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Niharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

guys, thought i'll pendown my imagination of RaDev confrontation scene,
Radh letting her Dev know that he's her KK.....
note: i am tooo creative in writing, just tried it😳....hope u'll like it.😛
Plz read 😃

guys part 2 updated in below post😃

Part1:

Dev and Rohan on their way to Mathura from Rawal, Dev driving...

Rohan looks at Dev: Arre Dev, Kya jab tu chota tha, tab apne aap ko KK bolke ghumtha tha???
Dev : gives him a questioning look? not understanding what he's talking
Rohan: Chup kyun hai! bolna?
Dev: yeh,Tu kya keh raha hai Rohan....
Rohan: KK!! kya apne ko KK boltha tha?
Dev: looking at Rohanyeh tujhse kisne bola? again concentrating on the road mein kyun aise bolunga!
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Rohan: Aaj patha hai, Radhika mujhse kya poonch rahi thi!.....Dev changes to his serious look...not intending to hear him speaking of Radh again !
Sun, woh poonch rahi..........
Dev : Ro..Rohan, Badima ne phone kiya tha...tries to distract the conv...woh keh rahiii.....
Rohan: Dev tu bhi na!!! mein tujhse ek zarrori bath kar raha hun aur tu Badima ke barein mein bath kar raha hai! sun tho sahi, woh poonch rahi thi ki mein kyun apne aap ko KK kehtha tha?

Dev now gets anxious to know and now tries to concentrate on whats he'll say next!......
Rohan: meine kaha! bhala mein kyun aise kahunga........ Phir woh puchne lagi ki 12 yrs pehle, woh Radhastami ke mele mein, kya mein KK bana tha? meine kaha mein nahi Dev bana tha?
Dev is shocked,........he puts the break suddenly!!!!, thankfully the seatbelts help them from getting hit to the dashboard,.......... Dev jerks to the sound of the horn coming from behind the car....the car behind slowly passes their car the driver looking at the person driving the car....

Rohan: Kya ho gaya hai tujhe, kya hua, gadi kyun suddenly roki????? Dev is quite....... DEV!!!!!!!! mein tujh se poonch raha hun!
Dev: woh! woh....woh mein!!!
Rohan: Thune ek dumse dara diya, Kya yar!! Tu theek tho hai na! shall i drive?
Dev: Nahi!.....main theek hun.

Dev slowly takes the car and they are back on their way....
Dev is in thoughts, He remembers his childhood memories,
Mera naam Radhika hai!......Agar tumhara naam Radhika hai tho mera nam KK!......Aaj se hum dosth! unknowingly a smiles come to his face...

.... suddenly Rohan again remembers the conv and asks Dev
Rohan: Magar mujhe samaj nahi aa raha woh kyun aisa poonch rahi thi!
issileye mein thujse poonch raha tha ki tu apne ko KK bola kar tha?
Dev is quite......
Rohan: Kyun pooncha usne aise!!!

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will update the later part soon......😃

Edited by NiHa24 - 13 years ago

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Niharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part2:

Rohan: Accha tune bataya tha ki tera naam Dev hai?!!!
Dev: Nahi!
Rohan: shayd issiliye woh punch rahi hogi!!...
Dev gives a convincing look....
Rohan: Tho batha Radh chote mein kaisi thi, tu ne ussse kuch bath kiya tha?
Dev is concentrating on his driving, yet listening to Rohan, he remember how he and Radh been then. He looks at Rohan, gives him a smile, again turns his head to the front and says
Dev: hum dosth bane, Mele mein bahut ghume aur bahut maza kiya.......again smiles...
Rohan: as if dreaming, looking at top, Kash mein hi uss din KK bana hotha!!!!.

Dev suddenly looks at Rohan as if the statement of his pinched his heart, though till now it didnt mean not much to him, but now knowing when it was Radh, those moments seemed more precious to him..... and he was happy inside his heart that it was him.

