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Posted: 12 years ago

Dilwale dulhe😆 le jayenge (New version of DDLJ on dakshna)- fiction-

Hey guys

I am so pissed off with current track, like u, thought of coming with something new.Romance and cute FF;s part is being taken care of very well,so I thought of lil more intense fiction..😉.I made a different post as I dont want to be kabab ki haddi in cute and romantic FF''S with this serious one and one more reason..it has all other characters of SSBN than dakshna..I thought seperate post would be more appropriate

Here we go😛

Part 1

Background of the story

Ayi came to know about dakshna's love, but dakshna are not aware of this.Ayi takes a promise from naina asking her to go way from dakshs life, as its too late(KYUNKI SHAADI KA DATE KARREB AA RAHA HAIN),but tells daksh shouldn't know this as he will never agree for this (ayi is under sohini effect and all this drama happens after psycho leaves from PH after doing enough damage, no ekta mata's track)

.Naina first resists but gives up and agrees to it( sacrifice bhoot), but she says she needs some time as she can't end relation just like that and ayi agrees, and asks her to do this ASAP.Naina tries to do this by avoiding daksh intially

As per vachan naina starts avoiding daksh.Daksh gets mad ( common)

.A lil confrontation

Daksh keeps waiting on terrace but naina doesn't turn up.He calls her lot of times, but no responsejust then he sees naina's office light is on.so he goes there

He opens the door and finds naina doing her work

Daksh; acha to tum yaha ho..mein tumhara terrace par wait kar rahatha.Kamse kam call tho lift karti.Itna bhi busy mat ho javo ki tumhare paas mere liye waqt nahi hai

Naina doesn't respond

Daksh' naina mein tumse baat kar raha hoo.

.still no response and naina continues with her work.Daksh gets angry and he closes the file naina is working on

Naina; daksh, kya kar rahe ho?

Daksh; mein kya kar raha hoo? tumhe pata bhi tum kya kar rahi ho.Mein kabse tumse do pal baat karne ke liye taras raha hoo aur ek ho tum ki tumhe tho meri parwa hi nahi

Naina; aisi baat nahi hain daksh..bas kuch kaam tha

Daksh comes closer takes naina hands into his and says naina..mera bhi kaam hai lekin tum mere liye sabse pehli aati ho.sabse pehle.❤️.Tum jaante hona ki ye paagal tumse kitna pyar karta hai..😛

Naina gets lost but remembers ayi vachan and releases her hands from daksh and says bahut raat ho chuki hain..hume sona cahaiye

Daksh; haan tho phir maine kab manakiya..chalo sote hain😆😆

Naina; daksh...

Daksh; okay sorry baba,mazzaq tha..kya naina pehle kaam, phir neend...do min bhi teek tarah baat nahi karpaya,, nahi.pele tum mere saath thoda waqt bitavo..phir jayenge..do din se dekh raha hoo, tum tho mujhe avoid karne par lagi ho

Naina is lil surprised thinking if daksh got an hint of her thoughts

Daksh' arey, itna seriously mat dekho. mujhe pata hain tum mujhe avoid nahi karoge and he comes closer and with intense look and says " mein karne nahi doonga..kabhi bhi nahi", agar aisa koi plan hain tho drop kardo..samjhi..

Naina keeps looking at daksh and daksh says " agar tum mujhe aisa hi dekhte rahoge tho tumhara neend udd jayenge waise tum mere neend baut pehle cheen chuki ho...he looks at her with all that pyar in his eyes and says" I love u naina" and he hugs her. Naina starts saying love u too lekin phir rukh jaati hain

bechari..confusion mein pad gayee ki bete ka baat maanu ya uski ayi ka..kya karu??😲😲

Daksh waits for response and is disappointed on unresponsiveness of naina.

Naina; chale daksh

Daksh nods and both starts moving towards PH

Daksh; lagta hain aaj maam ka mood theek nahi hain love u nhai bola..😕

Naina walks lil ahead and says

Naina; roz bolna zaroori hain kya?ek din nahi bataya th kya hojayega

Daksh holds her hand , she turns back and daksh says; "jaan chala jayega"

Naina puts an hand on his mouth and says aisa mat kaho daksh..pls

Daksh pulls her lil closer and says, agar meri itna chinta hai tho..jaan bacha sakthi ho..tumhara haath mein hain..

Naina is completely lost, both looking into each other eyes and naina says love u daksh and hugs him with tears rolling down...daksh too hugs her

Aur ayi ussi waqt kidki mein se inn dono ko dekhthi hain

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 2

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Hug se dono iss duniya mein aate hain.😆

Daksh notices naina's tears and gets worried😕.He wipes tears with his hand and says

arey naina ,kya hua? Tumhari tabiyat tho teek hain na😲

Naina; daksh aisa koi baath nahi..bas dil bar aagaya.😃.

