Gopi n Aham home alone FF part 11 pg28updated

Since the mahaepisode promo turned out to be bleak, I had an idea for this SS

Gopi was so happy. First she had passed her exams with high marks. Next aham was very proud of her that he brought her a beautiful jewellery set. Even kokila who was against her studying was happy and was supporting aham to further educate gopi. To top it all her long time dream is coming true.

Since Dusherra holidays were about to start, this year kokila wanted to visit kasi and other religious place. Soon everyone started making decisions and finally it was arranged that, the whole modi family with the shah's would go for a weeklong vacation. The surprise segment was, even aham seemed to accept the proposal of joining the family. So here they were preparing to depart that evening by train.

Kokila entered gopi's room and said " gopi vahu, have you packed very important thing.

Gopi; yes maaji

Kokila: I have something important to tell you gopi vahu. I have arranged to book a cabin for only you and aham alone. So I want you to behave and try to win his heart completely by the end of the whole week."

Gopi blushed and said: je maaji I will try my best not to disappoint you.

Unknown to them rashi was outside listening to it. She was angry and began to think how to separate gopi and aham. This time she wanted to do a kalakari without her mother's help and prove she is the daughter of urmila.

Soon the modi mansion was in chaos. Things had to be packed and placed in the car, list of things to be done at home had to be checked. No one had time to look for the other. They were joined by the shah family which added to more confusion. Finally aham put his foot down and said that they were getting late for the train and had to start immediately. While the luggages were placed in the car and things were arranged, rashi went to gopi and said

Gopi have you taken care of the storeroom? Have you placed traps for rats and medicine for cockroachs?

Gopi nodded no. so rashi told her to go and do it before they all start.

While gopi was in the store room rashi slowly shut the door from outside and locked it. With a victorious smile she went outside and told Hetal that she has locked every room so they can start.

(I m typing to next part will update it soon.)

part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1799969?pn=4

part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1799969?pn=7

part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47096749

part 6

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1799969&TPN=13�

part 7

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1799969&TPN=16�

part 8

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1799969&TPN=19�

part 9

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1799969&TPN=21�

part 10

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1799969&TPN=25�

part 11

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Edited by shruthi2010 - 12 years ago

Thanks. After watching today's episode and the maha episode promo ur Ss has made my day. Thank u

hay this is lovely!! pls post the next part soon!! i'm looking forward to reading it!!😳

hey update soon...i love your ss!!! 

Lovely ss can't wait to read the next part!

thank for lovely ss 

hey really nice part dear please do update soon

Thanks for your comments friends. I always thought that if gopi and aham were left alone without any interference they would solve their problems. So this SS was born from that idea.

part 2

Kokila was worried whether they will ever catch their train. It had taken them more time to pack the luggages, get settled and finally start. Only when she had taken her seat she realized that she had climbed into the car were the whole shah family was sitting. She had expected to find gopi there and was shocked. She turned towards aham and questioned: aham were is gopi vahu

Rashi replied: kakiji wo, she is with mummyji in the front car.  Kokila stared at her and turned back. Unfortunately, they were caught in a traffic jam.  They had just 30 min to reach the station. More than kokila it was rashi who was praying that they should reach the station. urmila could not understand rashi's tenseness. She could not question her in front of kokila and decided to talk later.

With lot of confusion the Modi family reached the station just 10 min before the train's departure. They had to run and all they could do is climb the coaches with bags and baggage's. While everyone was busy, aham's phone began to ring. At first he ignored it and was helping his mom and others. But the constant ring disturbed him and he had to attend it. Slowly his calm expression turned into anger.

He said: I will be there in another 15 min" and cut the call.

He turned to kokila: mom there is a serious problem at our office I have to go immediately.

Kokila: but aham, what out this trip.

Aham: mom don't worry after finishing it I will try to take the next train or reach there by tomorrow. Don't worry. Just inform kakaji. I will call him and you later.

Without another word, he left her.

At Modi mansion Unaware that she had been locked, gopi completed her task with a dreamy smile. She could nt help blushing thinking that she will be with aham in a separate cabin. Slowly she came towards the door and opened it. But the door would nt open. She tried with all her force. Nothing happened. Soon she realized that she was locked and started to shout." Maaji, ahamji, rashi ben" nothing happened. Suddenly the whole house went dark. Gopi was terrified and began to cry and bang the door. Slowly she began to lose consciousness and fainted on the floor.

will ahem find her???

Originally posted by: kitty.pooni

will ahem find her???

thanks for the update please continue soon

i will try to do it today or tomorrow.