write one OS every week...but failed...miserably...

 

so now i am back...with another OS...hope u all like it...😳

 

Title Courtesy: Song 'Dreams on fire' from the movie Slumdog Millionaire

 

the OS will be like a POV from the both Mohan n Kastur's character..

 

first there is mohan's POV...after that i will write from kastur's...

 

 

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DREAMS ON FIRE

 

 

 

 

Mohan's POV

 

 

 

what is happening...what is going on..

 

what am i doing..

 

this is not what i wanted to do...

 

marriage...first of all i never thought of it...second ...even if i did...it was supposed to be with a girl who would be like me...who would be modern...and understand me...

 

but now i have to marry that kastur...that stupid girl...ugghhh...

 

why is all this happening to me...

 

it is just because of baapji that i have to do all this...

 

na wo promise karte aur na hi ye hota...

 

now what am i supposed to do..

 

no one will listen to me...in fact they will blame me for all that has happened...

 

they always get a chance to make me look like the bad guy...like it was my fault that i went to study abroad...like it was my fault that i expect to start a new business...like it is my fault that i am expecting help from my family...why are there so many complications...

 

and that kastur...she is not even my type...who likes girls like her...i mean look at her and look at me...there is no match...n my family thinks she is for me...

 

maybe i should stop all this non sense n put an and to this wedding that will happen...yes that will be good for everyone...

 

no...no...no...i cant do that...

 

i need money and this is the only way that i will be able to get it without being suspicious...

 

i have to keep in mind that i have to start my business and prove to these so called gujarati people and their so called traditions are of no use in today's century...

 

yes i have to prove to them...especially baap ji...he said no to me ...he said i dont know anything about business and he wants me to join that spice business...no way...i have to make my own identity and let them know what i can do...

 

nut what about kastur and this relation which i am going to enter...

 

maybe i should have listened to maa and said no...

 

but i have to do this...

 

this is just a compromise...yes...this is a compromise which i am doing ...i have to do this...

 

i will explain this to kastur also

 

i will tell her that this relation...this so called husband - wife relation which we are going to have will be in name only...

 

yes...i will tell her that she is wife...but only in name...in front of the whole world ...in front of both the families we will pretend to be husband and wife ...but she should not expect anything else from me...

 

of course i cant tell her the real reason i am marrying her...but  i have to think of something so that she keeps her mouth shut and does not tell anyone that ...

 

this is just a compromise...she will be my wife...but in name only...this is the TRUTH...and whether she will believe it or not...she has to accept it...

 

i will not let anyone destroy my dreams...and if by marrying her i get to fulfill them then i am ready for it...

 

my dreams are more important to me...i have to prove it to them and for that i will do everything possible...

 

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KASTUR's POV


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hope u all liked it..

 

if u did press the like button n leave a comment..😃

 

if u don't then let me know 'so that I can improve'😊

 

will be waiting'😍

 

n will be back with katur's pov.😳.


love 


Jyoti

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ofcourse I remember  you! 🤗 
 
Fantastic write up, will be waiting for Kastur's POV. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheila1990

Ofcourse I remember  you! 🤗 

 
Fantastic write up, will be waiting for Kastur's POV. 😊


aww...thnx sheila ...for remembering me...🤗

glad u liked it...😳

kastur's pov will come soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

thnx shivu...🤗
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Originally posted by: azna

That was good 😊


thank you azna ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!!!! this was a great os for mohan POV (point of view right??)!!!
im new on this forum and started watching it recently ... so yeah won't remeber you (lolol) .. not active member but come on when i get a chance ... but yeah will be waiting for kastur's pov soon .. keep wrting .. this was perfect!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
areyyy def i remember u jyo
and awesome OS loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
very very nice& fabulous os 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good Job Jhoti ! ( :
Loved the OS .. It felt as if those words were stealin' off of
Mohan's mind .. 😉
He's not a bad person but all the circumstances make him look like a bad person . 😒
Hope to see Kastur's soon. (:Edited by sparkling-star - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent jyoti...👍🏼 bt whrs kastur's pov... hey continue soon yaar...😊