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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mars14
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😭mera comment frist page pe kuin nai haii...😆
omg...a new saajan ss...
n that too by radhika buhshan...THE MYSTERY QUEENN.
😲😲
😃tmka pm dekh k itna bara smile a gyaaa...
omg loveed the css...amzing as alwayss...
do conitnue soonnn...😊
cant wait to read...😃
baqi bhe pls update kar do...😆
loved it
urs bakrii😛

thnk u so much bakri for the mast comment...
n again thnks for beautiful compliment...

Love
Radhi...

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aashi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

radhiii where were u missed u hon 🤗wonderful concept yar seriously loved it to the core 🤗but majan loves each other 😲but as its ur sajan ss i m sure like other ur updates u will def justify it and ya want ur all updates hon waiting for it when u will give us? 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

hey radhi
awesome concept n cs 👏
loved it
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: aashizin
radhiii where were u missed u hon 🤗wonderful concept yar seriously loved it to the core 🤗but majan loves each other 😲but as its ur sajan ss i m sure like other ur updates u will def justify it and ya want ur all updates hon waiting for it when u will give us? 😳

hey aashi diii thnx for the cmmnt.. m glad u liked it..

n dii i will updts all ffs in 2 daysss
ok nw happy

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Shafaq

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

On one hand, Mayank and Gunjan Love each Other and on the other hand, Samrat would be extremely quite possessive about Gunjan as he's a spoiled guy...So, in the end, Samrat's possessiveness and ''You are Mine'' claim would bring SaJan together!!!

Isn't it awesome???

Go Ahead😆 I'm already waiting for the first part!

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Joseph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

thnk u so much josheph... i dont knw u r elder then me or nt so i m nt calling u josheph bhai...

n abt the title name omg just perfecttt

i really loved the name... n yahh this story is based on samrat's bad character so

this title suit this SS...

n personally i really loved that title...

n yahh josheph bhaii IS THIS LOVE?? ye wla name pehle kisi ne sajan ss me rakha haiii

so i cant take it..

n yahhh i told to josheph bhai to change name...

n again josheph bhai thnks for the help..

Thanks Radhi for selecting this name for your FF😳 Its really Honor for me😳 I really liked this story Idea. And,Yaa...You can call me Joseph...I am only 16 yrs. old.😳 And,I am really thankful to you...for your lovely support and guiding on I-F , in my initial days.😳 Thanks 😊

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: SG-Obssession
On one hand, Mayank and Gunjan Love each Other and on the other hand, Samrat would be extremely quite possessive about Gunjan as he's a spoiled guy...So, in the end, Samrat's possessiveness and ''You are Mine'' claim would bring SaJan together!!!
Isn't it awesome???
Go Ahead😆 I'm already waiting for the first part!

dats true ehehehhe😉

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

hey frnds once again Radhi here... bt this time with
a new part of my latest SS.. YOU ARE MINE...
hope u like the title... btw frnds.. i knw u all
complaining abt my other story's updts..
bt daily i will updt my each story ok...
here is the first part njoy it...
hope u like it...

******* fingure crossed**********

PART 1

IN USA...

A handsum boy was moving here n there in his house..
he was worring abt sumthing...
he is non other than Armaan Shergill...

Armaan:ye sam ab tak ghar kyu nahi aaya...
11 baj rahe haiii...morning me bol ke gaya tha..
bhai shaam tak aa jaunga.. bt abhi tak uska koi
pata nahi haii... phone bhi switch off aa raha haii..
wo janta haii ki mein uske bina khana nahi khata
fir bhi nahi aaya,,, pata nahi kaha hogga...
ek or baar try karta hu...

n he again tried...
bt it was switched off...

damn it... where r u sam???????
n his cell was ringging... he thought is was
samrat so he queckly picked up

Armaan:helo sam where r u??? u idiot m eaiting 4
u frm last 4 hours...

"Hello Armaan" A sweet voice came...

Armaan:Riddhima tum??? sry wo Sam ab tak ghar par
nahi aaya to muje laga Sam hai...

Riddhima:Armaan tum hospital aa jaao Samrat ka
accident ...

Armaan:kya accident?? kab kaha kaise??? tum wait
karo mein abhi aata hu...

cut the call... n drove off to hospitall...
he rushed to Riddhima's cabin...
Riddhima saw Armaan was breathing heavily...

Riddhima:Armaan tum...

Armaan:Sam kaha haii...

Riddhima:wo ward mein haii par tum...

Armaan:kon se ward mein hai...??