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Radh reaches home, She's so happy, her happiness was overflowing but she was hiding it inside.....
she was afraid if she'll get caught, she didnt wanted anybody to know till she talked to her KK, then her KK would fight for her......
Shanthi: Radhika betiya tu aa gayi! mujhe tho bahut hi bechain ho raha tha, kahe ithna dheri ho gayi? sab theek tha na? Mansa is surprised listerning to shanthi, just before a while she was supporting it, then all of a sudden she's so worried......he leaves the thought...
Radh: Ma sab theek tha, koi pareshani ki baath nahi....
Mansa: Radhika betiya Damad babu se baath kar liya na, ab mann mein shanka dhur ho gayi na? He asks concernedly.
Radh: freezes to his question...she stands still for a while, she turns to him, Jee baba, she stops for a while jo shanka thi woh dhur ho gayi! and she thinks to herself bas sahi waqt ka inthazar hai aur aapko bhi mujh par puri tarah se vishwas ho jayega ki mein sahi hun, aur mera vishwas kabhi galat ho hi nahi saktha!!! she smile at him and goes inside

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Rohan was talking about this and that on the way back home, Dev was almost silent listerning to him and talked unless Rohan expected some replies from him and inbetween sometimes remembering his childhood days with Radh.

They reach home, Rohan seems happy, Dev is lost in his thoughts, he's not sad, there was this unknown happiness in his eyes, he goes to his room, sits on the bed and thinking.....

Dev: thinking to himself, Kya yeh wohi Radhika thi? mujhe tho.......mujhe tho yaad bhi nahi raha.......aur Radhika ab thak woh sab yaad kar rahi hai? mein kaise woh sab bhool gaya, mujhe bhi yaad rakhna chahiye tha......he gives a disappointed sigh because he didnt remember till he was reminded....

He lies down, putting his hands behind his head, he's thinking, suddely he remembers something, he gets up, goes quick and starts searching his books, he's looking very excited and after some time he finally finds it, he stares at it and slowly with a cute smile takes it out into his hand, it was the peacock feather gifted by her.....
Yeh tumhare liye, he again smiles remembering her, holding it infront of his face....

He remembers how bubbly and cute Radh was, their meeting and the fun they had, he laughs thinking, He laughs thinking about their cutish moments. He starts talking to the peacock feather....
Mujhe viswaas nahi ho raha hai ki tum wahi Radhika ho!, shayad issiliye jab bhi tum mere aas pass hothi thi kahna mujhe ishara karthe the, aur mujhe tumhare hone ka patha chal jatha tha, aur mein bhi dekho ithne bar milkar bhi mein tumhara naam nahi poonch paya! pats cutely on his forehead, mein bhi na!
Agar pehle hi poonch letha tho tumse dosti karne ke liye tumhe ithna manana nahi padtha....says childhishly and laughs cutely....

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Daima comes into his room,
ka baath hai Dev! apne aap se bath kar rahe ho,
he sees Daima.....puts the feather in Radh's dairy....
Dev: Kuch nahi daima! bas aise hi...smiling inside himself
Daima: Kya apni dreamgirl ke baarein mein soch rahe the kya?
reality hits Dev, it shaked all his happiness for a sec.....he feels sad thinking Radhika is soon going to be married to Rohan and become CB of the house!
Yes!!! he felt sad but again he wasnt really that sad too, somewhere it felt good for him, the thought of that, Radh and him were friends didnt make him feel that sad at that next moment.

Daima: bhojan nahi karoge ka? aaj kal theek se khayal nahi rak raho hai, kya hoga tori sehath ka, ithna kaam kar raho hai aur theek se bhi nahi kha rahe ho!
lagtha hai tumhari bhi shadi jaldi karwani podegi! Dev looks into nothing when Daima talks about his marriage, jaise hi Rohan ki shadi hoyegi hum tori DG se tori shadi karvadenge!
Dev listerns to Daima, looks at her, gives her a fake smile, He didnt seem that happy when Daima was talking about his marriage...

Daima: accha chalo bhojan ke liye dher ho rahi hai,
Dev: Jee daima! aap chaliye mein bas thodi dher mein aaya.
Daima leaves the room asking him to come fast....
Dev takes out the feather just stares at it, and smiles a little at it......goes to the have dinner...

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Next part: Radh talking to her Kahna and Dev again talking to his feather😆 😳

Hope i am not dragging too much about their self conversations...
guys plz tell how did u felt about Dev reaction after he comes to his room and at the time of Conv with Daima, were his reactions convincing to u guys?

I dont want to see him crying and sad every and every part of the scene.......
but u'll def see Dev crying in my next updates...
plz post ur views😃

Edited by NiHa24 - 13 years ago