FF- Until You Came: Ch2 "Just Away" pg 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: KriYa_life


Promo-


Pratigya stomped out of the room, "What the hell does he think of himself? He thinks I cant do it.. Haah.. Wait and watch Mr. Krishna Singh, I'll show you what I am.."

Khushi- "Oh relax Pratigya, Its your first day at work, Im sure you will do well. Take it easy. Very soon, you'll come to know about Krishu's attitude."

However, Pratigya knew that she had to try her best to gain his attention. On the other hand, Krishna tried various ways to bring her down and irritate her.
"15 days.. and you're out, Miss Pratigya Saxena", he smirked as he watched her go away.




kaa bay promo hi deti rahoo
update kroo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
seems to be very interesting... jaldi jaldi update karbo yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
update karbo yar waiting for asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Wow!its gng IPKKND way!waiting fr d 1st chap to gt updatd. .jaldi update karbo na yaar


Azi darling..
Its nt IPKKND way.. Wait for few updates, u'll come to knw everythng.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
update coming in a few mins..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
This is my first update dedicated to my Toofaan..

Love you..😉

Chapter 1

The Beginning

Kesar paced to & fro desperately waiting for them.

"Its 1 am  & yet these two havent returned. What am I supposed to do?"

Shyam ji who had seen the door open, decided to take a look.

"Arent u sleepy child?"

Kesar- "No Papa, I thought I'd just finish off my work"

Shyam smiled- "And what about my angels?"

Kesar gulped- "Err.. Papa, they're asleep. I think we shouldnt disturb them."

Shyam was confused- "But I just wanted to see.."

Kesar- "Papa.. Unhe kal bhi toh dekh sakte hai na.. Chalo gud Nite"

Kesar managed to divert Shyamu by sending him away. She turned towards the window only to find her naughty sisters creeping in.

Kesar whispers- "What took you so long? Dont you know the time?"

Komal- "Oh Come on Di, Would u mind opening the door and taking us in. Its freaking cold out here."

Kesar- Really? I thought you'd enjoy the chill"

Pratigya- Di, Please."

Kesar- " Fine!!"

She let them in. All three of them rushed upstairs.

Komal jumped on the bed-"Whoppee."

Kesar stormed at her- "Get off MY Bed."

Komal- "Relax honey."

Kesar glared- "If Papa ever found out about all this, You'd be grounded."

Komal- "Ahh.. I know u wudnt let him"

Kesar shot back- "You bet" with that she threw a cushion which Komal dodged. Komal ran out of the room- "You missed."

Kesar watched Pratigya looking out of the window. "Whats the prob Baby sis? U look lost?"

Pratigya- "Umm.. Nothing Di. I need some rest" Kesar- "Sure sweetheart. Gud night"


Back in pratigya's room.

Pratigya however cudnt sleep. She kept thinking about the events in the party. She didnt know why but she just could not get that out of mind. Her mind raced thinking about the stranger she met a couple of hours ago.

  Flashback

Pratigya- "Its fun out here."
Komal grinned, "Yup" as she gulped down two shots.
Pratigya- "you'll never improve. Wait till I tell Papa.."
Komal smiled mischievoulsy- "Tell Papa? Ahh, I know you wont, darling."
Aman-"hey Prats, why dont you join us?"
Pratigya gleefully agreed.


Pratigya noticed someone sitting at the corner of the bar.
"A new dude.."smirked Pratigya as she made her way towards the stranger.

Aman-"It'll be a waste of time honey. He's Krishna Singh."

Pratigya raised her brows- "wait & watch"

She confidently made her way towards Krishna who was engrossed in his drink as if he found solace in it. Pratigya made herself comfortable beside him.

"Hmm.. Can i join u?"

Krishna didnt answer & continued sipping his drink. So she tried again but this time getting a lil touchy. She trailed her finger down his cheek. He just got angered & walked away.

Pratigya followed him calling out his name. But he ignored her & just kept walking.

"Hey, wait.."

But Krishna just strode away. After continual attempts. Pratigya just pulled him towards her. Her sudden pull caused Krishna to lean on her. He quickly composed himself.

She looked at him and was completely taken aback.  She was awed at the stranger. She seemed to be completely lost in his eyes. Eyes, she had never seen before. There was sumthng in them that just kept her glued to them. No one had ever captured her to such an extent that she'd almost be engulfed in it.

It seemed like eternity & Pratiya was still in trance. She didnt knw for how long she stood there until she was called by Komal.
 
"hey Prats.. We're late sis."

Pratigya turned around and within a fraction of a second, he disappeared.


Commentbo jaldi..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
kaya baat hay⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 😳
sweet lovely short update 👏
pls add krishna more 😳
i mean both , akaely 😍 romantic moments 😳
Thanx for the updates 😃
 
Edited by Mitaly.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
WOW!!!!, Superb Ramona, jaldi update dear... hw long we need to wait fr their next meeting????☺️Luved it... i luv ur style of writing... Bravo...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
wow lovely update krishna is so handsome and arogent
finaly you update thank you(infinite times) for updating so pls updating regularly pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Interesting... Give regular updates yaar...