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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi  frnds... m new in this forum and m gonna write my first ff  in this pg. It's a love story  of  those persons, having super natural powers. i know  many of ppe's already written  on these topics bt  i just put more tadka on my story. Title of my story is SAPNA YA HAQEQUAT.

 plz read the story and  do comment and support  me frnds...


Characters are-----

  PIYA DHANRAJ  ---   ek khoobsurat neele aankhon wali ladki jise darr hai riste banane se . apne sath koi  bada raaz chupaye hue.  jiski  aankhon me sirf dard bhara hua hai kisike liye.  jo sabke liye helpful hai bt kisi baat ka credit nhi lena chahti.
  
  
CHAND DHANRAJ-  a business tycoon in all over the world. birthplace  dehradun. luv wid haseena and married with her. his married life is shot but a happy life. his daughter is  everything to him. he know some secrets about piya bt he never tell her anything abt that.
HASEENA DHANRAJ/ PAVITRA - a beautiful lady. who luv chand dhanraj bt  she can't live with him for long time. had a secret abt her and abt her daughter.  bt ahe tell everything abt her to her luv.

ABHAY SINGH RATHORE ---  ek bahut bade rajgharane ka  kunwar.  ek handsum  ladka , jise pana harr ladki ki khwaish hai. parr wo hai ki jo apne hi sapno me uljha hua hai. ek bahut hi friendly and funloving guy. jiske hathon par kata hua nisaan use hamesha pareshan karta hai.

  KABIR SINGH RATHORE ---   abhay ka  bada bhai jise sirf do chijon se  pyar hai  ek apni girl friend and dusra apne business umpire  se. lekin uski sabse badi kamjori uska apna chota bhai hai . parr is baat ko wo kabhi kisi parr zahir  nhi karta becoz of attitude problem.
  RAJBEER SINGH RATHORE ---  king of the rajgharana ,  abhay's  dad.  
  SUGANDH  RATHORE  ---  abhay's mom. totally traditional by nature  bt  can  understand the modern society. who take care of her both children bt more protective for abhay.
  
  ARNAB DOBRIAL  &  MADHU DOBRIAL  ---  one of the top business family and a very close friend of mr. dhanraj. 
   MISHA DOBRIAL  ----  younger daughter of dobrial's  and a tomboy of the  city. jise bimbo's ki band bajane me sabse zada maza aata hai.
   PANCHI DOBRIAL  ---  elder  daughter of  dobrial's . a girl who always spend her more time in front of mirror.  she is also  beautiful. very  serious  by her nature. jise sabse  zada jealousy hai piya ki  khoobsurti se.  
   A MYSTERIOUS GUY ---  it's  a secret... bt vry dangerous...
 
    BHAWANI---  head of the servants bt very closer to sugandh.
so, they are my characters . aur baaki k kirdar story k dauran...

 plz frnds read this and if u r intersted in my story  then plzzz  comment...
 
                INDEX
        character sketch - pg 1
       ch 1 -  pg 2
       ch 2 -  pg 3
       ch 3 -  pg 5
       ch 4 - pg 7
      ch 5(1)-  pg 10
       ch 5(2) -  pg 11
          ch 6-  pg 14
        ch 7 - pg 16
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Posted: 12 years ago
apne to rishto ki wat hi laga di par still gud
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice start !
Plz . . Continue & add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice start...add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arif4441

apne to rishto ki wat hi laga di par still gud



aage aage dekho hota hai kya😉 ... hehhehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sanjha😃
awesome character sketch yaar...
hey i cant even speak hindi properly yaar...par lakta hai tumara ff padkar sikh jaogi...
plz cont soon n pm me
hav a nice day
luv u
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interesting character sketch
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                                                        CHAPTER 1                                                                                                                    RATHORE'S   HOUSE :


SUGANDH {in tensed mind to their servants} -  Zaldi saaf karo , yahan  inn phulon ko change karo , ye vass khali kyun hai. Bed ache se sajao.  ye kya kar rhe ho tum jante nhi  mirror ko sirhane nhi rakha jata ye ashubh hota hai , jao ise wahan rakho.

                uff ye  ladka... kya karun me iska . pata nhi kab kya karta hai. 10 baje ki flight se aa rha hai aur is baat ki khabar abhi de rha hai.  10 baj gaye ab to flight bhi land kar chuki hogi.

                 Kabir... Kabir... kahan ho tum?


SERVANT ---  Rani sahiba ... kunwar ji chote kunwar ko lene airport gaye hain.

SUGANDH ---  to tum yahan kya kar rhe ho jao  aur jakar zaldi aarti ki thaal tyar karo. zaldi jao.

SERVANT ---  ji ranisahiba..

 Bhawani  room me aati hai aur sugandh ko pareshan dekhti hai.

