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Posted: 11 years ago

 Part 4   

On Other Hand:

Abhay and Maithli's Side:

Abhay want to apologize with Maithli. They are searching Pia.

Abhay: Maithli! Past main jo kuch b hua main us k liye maafi mangna chahta hun'. plz forgive me.

Maithli: Main pehle b keh chuki hun k mujhe tumse kisi b bare main koi baat nai karni'.. don't you understand??? Jo karne aaye ho wo karo Pia ko dhoondo.

Abhay sigh.

Agni and Abhilasha's side:

Abhilasha quietly walk with Agni and searching Pia too. Agni ignore her, he call Pia's name again and again, he look too worried.

Abhilasha: Don't worry she will be fine.

Agni ignore her words and keep calling and searching Pia. Tears rolloing in Abhilasha's eyes.

On Other Hand:

Pia: Plz batao na kya vampires hote hain???

Mysterious Girl: What's ur point of view or thought or believe???

Pia: Nai hote.

Mysterious Girl: Rite! Sab kitabi baatein hain par tum kyun puch rahi ho???

Pia: Kya wo dono jhoot bol rahe the???

Mysterious Girl(irritatingly): Aisa kya kaha hai un dono ne? Tum batati kyun nai ho? Kua kiya un dono ne tumhare saath?

Pia: Arnab uncle pachta rahe the k unhone apne faide k liye mujhe dao par laga diya. Wo keh rahe the k'.. (crying again)

Mysterious Girl hug her and console her.

Pia: k unhone mujhe meri maa se is liye alag kiya ta k wo apni ki gayi ghalti ki bharpai kar saken. Unhone chura k mujhe is liye paala k waqt aane par meri bali charha den.

Mysterious Girl: Bali charha den matlab? Kala jaadu?

Pia: Nai! Mujhe vampires ki ek family k hawaley karna chahti hain Madhu masi aur wo log mujhe dhoond rahe hain. Wo mujhe maar denge.

Mysterious Girl shocked.

After few minutes:

Mysterious Girl (in stunned voice): Vampires nai hote sab bakwaas hai.

Pia: Wo log raat ko khamoshi se vampire wala jhoot kyun bolenge???

Mysterious Girl: Hosakta hai tumhe dara rahe hon. Metz ne b to unhen daraya tha. Jay prank'.. yaad hai?

Pia: Oo haan! Par tumhe kaise pata k Priya di Dobriyals ko darati rehtin hain???

Mysterious Girl didn't answer just smile.

Mysterious Girl: Relax Pia! Kuch nai hai.

Pia: Aur agar such hua to???

Mysterious Girl: Not at all, so be relax. I'm with you o.k. Just relax aur ghar jao tumhari family pareshan horahi hogi.

Pia smile: Oh God! Bhaiyyu aur Priya di'.. par mujhe raasta nai pata.

Mysterious Girl: I'm with you dear, lets go.

Pia ko apne sir se ton weight hat'ta hua mehsus hua. Now she is relax and walk with Mysterious girl.

 

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After Half Hour:

Metz was worried. Abhay look at her.

Abhay: Plz don't worry.

Tears rolling in her eyes.

Metz: Wo nai mil rahi. Pata nai kahan hogi. Mujhe darr lag raha hai kahan hogi wo???

Abhay: Mil jayegi pareshan na hon.

Metz(worriedly): Abhay wo thek hogi naa???

Abhay console her: Wo bilkul thek hogi hum jald dhoond lenge Pia ko.

Metz: Hum alag ho k dhoondte hain Pia ko.

Abhay: Lekin aap akele jungle main'.

Metz interrupt: Main apna khayal rakh lungi mujhe bas Pia ki chinta hai.

Abhay: As you say.

Both move in opposite direction.

 

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On Other Hand:

Abhilasha sit on a small stone. She feel pain in her feet. Agni turn and look at her and came towards her. He sit infront of her.

Agni: Are you o.k???

Abhilasha: Hmmm.

She look at him. Agni embarrassed for a while.

Abhilasha: You know what' Tum mujhe buhat ache lagte ho.

Agni (serious): Mere khayal se Pia ko jald se jald dhoondna chahiye, raat kahin gehri na hojaye.

He stand and start walking.

Abhilasha: Kisi k liye zindagi ki khushiyon se mun morna thek nai hai.

He stop and turn.

Agni (unfathomably): Excuse me???

Abhilasha: Aapki zindagi se aapki dost chali gayi aap accept karte kyun nai??? Zindagi ek larki pe khatam to nai hojati naa'.. Aap aage''

Agni move aggressively towards her.

Agni (in stern voice): Shut up! Just shut up. (holding her from shoulders) How dare you??? Who the hell are you??? Han??? Don't you dare interfare in my personal life'

Abhilasha (crying): You hurt me.

Agni look at his own hands and push her back in another second. She was crying.

Agni (irritatingly): Ro chuki ho to chalo Pia ko dhoondna hai mujhe.

He said and start walking. She folloe him and wipe her tears.

 

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Abhay look here and there. He saw a shadow. He was far from that shadow.

Abhay (whisper): Ye koun hai???

Abhay ne chup k uss saaye ko dekha. Wo saaya kisi cheez pe jhuka hua tha. Abhay ahista ahista qareeb gaya, ab manzar saaf hogaya tha. Wo koi kaala chogha pehna hua tha. Sir se paun tak lamba chogha. Abhay afraid for a while but he decide to saw that person. He move forward silently. Abhay itna aagey aaya k uss kale choghey wale pe Abhay ka saaya para. Wo choghey wala utha aur turn hua.

Abhay eyes wide and mouth open coz of shocked. Uska saans uppar ka uppar aur nichey ka nichey reh gaya aur kaale choghey wala b ek dam shocked ho k apni jag ape jama reh gaya.

 

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On Other Hand:

Pia saw Metz. She run towards her, Metz too run. Both hug each other.

Metz: Kahan chali gayi thin???

Pia: Kuch nai bas''.

Metz: Chalo ghar chalo'.. Hum sab pareshan hogaye the.

Pia: Hum dono b ghar ki taraf hi aa rahe the.

Metz: Hum dono??? Koun???

Pia: Ye meri friend aur koun' (she turn)

No one there.

Pia (surprisingly): Arey abhi to yahin thi'.

Metz (sigh): Lets go Pia.

Pia confuse about that girl. She move with her sister.

 

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Precap:

Will update soon''.. Till then keep thinking and keep guessing...😉

Edited by annokhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow great story's plz update soon
i can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh abhay ne aisa kya dekh liya...??
thank god piya mil gayi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
annokhi tum aur tumhare updts sachme annokhe hai 😊 and u know what ur one of my favourite writer and i love this ff too much. so pls updt soon and thanks for the pm. 😃 btw i am mampi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
god
ab abhay ne kisse dekha
poor abhilasha
and vampire 
pia to vampy family me hi jaa rahi hai
loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
abhay ne kisko dkh lia ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice, fantastib, fabulous, interesting... par plz update soon... u left at handcuffed... ab jaldi update karna kyoki story aur bhi interesting ho rahi hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
ohh good piya is save now
wonder what abhay seen now ?
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
what abhay plz update quickly n if sid is vampire but abhay is not exp thT also
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow nice update
Finally they found piya 
Arnab madhu wanna sacrifice piya to the vampires disgusting people ðŸ˜¡ they could have sacrifice their own daughter.
What did abhay see I guess his mom or dad or brother as a vampire?
I wonder why Thea mysterious girl asked piya does she believe in vampires?
If piya said yes I wonder what the mysterious girl would have said 
I guess it is time for revelation of vampire existence
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon