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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2...

When Heer came into conscious she was in the hospital. Her one hand and foot was injured. Pain of the injury was unbearable.She fainted again.

After one week I again came to conscious nd started thinking abt my family. Whoever i asked no one knows abt dem. With lots of crying my tears had dried.I found tat I was in some sort of camp where all the injured people were present.

Then only i saw a girl...

i asked her..."sister,yeh kn si jagah hai?,IS dis my ambala??"

she was shocked nd was looking at me nd took hold of my hand and made me stand infront of a man...

"actually,mein ney in sey poocha keh yeh kn si jagah hai bt i think in ko samajh nhi ayi..."

MAn"yeh this is Bombay"

heer"bt i live in ambala"

man"bt that city has been totally destroyed so all the injured people had been brought here"

heer"but my family????" with tears...

MAn"jus hope tat dey r f9..."

Nd man goes frm there...all those words fell on heer as the books from the shelf falling on her...

A lady standing aside was staring at me...nd suddenly reached me..."Tm kahan ki ho??kahan sey ayi ho?koi rishtey daar...???

heer"i am HEER...mein ambala sey hoon nhi koi nhi mil raha"
 
lady"kuch khaya"

heer"nhi"

lady"ohh mera bacha chalo mere saath us camp mein"

HEEr started walking behind her nd upon reaching tat camp she found many girls who had lost there parents...

the LADY WAS DALJEET...

We had stayed in tat camp 4 2 days...only wen DAljeet came nd asked us to move frm dis city...all the girls started following her nd me meher nd sanjo who were kind of best frends started following her...
 
we three used to share our sorrows...
 
Finally after a long travel we reached LODHIANA...
 
DAljeet was a nyc lady she used to care abt us alot...
 
ONe day i asked her tat i wan to contact my brother as he was in delhi bt she scolded me nd made me shut by saying tat if YOU TALK ABT IT AGAIN so it wont b nyc 4 u...
 
I told everything to sanjo nd meher...
 
SANjo"WAT???...so stupid of her bt we want to find our family"
 
MEher"ya...bt y she scolded??"
 
HEER"same here...i also didnt understood it..."
 
ONE nyt DAljeet asked all the to keep our belongings ready...by tomorrow cuz we wud be leaving
to KOLKATA...
 
BT on de same nyt...
 
I waked nd i need water to drink bt the jug was empty...so i went outside the room nd saw
 
DAljeets room was lightened...nd she was talking to some one ...
bt i ignored it nd was abt to take another step wen i heard my name been taken...
 
I stopped there nd listened to them nd WAS LEFT SHOCKED...
.ND SO U GUYS R...

wid luv SAIRA...

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Edited by saira_96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wow u updated 😃
glad to see your 2nd update 🤗
do heer is bombay...interesting
want to read more..pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: kiran_28

wow u updated 😃
glad to see your 2nd update 🤗
do heer is bombay...interesting
want to read more..pls cont soon 😃

 
i have updated lil of bit more u can read it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: saira_96

 
i have updated lil of bit more u can read it...😊

thank u so much for updating more...😃 now eagerly waiting to know whats wrong with this daljeet 😡
Thank u so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
thanks for the update and the pm...

loved the update ... amazing and awesome

eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
awesome update ...
tooo good ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nice update n waiting 4 the next part ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Hey Saira ðŸ˜ƒ

Welcome back ðŸ¤—

pg 7
You left us hanging ðŸ˜² So what's DJ planning ðŸ˜•
Obviously she's not truthful to the trio , at least the friends are together.
Wonder what other things happened in the camp. 
Little more detail would make it more interesting.

If you like to continue, I'd look forward to see your next ch.
Thanks for informing and updating for us.

All the best!