FF-Kayamat se Kayamat tak Chappy 9- pg 55*** - Page 43

Ok I read the whole ff again as I.forgot the whole story lol. First of all u are not the worst writer, I love ur fun filled writings!!!
update was awesome
so Alina ki entry finally
wow story is getting more intersting now.
plz continue soon wanna read next update and do pm me ok. I think like button not working so sorry for that but pm me ok.

Originally posted by: --Rose--

Hmmm to Alina the Evil Vampire aapko achi lagi;-) good good:-):-) waise Pia is my fav too:-)

arey rashi ye loksy bro h...
ise to evil hi pasand ate h...

Originally posted by: loksjenny

pia pia o pia pia

and alina both acche lage

bro ko evil accha lagta h...hehehehe🤣

Originally posted by: --Rose--

yeah I m here:-)

kitni der k baad qyi m to chli gyi...hehe
just kidding wo mere yaha light chli gyi thi...

Originally posted by: --Rose--

really ? You like it:-D I m so happy:-) Thanku gits:-) okk baki ke chapters bhi pad lena... ;-) hahaha ok Ab nahi kahungi that i m a bad writer;-);-) hehehe

yes i liked it alot...aakhir tune likha h...to mujhe accha to lagega hi...
rashi kuch likhe or gitz na padhe...aisa kbhi ho sakta h kya...

superb rashi...👏

update soon...

thanx for pm!🤗

Rose soo lovely update...I love Abhay attitude😆...plzz add me ur pm list & continue asap😊

sorry yar as i am giving a very late comment as i am very busy for 2 months as I got a new job, but I like ur story very much. 😆 uf iss abhay ka bol bacchan to sab ko muskil main dal diya kidnappers se leke vampy tak

no rashi u r not worst writter...

 u write this ff very good yaar...

nice update ...

 thanks for pm ...

 update soon...

Originally posted by: --Rose--

Chapter 1---

Richands House---

( haseena sare ghar ko decorate karwa rahi hai)

Haseena'OMG abhi tak sara kaam nahi hua aur mera abhay aaj sham ko hi aa raha hai(worried)...😕

Chand ' Haseena why are you so woriied sab ho jayega sham tak' aaj hamara beta itne saal baad aa raha hai aur Tum'😕

Haseena'tumhe kya hai bus baithe baithe phone par baat karte rahte😡 ho aa jane do mere Bak-bak Boy ko fir dikhati hu tumhe'(abhay bahut jyada baate karta hai so haseena call him Bak-Bak Boy )😆

Chand'ha ha dikha dena waise bhi wo mera beta hai mera hi saath dega😃'

(then Sidharth bahar se ek bahut bada gift lata hai)

Chand- sid , beta ye kya hai??😲

Sid'Aapse matlab???(rudely)😡

Haseena- sid😡... choro tumhe samjhana to pattar par sar marna hai' Arnab-Mr Raichand Abhay nahi aaya ab tak?

Chand-Ha bus wo aane hi wala hai sid gaya hai use lene airport...

(Then Abhay and Sid enters)

 

Ok guys heres the end of chapter 1 😊 I know i m a bad writter please forgive me its my first time...

Hit the LIKE button if you like it and Please do COMMENTS guys please tell me Friends SHOULD I CONTINUE OR NOT???