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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all.

I hope u all r fine. This is my first post in this forum and also my first OS in this.

I hope u like it.



My Love


Finally the day has arrived.

He is coming.

He is coming back to me.

My mohan is coming.

Oh my god, i cant believe it, after the wait of 6 years, i am going to c him.

Pata nahin wo kaise honge. pehle ki tarah hi mere mohan honge ya badal gaye honge.

Baa kehti hai ki chahe pya me kitni hi dooriyan kyun na aa jayen, pyar nahi badalta. Aur main, mere liye to wo ho sab kuch hain.

I still remember the day he went, without telling anyone. I thought that he didnt even tell me but i was wrong. He did consider me to be a part of his life and he did tell me. so what if his way of expression was different. he told me that is all that matters.

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Flashback

Bapuji...

Meri bacci. How are you?

I am fine Bapuji.

Aap kaise hain. Aur aisa kya ho gaya jo aapne mujhe yahan bulaya?

Bapuji -- self thought -- ab main tumhe kaise bataun ki mohan yahan se chala gaya. maine usse bheja. usse alvida kehne ka mauka bhi nahi diya maine.

Bapuji ...kya soch rahen hain aap?

Kuch nahi.

To phir bataiye ki mujhe yahan kyun bulaya?

Kastur...mujhe tujhse ek zaroori baat karni hai.

Sab thik to hai naa?

Haan sab thik hai.

Kastur -- self thought -- to phir mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kuch hua hai. kal raat se mujhe lag raha hai ki koi mujhse dur chala gaya hai. jaise ki itna dur ki shayad wapas na aane ke liye.

Beta wo...

Kya hua bapuji? ab mujhe darr lag raha hai. sab thik to hai naa?

Mohan chala gaya.

Kya? she felt like her whole world has collapsed. her mohan is gone. but how can that be possible. she met him just yesterday only and he didnt say anything about leaving. Tears began to form in her eyes.

Kastur. pehle meri poori baat sun. 

Mohan ki maa aur main yahi chate the ki mohan aage aur padhe, tarakki kare. mohan ki maa ye nahi chati thi ki uska beta bhi meri tarah dukan samdbhale, aur apni poori zondage aise hi bita de. Isliye humne ye faisla liya.

She was crying inside. the pain which she was feeling, nobody could understand. But she controlled herself and her emotions. She didnt want to break in front of her bapuji. she couldnt. she has to pull herself together.

Beta main jaanta hun ki jaane se pehle tu mohan se ek baar bhi nahi mil paayi. Milna toh dur, baat bhi nahi kar payi. Isiliye maine tujhe yahan bulaya.

Matlab?

Matlab, main mohan ki taraf se tere liye ek sandesh laya hun.

sandesh?

Haan wo kya kete hain angrezi mein? Message.

She turned all crimson hearing about the message. That her mohan sent her a message. That he thought about her before going away.

Kastur -- st -- jab saamne hote hain to kuch bolte nahin, aur ab bapuji ke saath sandesh bhijwaya hain. 

Kya?

Kya , kya?

Wohi bapuji?

Wohi kya?

Bapuji...

Oh ho...to meri beti sharma rahi hai..

Bapuji aap bhi naa.

Accha thik hai.

To bataiye na..

Haan haan, ab apne bapuji ka khayal kyun rahega, ab to bas mohan ne kya kaha, wo hi jaanna hai.

She just turned away and hid her face.

ussne kaha...

ussne kaha ki...

ussne khan ki kastur...

ussne kaha ki kastur to...

uff...bapuji...ab plz aisa mat kariye...

Hmmm...koi bahut utawala ho raha hai ye jaane ke liye.

She just made a face.

Accha accha, bata raha hun. Usne kaha ki kastur ko bata dena ki main wapas aaunga.

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Ever since that day, she has been waiting for him.

Waiting for him to come back.

And now he will finally be back. His love is coming back to her.




So guys, how was it. I know it was short, but i tried my best. 

If u want i can write another part, but i am not sure about it.

Do let me know how was it.

Love

Jo (Jyoti)

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 I looove it jyoti, KEEP writing 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its nice continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww update soon dear 😊.it was so cute ⭐️
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Hawww...how sweet...Champu's very cute here even if you can't really see him, and Kastur's wait is very nicely depicted...keep it up and keep  writing! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls update soon it really good!!!
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It's really good keep doing it
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Lovely post Jyoti, I liked hope to see more from you
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Awesome OS Jyo...Keep up with the rocking work!! 👏
Hope to see more soon!! 😃
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hope to see more n moerEdited by komal jagdesh - 12 years ago