Riddhima:10 no ke par meri baat to suno Armaan...

bt he has already left the cabin... n Riddhima also
followed him... Armaan reached to his ward n open
the door... n saw samrat was sitting on bed...
having bendages on his forhead...
n Samrat saw Armaan...

Armaan:sam???? ran to him n hugged him...

Samrat: bhai???

Armaan:r u ok???

samrat:m ohkk bhai plzz dont wry...

Armaan brokwe the hug...n looked at Riddhima who
was smiling on seeing them...

Armaan:sam ye sab??????

Riddhima:mein batati hu Armaan...

Samrat:nahi Riddhima mein bata dunga.. tum bas muje
yaha se discharge kardo... muje yaha nahi rehna...

Armaan:ek minute sam... Riddhima tum bataao...

Riddhima:Armaan... aaj Samrat drink karke car drive
kar raha tha... to accident ho gaya ... police case
bhi hua haii...

Armaan:kya???????? he was socked...

Samrat:dekho bhai wo bas aise hi thodi si pee li thi..
bt wo accident meine drink nahi ki thi is liye nahi
meri eye sight week ho gayi haii is liye hua tha...

Armaan:wat the hell?? haa agar tume kuch ho jaata to?
mera kya hota god damn it kabhi socha haiii.?????

Armaan becamae angry... n Riddhima scared.. As Armaan
never became angry on Samrat...

Samrat:sorry bhai aage se aisa kuch nahi karunga pakka.

bt Armaan turned to Riddhima...

Armaan:police ka case mein sambhal lunga...
tum sam ke discharge paper ready kardo...

n left the room... Samrat looked at Riddhima...

Riddhima:aaj to tu gaya Sam.. Armaan kabhi tujpe gussa
nahi hota.. or aaj wo gussa haiii...hope aaj tum
bach jaao god bless u my child... hehehhe
n ran out of room...

Samrat:Armaan bhai gussa oh freak ab kya karunga...
he was thinking...samrat tu itna soch kyu raha haii..
aaj tak Armaan bhai tujse naraz tak nahi huye to ab
kya honge.. n mujse jyada der tak bhai naraz nahi reh
sakte i knw dat...unhe to mein mana lunga...

In Riddhima's cabin

Armaan was sitting on chair... n Riddhima was
sitting beside him...

Riddhima:Armaan Samrat bilkul thik haii use kuch
nahi hua haiii...or nasha bhi utar gaya hai..

Armaan:janta hu mein... par aaj agar Samrat ko kuch
ho jaata to????

Riddhima:ye sab tumhari galti haii...tumne hi use
bigad ke rakha haii...

Armaan:dekho Riddhima ..Sam ko bigda hua mat bolo..
mera Sam haiii.. or mein use duniya ki har khusi dena
chahta hu.. chahe uske liye muje kuch bhi kyu na
karna pade...

Riddhima:Tum Samrat ko itna pyar karte ho ki uske liye
kisi bhi had tak jaa sakte ho???

Armaan :haa kisi bhi had tak... tum pehle discharge
paper ready karo... wo yaha nahi rehna chahta...

Riddhima:thik haii...

then Samrat was discharged...
nw Samrat n Armaan was going back to his home...
pin drop silent was in in car...

Samrat:bhai...

bt Armaan didnt response...

Sammrat:ye Samrat na bahut bura haii idiot saala..
kamina jab dekho tab koi na koi ulte sidhe kaam karta
rehta haii or apni jaan Armaan bhai ko trouble
deta rehta haii... or aaj.. aaj to kamine ne had hi
kardi... siddha accident hi kar diya... ek baar
bhi nahi socha ki agar use kuch ho jaata to uske
bhai ka kya hota?? par nahi wo to shelfish haiii
sirf khud ke baare me hi soch ta haii saala mann
larta haiii ki ek punch du.. tabhi kamine ki akkal
thika ne aayegii stupid kahi ka...kitna pareshan
kar diya Armaan bhai ko... Armaan bhai aap ki hi
galti haii aapne na use kuch jyada hi chut de di haii..
Armaan bhai aap ek baar use mere haath me aane do..
fir dekho me kya uski haalat karta...

Armaan smiled hearing all these...

Samrat:bhai aap hanso mat .. is baar mein Samrat ko
nahi chhodunga... bahut bigad gaya haii aaj kal...

Armaan:chal ab apni nautanki bandh kar...

samrat smiled ...

Samrat:thnk u bhai aap ne muje maaf kar diya...
n hugged him...