Daksh; ,naina ka naino mein asu😛...nahi..nahi...ye baat hame pasand nahi ayi. I am sorry tumhe rulane ke liye..iss bandhe ko maaf kardo.He holds his ears and naina stops him and says

Naina; kya kar rahe ho? iss ki koi zaroorat nahi

Daksh; takes nainas face into his hands ;tho phir ek acha sa cute sa smile dedo..jaldi jaldi..Naina gives a cute smile 😊

Daksh;ab lag rahi hona meri pyari naina..waise mein ayi ko kal hamari baat batane wala hoon.and I am sure jaise ayi ko ye baat pata chalegi,sab kuch teek ho jayega

Naina is confused and says; daksh itni jaldi kya hain?

Daksh; kya? jaldi kya hain? pehle se bahut dher hogaya ab aur nahi.Jab tak woh sonakshi😡 thi uss ne batane nahi diya ab pls tum tayar mat hojaana..

Naina;lekin daksh

Daksh; naina mein iss ke baare mein kuch nahi baat karna chahta..kal mein ayi se baat kar raha hoo bas...

THey reach their rooms, daksh looks into naina's eyes with very very deep intense look nad says

Daksh; tumhe pata hain naina, tum se door rehna mere liye kitna muskhil hota jaa raha hai😉..Bilkul baardash nahi ho raha hain ye dooriyan ab mujhse😳...he pulls naina towards him putting hand on her waist and says" bahut jadli, mein ye dooriyan khatm karne wala hoon..bahut jaldi hamesha hamesha ke liye

.He kisses her on fore head and wishes good night. Naina also says good night

Both go into their respective rooms..but both are lost in their own thoughts

Daksh;(himself) kuch tho baat hain, warna naina aisa..Pata karna padega aakhir kya baat hain

Naina;(herself) kya karu? mein kya karu? ayi ka vachan ya daksh ka pyar? mere naseeb mein dono kyu nhai hosakte kyu nahi?Hey bhagavan mere saath hi kyu aisa ho raha hai? daksh ko kaise door rakhu?waise daksh kabhi nhai manega aur woh kal ayi ko hamare baare mein batane wala hai?

Next day morning in PH

CONTD...

Hope u ppl like it😉

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may

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice story. Keep writing... Btw I'm Rashmi... coz we've nvr talked before.

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lucky yar...as usual awsum👏...absolutly luv Dakshu ke dialogs😊😊😊...

ps : pls, happily evr aftr karva do @ lst in ur FF...shocker mat dena yar CVs ki tara...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish
Lucky yar...as usual awsum👏...absolutly luv Dakshu ke dialogs😊😊😊...

ps : pls, happily evr aftr karva do @ lst in ur FF...shocker mat dena yar CVs ki tara...

Thanks yaar

Personally I dnt like tragic endings especially in a love story and in my FF...No way.It will be happies endings..so just chill😉

Hero in my FF is not like MR.Daksh patwardhan in SSBN😡., ye mera dakshu hai and he will stand up for his love😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

boy am i glad😆😆 thnku😆. vaise if i wana put up dat dat emo wala FF [😛😛😛], wer d'u suggest i put t...

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Part 3

EVerybody is busy with their own work.Ayi is in kitchen.Just then naina comes there.Ayi looks at naina, but doesn't say aword.Naina is about to say something but ayi stops her and says she need not explain anything,she believes her and she is sure naina will keep up her promise at any cost

Naina says ayi that daksh is planning to speak with her today she tried to stop him, but couldn't.Ayi asks naina to not to worry,she will speak with him, but reminds naina that marriage is just one week away and in this process of breaking relation she may need to hurt daksh.She know its painful, but she need to do this .Naina leaves from there with😕 expression

Daksh gets ready to speak with ayi but wants to have a word with naina before that.He goes into naina's room but can't find her.He calls her, number of times, but naina doesnt pick the call😡.He messages her,but no response

, with little anger he goes to find his mom.Finally he finds ayi goes near her

Daksh; ayi

Vibha notices and understands daksh is here to speak with her about naina and their relation.As usaul baat ko talne ki koshsis kar rahi hai, but dakshu is adamant

Ayi; arey chintu, tayar hogaya, mein tere liye nasta laga deta hoon

DDaksh; nahi ayi, mein aaj office dher se javunga,mujhe tujhse kuch jaroori baat karna hai

Ayi; abhi nahi chintu, dekh kitna kaam hein mujhe, shyam ko baat karenge

Daksh; nahi ayi..baat bahut jyada zaroori hein , tera kaam se bhi jyada..pls mere baat sun

Ayi; chintu, kyu itna paresan kar raha hai, maine kahana abhi nahi..shaadi ke liye sirf ek hafta bcaha hai..itni saari tayariya karni hain

