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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amiee

very beautifully penned cant wait to read more

Glad u liked the update dear...😊...Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Davi

Loved it ashima! Priya needs to understand that the ring is where it should be. She shouldnt even try to take it off. Im amazed at the precap, cant wait for your next part. Thanx for the pm

Glad u liked the update dear...😊...Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it...😳I am thinking of merging next part with yesterday's episode hope u likeπŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsome update i wonda wa raams gna do nw

cont soon x

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avivakirk

 Lovely update Ashima! love the way the story is churning out! Hmm the ring stuck to Priya's finger and her frantic attempts to take it off.Very interesting!.

 
Curious to know more!Great job!

Glad u liked the update dear...😊...Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it...yaa try try until u believe it is meant to be there!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜³
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: narangi_77

Nice one Ashima! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘


Loved the precap - glad to see Vikram taking an active role in your ff - i miss him, he seems to have receded a bit this past week.

Glad u liked the update dear...😊...Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it...😳Hmm even i wish that ekta used more of vikram's charecterπŸ˜›He is a true friendπŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shanti05

Very nice, Its like watching  a double dose of BALH  thanks update soon

Glad u liked the update dear...😊...Next part asap...Hope u keep reading it...😳Double dose of BALH thank u!...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
Later that evening everyone is gathered in the hall of sharma's house..priya wanted it to be a private affair and so the function was being held at their place itself..everyone from the kapoor family was also there..😊

PRIYA CAME IN WITH aisha and as she walked with her little sister..her eyes scanned the entire place until her eyes caught a glimpse of the man..who all of a sudden seemed close to her existence..she keeps staring at him as ram went on talking and laughing with vikram and karthik..the song plays in the background ..😳

~ Do pal ruka khwabon ka carvan..aur phir chal diye..tum kahan hum kahan..do pal ki thi dilon ki dastaan..aur phir chal diye tum kahan hum kahan~😳

Priya reaches where vineet was and ram too walks to stand just behind priya..and seeing priya lost in her own thoughts shipra says-priya beta haath aagey kar..

HOLDING HER HAND shipra brings it fwd only to gasp in surprise seeing it bandaged..priya whose eyes were fixed only on ram notices him worried and concerned..and not knowing why but his presence around made her..somehow feel..SAFE AND SPECIAL..😍

shipra's voice breaks into her thoughts as she hears her say-yeh kaise hua priya..πŸ˜•

EVERYONE WAITED TO hear her..aisha speaks up saying that she got hurt.shipra lets out a nervous chuckle and bringing fwd her other hand she fumbles-arre..toh..toh kya hua..iss haath mein pehna do..VIKRAM HURRIEDLY walks into the hall and upto ram..😲

PRIYA could feel vineet hold her hand and as she looks up she finds ram walking away with vikram..and priya could feel her heart sink..iskey baad everythng happens like it did in the show till priya's brilliant emotional outburst!β­οΈπŸ‘

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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful part pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very nice updt... continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update! 
Your stories are sooo much better than what they're showing...i'd rather read this than watch the asinine situations that are being shown to us in the name of entertainment...