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Posted: 12 years ago
OS BROTHERHOOD
Ok this is my 2nd OS & I dedicate this 2 archi as she asked me 4 one OS on Abhay & Sid.I hope I'll b able 2 do justice wid their character as 2gether they r fire.
 
The night was more dark than usual as if it has hidden many unwanted secrets as if something dangerous was on the way.It was a night of final destination.THE END...
Abhay was on his way 2 purana khandar.Fate,destiny whtever name u wnt 2 give was pulling him 2 his past which he never wished 2 visit,which was evn worst than nightmares,which used 2 haunt him,which snatched his beloved & more importanat his lovingly brother.
His heart became heavy whn he reached the main lawn of the purana khandar.All past memeories revive agn in his mind.It seems as if it was yesterday only whn he used 2 play wid metz & his big bro sid.
 
Flashback
Abhay:Where r u big bro?I m scared.Plz dont play.Mujhe andhere se dar lagta hai.
Sid:Bhaoo.hahahha
Abhay got scared & he started crying.
Sid(wiping out Abhay's tears):Arey mera chota bhai dar gaya.Plz dont cry I m sorry baba.Andhere se mat daro mai ho na.Tumhe kuch nahi hone donga.Sachie.
Abhay:Plz bhai kabhi aisa mazak mat karna
Sid:Nahi karonga.U know I love u.U r my life.Nothing is more important than u.Chalo lets go & eat our dinner.
 
Present
Abhay's eyes were filled wid tears.He was suffocating whn memories of past knocked at his door.Abhay 2 himself.Bhai kitna pyar tha hum dono mai.1 dusre pai jaan chidkte thai lekin aaj v both r behind each others blood.Andhere se dar lagta tha but 2day I m beast of night.Tum mujhe kuch nahi hone doge ka promise karte thai lekin aaj mera sabse bada enemy mera bhai ban chuka hai.
His tears were following lke never ending streams
 
Sidtharth enters
Sid:Well well little brothet.So u r here.I knew tum aaoge coz u love me so much.
Abhay:Plz bhai I really dont wnt any mess jst leave Pia & let me go
Sid:How can I?Well I have a gift 4 u.
Metz enters
Abhay:Mathli
Sid:Yes mathli.So did u lke my gift.I m sure u loved it.
Metz was laughing lke devil.
Abhay:Right now I care dam abt Metz.I jst wnt u 2 leave Pia otherwise I have 2 do wht i'll regret.
Sid:Ok so u wnt 2 have a fight.U know I m better than u.
 
Both have a thunderous fight which was unforgettable & at the end Abhay killed Sid with wooden.Sid shouted Mathli
Abhay had tears in his eyes.
He put sid's head on his lap.They had their last talk
 
Sid:I cant believe tht u did this 2 me
 
Abhay:Bhai I never wnt 2
 
Sid:I dont know Y in last moments of my life all memories of our child hood is haunting me.
 
Abhay:I really wnt 2 kill myself but I warned u bro.I cant help it.
 
Sid:Remember I promised u I wont let anything happen 2 u.C although I wnted 2 kill u but at the end it was me who kept the promise.Iss andhare nai mujhe kha liya & U r still alive.
 
Abhay:I wish hum kabhi alag na hue hote.I wish hum saath reh sakte.I wish mujhe mera purana knight armour mil jata.Mera bhai mil jata😭
 
Sid:I wish mai kabhi devil na banta.I wish mere apne bhai ne mujhe mara na hota.I wish tum iss andhere se bhar aa jao😭.I forgive U.
These were last few words of Sid b4 he closed his eyes on Abhay's lap & his body vanished in air.
 
Metz freezed Abhay
Two brothers were in deep sleep coz of their miserable love.Love swallow their love,their innocence & above all their brotherhood
 
It was the day of the end of love & hate relationship b/w Abhay & sid.It was the day whn blood killed his blood.It was day whn a mother lost her 2 adorable son in the hands of fate.It was the new start of disastrous End.But was it the end?Some unknown facts r still unfold in nature.May b these brothers fate agn come across in near future.The wish of mother may come true.May b she'll get her sons back tht 2 united😭.
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very touching😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 why always elder has to sacrifice in everything😭😭😭😭 sid also deserves love😭😭😭😭 wish he be back soon😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear,superb writing...it made me cry😭...excellent piece of writing...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sidchu

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Very touching😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 why always elder has to sacrifice in everything😭😭😭😭 sid also deserves love😭😭😭😭 wish he be back soon😭😭😭

Oye dono ko parallel lead di hai.Abhay & sid both sacrificed in some way yaar.Chalo both will come soon archie meri bachi.Yeh OS sirf tere liye banaya hai coz mere dimaag toh koi aur hi idea tha.Related 2 Abhiya.But I love u know.Tune Abhiya VM banaya so I thought its my time 2 complete my promise.Tera pati aayega zarur aayega.Chal smile😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prioty1000

wow dear,superb writing...it made me cry😭...excellent piece of writing...👏

Thnx a lot dear.I m glad u like it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow yar
Love Abhid to the core
thanks for the such emotional OS
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: M2NZ

Wow yar

Love Abhid to the core
thanks for the such emotional OS

Thnx a lot.My pleasure yaar.They do share grt chemistry😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww Dear.. Amazing Os.. d flashback Convo btw Abhay-Sid was sweet..u had put it up very well & d end part when Abhay killed Sid n d way Sid said dat at last he kept his promise..was gr8.. Loved it..lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing os👏

i loved the os... it truly made me cry ... i just wish sid return as a good soul and the brothers unite again... amazing peice of writing... u r an amazing writer , continue writing... loved the post🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very touchy OS.Story padhte-padhte main itna kho gayi ki lagta hai main sahi mein ye sab dekh rahi hun!You r too good...👏