BHAWANI --- arrey bitiya  kyun pareshan hoti ho. wo bada  ho gaya hai . ab wo sambhal sakta hai apne aap ko..

SUGANDH --- nhi maasi ... jab tak main use dekh na lun mujhe santi nhi milegi..  3 saal mene use  apne se , pariwar se , is jagah se durr rakha .takki uski pareshaniyan bhi durr ho jayen. par ab wo wapis yahan aa rha hai. kahin phirse uske saath wahi hua to...

BHAWANI (sugadh k  kandhe par haath rakhte hue)--- chinta na karo . ab use wo sapne nhi aate honge.  chalo ab pareshan hona band karo aur apne bete ke aane ka swagat karo.

SUGANDH( ek halke se smile k sath)--- han maasi ...  janti ho aaj sab uski pasand ka banaya hai. khoob khilaungi usko... aane to use . aankhen taras gayi hain use dekhne ko.


  IN AIRPORT 

  { Dehradun airport  ----Delhi se aane wale sabhi yatriyon ka dehradun me sawagat hai. Is flight me  safar  karne k liye aapka sabka dhanyavad.}

    airport k bahar  , ek stylish BMW  aakar rukti hai. jis mese ek bahut handsome , black eyes apni rolex  watch and  apne  shut  ki buttons lagata hua  car se bahar nikalta hai. 

  A PERSON (mr. saxena)--- hello mr. kabir ...  rathore umpire  ka  waris...  glad  to meet u  mr. kabir ...

  KABIR --- me too mr. saxena...

   SAXENA --- aap yah kaise  mr.kabir. kisi ko  receive karne aaye hain?

 KABIR ---  han ...  mera chota bhai Abhay aa rha hai. use lene aaya hun. uski flight land kar chuki hai.


  airport se bahar  nikalta  hua  ek handsome ladka ,  jisne black jeans  black shirt and black overcoat  pehne hua tha. jis par  sabhi ladkiyon ki nazar mudd jati hai.  jiski silky light brown hairs ,  bhoori aakhen  sab ladkiyon ko deewana bana deti hai. 

   Abhay bahar nikalta hai aur apne bade bhai ko  dekhkar khusi se uski taraf  dodta haiapna laugage chodkar.  aur use hug karne ki kosish karta hai. 
 Bt  kabir ek bade bhai ki tarah abhay ko apna seriousness dikhata hai. aur usse bahut  seriously baat bhi karta hai. abhay jab use hug  karta hai to wo do kadam piche ho jata hai.
  

ABHAY(hasta hua) --- wassup big bro???

KABIR --- WAIT ...( do kadam piche hadhta hua)
 
ABHAY (apni hasi  band kar deta hai) ---  hmmm.....

KABIR ---  kaise ho tum?

ABHAY ---  acha hun

KABIR ---   graduation complete ho gayi tumhari ? ab aage kya karne ka irada hai?

ABHAY(masti wali hasi dete hue) ---  kya karunga apni mastery karunga aur aapko pareshan karunga.

 phir dono bhai  zorse haste hain aur ek dusre ko  ek tight hug karte hain.

KABIR(abhay k  sarr par hath rakhkar muskarta hua) --- tu nhi sudhrega. ab tak masti chal rhi hai. ghar chal maa tera intezar kar rhi hai.

 phir dono bhai car baith jate hain. Driver laguage lekar aata hai aur diggy me rakh kar car chalata hai.

 ABHAY --- kitne saalon baad dehradun aaya hun. bahut miss kiya aap sabko maine. dad nhi aaye airport.

 KABIR ---  han ... dad meeting k liye US gaye hue hain wo kal aa jayenge. tum batao kitni ladkiyon ka  dil todkar aaye ho london se?

 ABHAY ---- hmmm ... hongi yahin kahin. 1 2 3 4...   srry lost the count... hahahhahah

  us waqt car ek jungle se guzar rhi hoti hai. par abhay sudden car k bahar zhakta hai aur jungle ki taraf dekhta hai  aur bahut ghabra zata hai. ghabrahat k mare uske  forehead me pasina aa jata hai... par uski nazar bahar jungle ki taraf hi hoti hai. kabir  abhay ki halat dekhta hai aur car k window band kar deta hai.

 KABIR --- abhay r u ok??

 ABHAY --- HAN BRO ... HAN main thik hun.....

 bt abhay mann hi mann sochta hai ki ye kya tha. aisa kya tha wahan jise dekhkar main ...


   

 
Edited by Sanjha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey frnds my 1st chap is update... do comment.....😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...it was a cute update...i liked it...thanks for pm..

write FF in front of sapna and haqeeqat...so that people comes to knw that its a fan fiction...

update soon...i will be waiting