first, sorry...i dint read it then... actually power gone... and then i forgot
and when i read tortures, i recalled that i dint read it...
any way
i am totally flat on your character sketching
Raja Rani names are great
but what i have suggested were also not bad haan...!
whats the mystery behind Raja ji's early death is it going to be revealed later in story
his mother was a singer and her mother an actress...interesting
please post pictures of Sameera kapoor too...
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Suhasini Aunty clearly know without Geet requests and efforts , her son would never had accepted her and the little angel. Maan not only accepted but also doing everything possible as a brother for little Abigail's sweet cute demands and dreams
who is this little angel abigail...? and why maan had to be forced and requested to accept him...and that too by Geet... whats Geet connection with the Khurana Family and Suhasini Aunty... and if they already know each other, this well that she can request or force him to do something ...why they are fighting and behaving like strangers...
yaar i am confused...
what occasion he was talking about...?
and how come Maan know about khushi's family...?
please a doubt clearance and flash back type of thing needed
one more thing... if she is a le***** why his closeness is affecting her...?
Continue soon
Waiting...
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