Armaan:haa baba or muje abhi hug mat kar... warna
accident ho jaayega...

Samrat: sry bhai...

then they reached to home...

Samrat:haay finally at home...

Armaan:chal room me ab aaram kar...

Armaan held his hand n abt to move...

Samrat:aap pehle yaha beitho...

Samrat made him sit on sofa.. n then went to kitchen
n came back with food... b sat beside him...

Samrat:pehle aap khana kha lo... n took a bit n
made him eat...

Armaan was staring at him...

Samrat:jaanta hu aapne mere bina nahi khaya hoga...
bhai aap mujse itna pyar kyu karte haii..?????

Armaan hugged him...

Armaan:tum jaan ho meri... mera bhai haii tu... bahut
pyar karta hu mein tujse.. agar aaj tume kuch ho jaata
to??? kabhi socha haii Armaan ka kya hota??? meri
duniya tu haiii Samrat... Armaan jeeta haii to sirf
uske Samrat ke liye...

n tears started to fell frm both's eyes...

Samrat broke the hug...

Samrat:m sry bhai... i promise aaj ke baad aap jo
kahenge mein karunga...

Armaan:pakka promise...??

Samrat:pakka promise... smilingly...

Armaan:thik haii to hum india chalte haii...

Samrat:india kyu bhai???? visit ke liye?????

Armaan:nahi rehne...

Samrat was socked...

samrat:nahi bhai plzzz hum yahi rahenge... india me
nahi plzz...

Armaan:nahi samrat hum india jaa rahe haii or wo bhi
parso...

Samrat:no way bhai mein nahi aane wala...

Armaan:par tumne thodi der pehle pakka wala promise
kiya tha ki tum meri har baat maanoge...

Samrat:par bhai no india plzz mein yaha aapki har
baat manunga..

Armaan:par tu india kyu nahi jaana chahta...???

samrat:kyu india mein hot chick nahi milti na...

Armaan:samrat tum bas ek baar to india chalo...
agar tume waha accha nahi laga to mein tume yaha
wapas bhej dunga...

Samrat:no ways bhai mein nahi jaane wala india...

Armaan:thik haii.. tum yahi raho mein India chala
jaata hu...

n started to eat his food...
samrat left frm there...

Armaan:mein janta hu Sam tu mere bina nahi reh sakta
or tu bhi mere sath hi india aayega...

n smiled...

Samrat came out of washroom...

Samrat:ab kya karu mein???? bhai india jaane ko bol
rahe haii... par mein USA me hi rehna chahta hu...
par mein bhai ke bagair nahi reh sakta... kya karu..

then he went to Armaan's room... n saw Armaan was
laying on bed in his night dress...

Samrat:bhai muje yaha sona haii...

Armaan smiled...

Armaan:aaja... samrat layed beside him...

Armaan turned n started to carresed his hair...
n Samrat soon fell asleep...

Armaan(in mind):Meine mom dad ko promise kiya haii ki
tume duniya ki har khushi dunga.. kabhi kuch nahi
hone dunga... kabhi nahi... n kissed his forhead..
n samrat turned n hugged him in sleep... Armaan
smiled n he too slept hugging him...

IN MUMBAI...

A girl in salwar suit was waitting in canteen...
n then a boy came with smiling face...

Gunjan:hii mayank...
Mayank:hii gunjan kaisi ho???
Gunjan:thik hu.. tum kaise ho???
Mayank:mein bhi thik hu...
then both remain silent...n stealing glances...

Mayank:so is baar bhi top kiya...
Gunjan:haa or tum second aaye...
Mayank:n thnks to u... agar tum mere kuch chapters
clear nahi karti to nahi ho pata...
Gunjan:dosti me thnk u nahi gota...
Mayank:yahhh sry..
Gunjan:or sry bhi nahi hota...
both smiled..n heard bell rang..

Gunjan :class ka time ho gaya... chale...
Mayank:haa chalo...

n both walked up to class...

Mayank(in mind):kya gunjan bhi waisa hi feel karti
hai jaisa mein uske liye feel karta hu... kya muje
use bata dena chahiye...????

Gunjan(in mind):mayank ke sath rehna muje accha lagta
haiii... kya wo bhi waisa hi feel karta haii jaise
mein karti hu?? kya mein use kehdu ki mein kya feel
karti hu...???

both reached to class...

Precap:

Armaan n Samrat in India...

IMP NOTE:
tomorrow. i will updt last desire n
every tear has its own story...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...

Love😉
Radhi...