Bandini - 2 Ki Kahani Rabiya Ki Zubani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello friends,

Welocme Bandini ' 2

This time Santu & DM with different name and both are from different cast.

This time Santu Name is Santu Sawant and DM Name is Dharamraj Iyyer. Santu age is 23 and DM age is 35. Both are different cast and they stay different cities. Let see how could they meet and get married.

DM Is business man usko bahut baat karne ki adat hai aur Santu bahut kam bolti hai. Bahut chupa chap rehane wali ladki hai.

DM stay in mumbai with his mother and father ,elder sister and Two children, one age is 10 year girl and a boy is 6 year age, and Two nephew her sister children . one boy and girl. The girl age is 20 and the boy is 23. His sister is widow. So he always stay in her house. Mumbai city 'DM doing pooja Tripati Balaji in white Shirt and White Veti. Veti mean Lungi South Indian Dress Uske forehead me chandan ka tika laga hota hai.. In back side his hole family standing there.

DM giving Prasad to everyone. After few minutes they all are on dining table for breakfast. DM apne bhanje kartik se kaheta hai. Aaj mai business ke kam se out of Bombay jar aha hu. Tum office jao waha sab kam theek chal raha kya dekho..

Kartik: theek hai. (Phir DM waha se utkar apne kamre me chala jata hai.) DM ki bahen Vasanti uske peeche kamre me jati hai aur use kaheti hai DM tumhe aaj hi bhahar jana hai, aaj nahi jaoge to nahi chalega.

DM: kyu aisa kahe rahi hai akka (Tamil me badi bahe ko akka kahete hai) aaj kya hai.

Vasanti: Aaj tumhari beti Nalani ka birthday hai.

DM: mai to bhool hi gaya tha any way koi bat nahi mai use wish kar doonga.

Vasanti: Hum sab soch rahe the hum uska birthday celebrate karenge:

DM: jaroor kijiye maine kab mana kiya.

Vasanti:tum bahar jane ki baat kar rahe ho.

DM: to kya hua mai apne kam se bahar jar aha hu. Aap log birthday celebrate karo.

Vasanti : Tum nahi rahoge to Nalani ko bura lagega.

DM: she is small child use kya samaj hai. Lekin aapko to samaj hai na birthday to ate jate rahete hai business me chance baar baar nahi milta. Aap to janti hai ki mai ye sab kiskeliye kar raha hu. Rajan ka sapna tha humara company ka naam pure world me log jane wahi to mai koshish kar raha hu. Aur mai use poora karoonga kisi bhi keemat par. (aisa kahekar chala jata hai. Vasanti ki aakhe bhar ati hai au apne apse kaheti hai . Hum dono ka dard ek hi hum dono ne ek cheez ek sath koyi hai. Tune teri patni aur maine mera pati.)

DM in office with black coat and black pant.

DM : (apne assistant se kaheta hai) everthing is reday.

Assisant : yes sir.

DM: Driver se kaho gadi nikalne ke liye.

Nalani crying in her room Kartik uske ke pas ata hai aur kaheta hai.

Kartik : Why are you crying.

Nalani : Today is my birthday appa(Father) nahi hai.

Kartik : Appa nahi hai to kya hua tumhara anna (brother) hai na dekho mai tumhara birthday kitna achha celebrate karta hu. (Tabhi waha kartik ki bahen shalini Nalini ke chote bhai raja ko lekar waha ati hai aur kaheti hai)

Shalini : Anna theek kahe rahe hai appa nahi to kya hua hum log hai na humlog tumhara birthday karenge aur tumko bahut sari gift denge. Ok'. Now smile please.

 

Sab log Birthday ki Tayari Karte Hai.

 

Sawantwadi

DM ek Chotse village sawantwadi me pahuchta hai. Driver kaheta hai Sir isse aage gadi nahi ja sakti aage kachhi sadak hai, Barish ka mousam hai gadi keechad me fas sakti hai.

DM: Koi baat nahi yaha paas me me kahi Sanjay Mestry ka ghar hoga hum log chalkar chale jayenge.

(DM aur Assistant dono Car se bahar nikalte hai.    

DM Assistant Kahta hai Sir ye to ek chotasa village yaha Zameen Kharidne se hame Kya fayda ho sakta hai.

DM: Sanjeet ye Village  Samudra ke kinare basa hua hai hamare business ko isse bahut fayda hoga.

Sanjeet : kaise

DM: jyada sawal mat karo chalo waqt ane par sab samaj aa jayega.

Dono kachhi sadak se Sanjay mestry ghar jane ke liye  nikal padte hai, kuch der chalne ke baad Assistant kaheta hai sir hum sahi raste par to ja rahe hai na.

