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Swetha-Sai

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice n heart rendering poems/shayaries by u raj bro👏

u hav got an awesome talent bro...👏

not everyone can write poems/shayaries.. just like dat... one really need dat kind of flow of words n thoughts to write dem...

yes bro... ur shayaries suited radev to the'T'

God bless u bro... always😃

love

swetha

Edited by sv003 - 12 years ago

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Putija

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Posted: 12 years ago

RBG

Aaj kya baat hai hasi ko bhula diya aur aasuo aur dard ko apna liya.I DONT KNOW MUCH SHAYARI

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=phm2Tk_AkbY[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TFcwavaNJYw&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SvuEXnygiG4&feature=fvsr[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks a lot for gret shers , I would not call them sad but so very romantic .

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ekta15

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Posted: 12 years ago

REALLY HEART TOUCHING SHAYARI YAAR
we were not having GD's so u started BUT ALL ALL OF THEM ARE SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN.
5-8 th were like so emotional that i was feeling bad for radev
thankyou sooo muchhh
for this emotional shayaris

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Posted: 12 years ago

Bhai Wah, yeh sooraj aaj pashchim se kaise nikla ?! 😆 Comedy ne shayari ka rang kaise nikala ?!

RBG, you are gifted or what and kya shayaris ! Subhan-allah ! 😃 My chota sa contribution is this ghazal which, per moi limited knowledge, is another form of sher-shayari !

Rads ka andaaz-e-bayaan hai ...

Haal-e-dil yoon unhein sunaya gaya

aap hi ko zubaan banaya gaya ...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ck_Vnzvfl5c[/YOUTUBE]

Dard aur nafrat ke beech sirph ek halki si lakeer hoti hai yaar

iss liye Dev mann hi mann apni feelings ka iss tarah karta hai izhaar ...

Ae gham-e-dil kya karoon

ae wahashat-e-dil kya karoon ..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMFwb7Fa2OI&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by radev24 - 12 years ago

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radhika5

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kya Bat--Kya Bat--Kya Bat---👏👏👏
👏
Each and everyone one of the shayari is just fantastic---👍🏼
Each word, each feeling---and the way you put it all together---kudos to you-👍🏼----You are talent personified---in such things

And thank you also, for encouraging me---reading your snippets, has made me try my hand at it--(very amateurish)--but it is fun---so here are my tries...

2...Dard hai dil mein par ehsaas nahi hota,
Rota hai dil jab woh paas nahi hota;
Barbaad ho gaye hum unki mohabbat mein,
Aur woh kehte hain ki is tarah pyaar nahi hota..!

Pyaar koi saza nahi,
Pyaar koi dard nahi
Ek mitha sa ehsaas hai
Jo pyaar karne wale hi jaante hai

6...Akela sa mehsoos karo jab tanhai mein,
Yaad meri aaye jab judaai mein,
Mehsoos karna tumhare karib hoon mein,
Jab chahe dekh lena apni hi parchhaein mein...

Door rahekar, door nahi hum
Rahate dil me, unke hum
Anjaane chahe woh, rahate hai humse
Milenge jaroor hum, pyaar ki es raha pe

7...Wo roye to bahut, par mujhse moonh mod kar roye,
Koi majboori hogi to dil tod kar roye,
Mere samne kar diye mere tasveer ke tukde,
Pata chala mere peeche woh unhein jod kar roye...

Dev to Radhika:-

Tasveer ke tukde to jod diye hamne

Par dil ke tukdon ko kaise jodenge hum...

Sapno ki pari thi'hamari sangini

Par hava ke jhoke ne , bana di usko parayi

Ab to jeena hai, use kisi aur ki sochkar

Sochke yahi to, ghabharata hai dil abhi

Uski khamoshi, chubhati hai hume

Lekin majboori ne,.. rukaliye hamare kadam

Ankhoo ki boondo ko, banake hasi

Kaise bitengi yeh tanha zindagi

Na woh khush hai, na khush hai hum

Kaise katenge yeh jeevan ke pal

Kanha ki leela, kya rang layegi

Kya hamari astha, naya rang layegi

Edited by radhika5 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you ,but whats the meaning of those poems?why dont you translate in english ?

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160974

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RADEV1000

Exactly bro, u arranged them sooo nicelyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!...realy unique...!!!!!!...

Thanks RADEV...I will add some more soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: radha_bilahari
Radhe Radhe Rajji,

Beautifully written poem, dukh bhari shayari pesh kiya hai aapne.

It was one of my farmayish that Dev has to tell a shayari either to Radhika or her statue ever since they showed he is a sculptor. Shayaad in dono ki dosti hone ke baad this wish of mine will be fulfilled.

Radhe Radhe Radha ji..

Shukriya aapka..Yes it wudhv been beautiful had they shown Dev as Shayar and he says shayaris often...it wudhv been appreciated by viewers and helped the TRPs too...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neerjashingla
You have written beautiful words in poetry expressing Radhika,s feeling Raj ... ..Recently i have learnt to post the song, just one song crossed my mind , can i post here...Rang Dil Ki Dhadkan Bhi Laati To Hogi... .
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WBJV5jvkeB8[/YOUTUBE]
Radhika is not blind but has innocence of Mala Sinha in the picture , lost in her dreamworld

Thanks Neerja...sure you can post shayaris too...

Its a beautiful song..👏

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