Daksh; Shaadi ke baare mein tho baat karna hai,yaha nahi ayi..tu chal mere saath

He takes ayi with him into his room, closes the door

Daksh finally confesses to ayi about his love for naina and says he can't marry sonakshi as he doesnt love her.But ayi is on her jidd saying he should marry sonakshi as she loves him alot and its wrong to beark marriage at this point.If he loves naina he should not have agreed to marry sonakhsi.its his fault, now he cant take a back foot

Daksh tries a lot to convince ayi but his hearing falls in deaf ears as ayi says her final decision and leaves from there.Daksh is disappointed😕 as he felt his mother would support him and he had lot of faith in her lekin usse thodina pata hai ki uski ayi sohini ke effect mein doob gayi

Daksh is worried as he know naina will not agree to marry him without ayi's blessings.He starts thinking about his next step.He calls naina once again but no response.In dismay he leaves to his office

Naina's office

Naina is lost in her thoughts, just then aku comes there, notices naina and asks is she fine,Naina says she is fine and they both have small chat where aku expresses her feelings to naina about her marriage to ayush and says she is not happy.Naina tells her sometimes we need to make some decisiosn which may hurt us but for sake of our loved ones we need to go ahead with them.aku asks naina about daksna' a matter but naina says she has got some work and leaves from there

Evening...in PH

Daksh returns from the office and tries to find naina,bt he can't.He keeps waiting for her,calls her, goes to her office,but can't find her.Finally he goes to aku to ask about naina, aku says naina went out for some client meeting in the evening itself .may be she will be late.daksh asks whose the client aku says she dont have an idea as these days she is mostly in house

Slowly evening turns into night. its 8.00pm.Every body is done with their dinner. Naina doesn't return.Daksh gets worried and goes on calling her like mad.Every body is asleep

contd....

Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago

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Part 4

NIGHT .10.00pm PH

Naina returns PH.She enters her room turns back to close the doors.Dakshu is near the door with a Combination of daksh and KP look😡

Naina looks at him, leaves the door and goes inside. daksh comes inside her room, goes to naina( F2F)

Daksh; Naina, kaha chali gayi tum? mein kitna paresan ho raha tha..

Naina;(IN AVERY CASUAL MANNER like she is not bothered) woh client ke saath meeting tha

Daksh; haan akruthi ne bataya mujhe..lekin itn bhi fursat nahi ki ek baar call karke bata nahi sakti.Subhe se kitni baar phone kar raha hoon tumhe..lekin tum ,ek msg tho kardeti..

Naina; daksh; mein koi choti bachi nahi hoon, apna khayal khud rakh sakthi hoon,tum mere chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hey,Rahi baat phone calls ki tho hone pehle phone silent par tha, phie meeting mein hoon tho..uta nahi payee...bas

Daksh ( angry), bas?? mein yaha paagal ho raha tha aur tum keh rahi ho bas...naina tumhe kya hogaya hai? kyu aisa behave kar rahi ho

Naina; choti si baath ka issue mat banavo daksh..meine kaha tha phone karne ke liye? aur woh bhi utni baar..Tumhari galati hain.ar kya zarrorat hain itna paresan hone ki?

Daksh is shocked by the way naina is responding.He goes near her , holds her with his two hands with lot of force and says

Daksh;(WITH LOT OF PAIN IN HIS EYES) 😡😭haan teek keh rahi ho..meri galati hein, tumse pyar jo karta hoon, tumhara khayal rakhan chahta hoon..yahi meri galati hain.. aur kya poocha tumne pareshan hone ki zaroorat kya hain? zaroorat issliye hain damnit because I love u..pyar karta hoon mein tumse...khud se bhi jyada.😃.samjhi, aur maaf kijiye madam ayindha se aap ko meri taraf se koi disturbace nahi hogi...saying this

Daksh leaves room with pain and anger anf after that naina crys whole heartedly venting out her pain of hurting her loved one and loosing him😭

Daksh in his room is utterly upset with naina's behaviour and he holds the love globe, stand near his fav place(window) remembering how harsh naina was with him and healing wounds of his hr8 with naina tere sad song in back ground

Next day morning

Daksh plans to inform naina about his discussion with ayi

contd...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish
boy am i glad😆😆 thnku😆. vaise if i wana put up dat dat emo wala FF [😛😛😛], wer d'u suggest i put t...

Of course yaar, put it down..no issues..SSBN dekhne se jyada emotional turmoil kuch bhi nahi hey aaj kal😆

Uske samne sab kuch acha lagega and I really want to see ur emotional ff, kyunki romantic FF mein tho u are mindblowing👏 aur pls agar kuch chance mila pls sohini watt lagana apne FF MEIN..PLS😆😉

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi_Nair
Nice story. Keep writing... Btw I'm Rashmi... coz we've nvr talked before.

Hi rashmi..thanks

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