Os laxmi jee ( my take was close)

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Posted: 12 years ago

La: oh my hands i need a manicure ... she just walkout of the kitchen

Nani : enter kitchen found everything ready" hmmm lagta ha koi jadu ki chari mil miss Khashap ko"( i guess she found a magic stick ) she just walk back to her room

Laxmi : like always move around nani

Nani: jee laxmi jee kya baat ha  aap kuch naraz ha ...patted her

Anjali :walk in with Arnav and Shyam "Nani kya woh raha ha"

Nani: kuch nahi yeh Laxmi kuch perechan ha aaj.

Shyam: patted it

Laxmi walk out

Arnav: i am going to my room

Anjali: chota you will not have dinner.

Arnav: khaloga  baad mein just want to be alone

Mani jee: uff aagai aap Anjali

Anjali:  mami jee kya huwa

Mani jee :pacho kya nahi huwa .. bus aap humara funereal mein aata aata ragai

Anjali: why what happen?

Mami jee : uff yeh miss teep taap Kashap na to hum ko bara upsettia kya

Anjali: per huwa kya

Mami jee: humrwa murder karna wali thi woh.

Anjali: where is she ?

Mami jee : apni make up kitwa la ker beta ha ... arnav betva ka pthuher is in danger

Anjali  hum dekhta ha

Nani: aap beta Arnav dekhe laga...


La  :looking her self in mirror" uff the heat has spoil all my skin.i should apply mask before changing . it will be no use to wear a new dress  .she placed her dress on bed and she apply mask on her face , placed cucumber at her eyes and lay down.with her head phone on

Arnav: knocked at her door but didnot find any reply he walk to his room. as he knock the door open

Laxmi walk in it move here and there . it sit on  her bed on her dress .. chew it a bit..

LA: i know ASR will love to see me in this color

Laxmi: saw cucumber it add from the plate placed next to La .. .laxmi finish it  look around saw one on La eyes it clime on sofa back and try to eat... its tongue lick La fore head .

LA: ASR is that you  honey ... she felt some one touch her softly

Laxmi : could not reach  it jump on the arm where LA arms were  walk on it

LA: it is tickling ASR , why you are in such a romantic mood.

Laxmi: reached to her eyes and with picked up one cucumber and chew it ...

LA:Arnav kya ha  give me back  i just need to relax after so much cooking.

Laxmi: placed its feet on her shoulder and picked  the other cucumber...

LA: i am having  goosebumps ASR...

Laxmi: lick her nose.

LA: oh ASR..

Laxmi: sneeze maa maa 

LA open her eyes  and just shocked she could not speak for some time

Laxmi: lick her face

LA: shouted  you  i will kill you

Laxmi: got scared and pee on her... and jump on bed

LA : what the hell is this ASR..  she just could not believe.

Laxmi: legs were tangle with her shirts  and it ran out.

LA: on top of her voice ASR i will kill her  she just ran out behind her.

Arnav who was watering his plants thinking about Khushi  her house door was coming in front of his eyes again and again... he heard La voice  ran towards her room

Laxmi: reach the main hall with LA shirt sat next to Nani

LA: reached behind her " i will not leave this goat"

Arnav: kya huwa

LA: she had my cucumber  and .paused

NAni: tou aap aur lala miss khashap  kitchen mein ha

Mami jee : hello hi bye bye : waitwa i will bring

LA: she pee on me and see ..my designer clothes  she pointed at her dress on which LAxmi was sitting..

Anjali: just could not hide her smile...

Arnav: i will buy you more

LA: throw it out or i am going .

Arnav:looked at nani  'LAvanya you come with me "

LA:no you decide right now if it will stay in this home i will not.

Nani: thek ha aap ja sakthi ha miss Khashap kyun ka Laxmi ka tou yeh ghar ha

Arnav: just could not say any thing :Lavanya baat tou suno "as he saw her walking out

LA: please dont follow me i cant stay in this home..

Mami jee : saauo maam aap ki gootawa tou bari taaz ha

Nani: ha Laxmi ko insan ki pechan ha Arnav ko nahi...(laxmi can recognized people not Arnav)

i hope you guys enjoyed it ...dont forget to comment


Happy Independence day to all  

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cupoftea11 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
guess talented brains lyk u will become authors!! keep up the good work!lol and u did very good by including laxmi!
so sweet!!
very nyc!!
pls pm me if u hv more of urs!
and keep it up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was reading this one only and you pmed meπŸ˜†
it was very amazing..πŸ˜†..good oneπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good One Sweetz πŸ˜†!! interesting <3 Well done πŸ‘
thaanks for the pm Nadiyya

and happy Independance Daay to uu too πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Miss-Pakiie-KMH - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol. i did smile. really good :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lots of hugs for opening this πŸ€—

Great topic.  Laxmi is one of my favorites (if you haven't guessed already).  I just hope my other two favs ASR, mamiji get more screen together. 

ASR and Laxmi seem to be in mutual ignore mood though I don't think there is any ill will from either side.  Mamiji needs to focus on being loved by Laxmi.  Laxmi loves everyone.  She doesn't discriminate πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naddiya ji!!!!!!!
aap ne toh ahme Independence dila diya Lavanya se
LOL not me...ASRπŸ˜†

It was damn funny!!!!!
Laxmi licking lavanya
i couldn't stop laughingπŸ˜†
You are totally a born writerπŸ‘

HAPPY INDEPENDENCEDAY
To you too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
🀣 Laxmi licking La... OMG!! I really hope CVS do something
like that...it would be epic!
Lovely OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Vishwa-

🀣 Laxmi licking La... OMG!! I really hope CVS do something
like that...it would be epic!
Lovely OS...

it was hungry na ... πŸ˜† i smile i can only give you all
naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr4ever

Lots of hugs for opening this πŸ€—

Great topic.  Laxmi is one of my favorites (if you haven't guessed already).  I just hope my other two favs ASR, mamiji get more screen together. 

ASR and Laxmi seem to be in mutual ignore mood though I don't think there is any ill will from either side.  Mamiji needs to focus on being loved by Laxmi.  Laxmi loves everyone.  She doesn't discriminate πŸ€—

i was not able to find it's pic ..
i hope soarnav and mami ji come on screen .
Asr was lost as his princess has left him πŸ˜†