DM: aisa sawal kyu pooch rahe ho?

Sanjeet: Kya hai sir hum itni der se chal rahe hai lekin ghar nahi aa raha hai.

DM: Stupid ye Mumbai nahi hai it's a village yaha sabke ghr door door hote hai.

Sanjeet: phir bhi kisi se poonch lete hai.

DM: Koi jaroorat nahi mujhe mestry ne rasta bataya hai.

Sanjeet: Sir thodi der me andhera ho jayega isliye kahe raha hu har kisi se pooch lete hai. Poochna nahi hai to mestry ko phone  lagayena o hame lene aa jayenge.

DM: yaha network ki nahi hai phone kaise lagega.

Sanjeet: Sir kisi se poochne me kya jaata hai pooch lete hai na.

DM: Theek hai waha thodi doori par ek chotasa mandir hai  waha koi ladki bhaiti use pooch lete hai.

 

DM house

DM ke  Birthday ki Party ki tayari ho chuki hoti hai. Ghar me sab guest aate hai. Sab cake katne ke liye ready hote hai.

Shalini : Cake kato sab aa chuke hai. (Nalini Candle bhujakar cake cut karti hai sab log uske liye Happy birthday song gate hai. Nalini sabse pahele Kartik ko cake khilati hai. Phir eke k karke sabko khilati hai. Sab log nandin kog gift dete hai)

Ek lady Nalani ki Birthday gift dekar kaheti hai happy birthday beta.

Nalini: Thank u aunty.

Lady: beta tumhare papa nahi tumhare birthday par .

(Nandini udas ho jati hai, tabhi kartik turant kaheta hai )

Kartik: O kya Mrs. Sharma Papa business ke kisi kam se bahar gaye evening me Nalani ke birthday ke liye ane wale the lekin barish ke waja se raste me thodi problem ho gayi isliye papa yaha aa nahi sake. .

Lady: ooo Maine aise hi

Kartik : But you know Mrs. Sharma yaha  aapko koi problem nahi hai hoga humlog achhi taraha aapki mehaman navaji karenge. (kartik uske ghar par kam karne wale bulata hai) ye balu idar aa madam ko thanda do.

Shyam : ji .

 

(waha se shalini se kaheta hai )ye Mrs. Sharma ka kabhi bhi mu band nahi raheta hai..

Shalini : Aisi hai ho usko to ulana hi nahi chahiye tha. (tabhi kartik ki mother vasanti waha aakar kaheti hai beta kisi ko bulakar aisa nahi kahete hai)

Shalini : Amma aapko to pata hai Mrs. Sharma hamesha jale pe namak chidakne ke liye tayar raheti hai.

 

Vasanti: Shalni……. Chodo ye sab hamare raja ne nalani k eek poetry sunana chahata chalo sunte hai.

 

Shalini: Mere chotese bhai TumNalani ke Poetry bologe!!!!!!!!

Raja: ha…..

Shalini:  kya poetry bologe.

Raja: Aise nahi sabko sath me sunaoonga…. (Sab hasne lagte hai. Shalini raja ko god me uthakar le jati hai.)

Shalini: Attention everybody ham sabse chote lekin hamre ghar ke sabse bade raja uski  sister Nalanii Birthdaty par ek poetry sunaynge. Taliya…………….

 

Sawantwadi

Sanjeet: Sir o ladki ki waha se ja rahi lagta hai.

 

DM:  Jane dona hum kisi aur se pooch lenge

 

Sanjeet: Nahi yaha door door tak koi dikhai nahi de raha hai, o ladki door chali jaye isse pahele mai bhagkar jakar use poochta hu. (aisa kahekar us ladki taraf bhagne lagta hai. Us ladki paas jakar kaheta ha)i suno are suno (o ladki palatkar uski taraf dekhti hai)

 

 

AAJ ITNA HI BAKI KAL

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
it will very nice pls write
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please write. I am interested in anyting related with Bandini.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ne thing 4 bandini.....1st u explore ur thoughts....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Do write, will be waiting :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please write your idea, we all would love to read a great Sanraj idea 😊

Please do keep the same characteristics of Santu and Dharamraj

and their chemistry but with more fire passion in their relationship would be good!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank u friends to encourage me.

Today evening you read 1st episode Bandini -2

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
i like your writing and the way you started the story...😊
so pleace share your ideas for Bandini 2 ❤️ 
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya story sounding good bt mst back drop r frm diff serial seen bfor....only d religion prt is diff....bt its ok ...u wrt ne thing abt bandini....will do it...jus ws a suggestion
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey great idea yaar bt plz plz plz name and characteristics should be same plz plz :)