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KamalikaG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Wow this is an interesting start! So what happens next does Maan come in and save our Geet!😳

Awesome update and thanks for the pm!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: KamalikaG

Wow this is an interesting start! So what happens next does Maan come in and save our Geet!😳

Awesome update and thanks for the pm!😊

hmmm keep looking for more update
thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Hey dat was a really nice start and precap sounds interesting do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
nice part...

seems like geet went through a tragedy.

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thankyou all for your support here is the update hope you like it
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Part 2:

Meera wasn't having any luck. In a hotel as big as this one , it seemed incomprehensible that no one could help her . She was beginning to get agitated when she spotted a man in coveralls and felt a wawe of relief.

Poor geet must be frantic by now.

Excuse me? Meera said and took hold of his arm.

An oil-smudged face with twinkling chocolate brown eyes looked down at her more so in anger

Yes .? The man asked rather rudely freeing his arm from her.

I have an emergency upstair and I need you to grab your tools . me frnd is stuck in the bathroom. You have got to hurry she is claustrophobic.

My , ah ,tools. The man said with a note of amusement are umm downstairs I will get them you go up just tell me the room no.

Umm it's 608 plz hurry

You go I will take the stairs to get my tools.

Geet could feel the twisted metal binding her body to the small enclosure in the bacl of the plane.

She had been 16 when the crash occurred killing her parents and ruining her life.At what seemed liked hours she cd hear rescue vehicles approaching. It was a helpless feeling lying their helpless . not able to move in pain. And knowing that the parents were dead.and wondering when will the plane consume fire..

Geet had never been the same after accident., clustrophbia was one of the outcomes.and 3 yr of rehabilitations for her shattered left leg.

Lying on the cold white marble floor she fought to stay awake.

Geet

She could slightly hear that voice

Hmm a soft moan escaped her lips.

Geet don't worry help is coming…oh wait he is here . he is gonna take you out in a mint just sit tight.

Geet forced herself to sit up but did not have enough strength

Geet...  geet tu thk hai meera rushed to her

How about you make bed for her I will bring her out

Right meera left for room

He holded her

Sorry it's my phobia.

Don't worry about it  he said with a warm smile.

Geet felt her stomach lurch

He was about to pick up when she said wait I think I m going to be sick and then rushed to toilet

He never hesitated pullin geet to his left side and let her vomit in the toilet while holding her hairs with other hand

What's taking you two

Nothing just coming.

He washed her face lifted her and brought her to the room

The scent of musky cologne  and oil filled Geet's nose.

Thankyou . as he put her in bed

I am Geet

He smiled call me maan

She smiled and closed her eyes

Maan stood there for a moment how can he share a moment like this with a strange woman. as if her eyes had held him captive.

He went to the bathroom door and fixed it.

Meera came from back

I have never seen such bad service before.

Having problem?

If I hadnot come down and get you geet wd still be in bathroom.

I guess I will let the management know

I already plan too. That owner is so talked about and he doesn't even bother to check his own hotel.

I will see to it that maintainace guys know it. And I will check back for your frnd she seems like an interesting woman

Hold it there mister. She is an ice she just live in her apartment all day listening to music.

Doesn't she work?

She doesn't have too. Bet that makes her more attractive isn't it.

Maan did not take any offence

Just let me know if you guys need anything else.

And left the door

 

PRECAP:

  dinner😳😳😳😳

ana56 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
 wow me first to comment
lovely update

 i loved it
Edited by ana56 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
first of all sorry for late response...just read both the parts...
 
freaking awesome...i bet Maan is the owner...ha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
great part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
I bet the owner is Maan. I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update and PM!