Monaya/bday os..

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Heyy guys this is my first try on writing an os n i wrote this 4 one of my best buddies bday..Happy birthday richuu..love ya.😛..i hope u guys like it..

Monaya os..

san pov-im soooooooooo happyy 2 dayy..finally m gonna meet my best friend after 13yrs...he is finally returningg 2 india..i missed him soo muchh....although we nevr lost contact with each othr n used 2 chat for hours n hours...but still i always missed him alott..i always used to keep telling my frndz abt him...he was justt soo caringg n genuine...n my frndz always used 2 tease me  dat im in love with him...but i knw dat im not..i mean main usse itne saalon se mili bhi nahin..aur woh mera sirf best frnd..his parentz n my parentz hv been best frndz through out their lyff n i knw him since m 3 he is just my SPECIAL frnd..special??nahin woh mera sirf aur sirf best frnd hai n datz it..but usne toh kaha tha ki woh 12 baje tak aajyega..itz 12:20 now uff woh hamesha ki tarah late hai..pata nahin woh kaisa dekhta hoga...ugghhh sanaya tu abhut soch rahi hai mohit ke baare mein jaise who tujhe tere shaadi ke liye dekhne aaraha hai.....kuch aur soch..shayd uska koi kaam hoga...islyeh late hai..wen her mothr calls her

sm-sanaya beta jaldi niche aao woh log aagye..

sanaya becomes veryy happy n xcited n she rushes down n saw MOHIT'S parents...she goes near thm n touches their feets..but her eyes were searching 4 some1 else.

mohitz mothr-she hugs san kaise ho beta??

s-main theek hoon aunty aap kaise ho?

mm-main theek hoon beta.maine tujhe baahut miss kiya..aur teri non-stop baatein ko bhi..

san smiles maine bhi aapko baahut miss kiya aur especially aapka gajar ka halwa she said looking at door still hoping 4 some1 2 cum...

mm-haan beta ab main tujhe zarror khilaaungi...aur waahan pe toh main kabhi kabhi bahut bore hojaati tere uncle hamesha kaam main busy rehte the aur mohit studies mein...tu toh jaanti hai usse

sanaya laughs haan aunty jaanti hoon..aap chinta mat karo ab aap waapas aagaye ho naa..main aapko bore nahin hone doongi..

sm-aarey par mohit kahan hai??"
mm-woh actually usse yaaha aake kisi imp kaam se jaan tha..islyeh woh nahin aasaka

sm-oh ok koi baat nahin aap log aake baithyeh na'san jaa ajke coffe leke aa'

s-haan laati hoon she said in a low tone,..n goes to d kitchen

san pov-mohit kitna bura hai..main uska itne tym se wait karrahi thi..but he doesn't even bothr to meet me'main hi thi jo usse milne ke liye itna betaab thi'she was lost in her thoughts wen she heard her mothr's call 2 bringg coffe..she comes out..n was surprised 2 see a boy wearing white shirt n blue jeans,,sitting with her parents n chatting...he was d most handsome man she had ever seen in her lyff.his eyes were brown n he had a wonderful smile on his face..she was just lost in him..wen she heard some1 calling her..

mm-sanaya tu waahan kyun khadi hai'yaahan aana..dekh tera dost ko finally tym milgaya tujhse milne ke liye..sanaya was surprised n shocked..she couldn't believe her ears dat  MOHIT was dat guy..

mohit's pov-since d tym I hd reached INDIA..d only thing..dat was ringing on my mind was 2 meet SANAYA..i had some imp work but I just couldn't concentrate..i was just thinking dat how must be she looking??was she still d same??my heart was craving 2 meet her'so I just left my work incomplete'n went 2 IRANI mansion..as soon as I reached there I saw her parents I greeted them they were d most wonderful ppl I had ever seen in my lyf but my heart was just willi ng 2 se someone..n yesss finally I saw her holding a tray..she was wearing a baby pink frock..she  was d most beautiful girl dat I ahd ever seen in my lyff..she had a lovely smile but here eyes were still d same.she still had dat innocent glint..i was just so lost in her'she came in sat beside my mother..i just couldn't stop myself 4rm staring at her'

san-hii mohit

m-heyy kaise hoo ?

s-umm m fine tum kaise ho??she said nervoulsyy..she dint knw why she felt nervous n blushed seeing him..

m-main bhi theek hoon..their parents were busyy talking n monaya were just stealing each othrs glances..they dint knw why thy felt soo attractd 2 each othr..

sm-arrey sanaya aur mohit tum dono itne chup kyun ho??tumlog aise behave kar rahe ho as if pehle baar mil rahe ho..monaya blushed hearing this..san jaa mohit ko upar le jaa..tumoh hamare beech comfortably baat nahin kar paaoge..aakhir tum dono bhi itne saal baad mile ho.

s-jee mom

monaya went upstairs 2 sanz room'thy both were silent..thy dint knw why thy felt soo awkward..thy hd been childhhod frndz n evenaftr mohit went 2 London thy both used 2 talk alott in phn..but still..thy dint knw wat 2 speak at dat moment'finally after a while mohit decied 2 break d silence..

m-sanaya tum ab tak nahin badli na??

s-kya?matlb?

m-tum aaj take k bachi jaise hoo..MISS PINK..he said looking arnd her pink room..wer everything was pink..n had many teddybears n softoys,

s-ohh plzz mohit..mujhe pink pasand hai..aur softoys bhi..aur tum bhi toh abhi bhi utne hi boring hoo..islyeh aunty tumhari complain kar rahi thi.

m-plzz main boring nahn hoo..

s-haan tum hoo..

m-noo

s-yess.

m-noo im nt..

s-yes u are..

m-noo

s-yess

m-yes

s-noo thn she realized wat she said..n looked angrily at mohit who winked her..she blushed..but then she realies..ugghh mohit tum abhi bhi itne IRRITATING  ho..

m-aur tum abhi bhi itni IRRITATED ho..he said smiling..both strad at each oth 4 sumtym n thn burst into laughing

s-maine tumhe baahit miss kiya..

m-maine bhi tumhe baahut miss kiya..he gave a hi5 2 her n hugged her..san hugged him bak..thy both had s strange feeling.thy dint knw,why thy felt soo nycc n completed as if their arms 4 made 4 each othr..finally after sometym thy both broke d hug..n blushed..thy again felt awkward..soo mohit decied 2 speak something..

m-tum kaise ladki ho..apne dost ko baithne ke liye bhi anhin keh rahi ho.veryy bad..

s-oops sorry aao baithona..thy both just kept talking n laughing with each othr..pulling each othr's leg..wen mohit cell rang'he looked at his phn n immdeittly picked up his phn looking very happy..which sanaya noticed,,

m-heyy jenny wassup??how r u??as thr was no network  he goes out of d room to talk

San in her mind-yeh jenny kaun hai??aur mohit uska call dekh ke itna khush kyon hogaya??maybe his GIRLFRIEND..but mohit ne mujhe kabhi bataya nahin..woh toh mujhe har baat bata ta hai'but mujhe kyon itna farak padh raha hai..he has a GF or not..why do I hv2 bothr..itz nt my business..but still'I was lost in my own thoughts wen I saw mohit's fingeres clicking infront of me'

m-san kahan kho gayi thi??main tumhe kabse bula rahi hoon..

s-hmm who kuch nahin..so kisne call kiya tha.

m-ohh who..jennifer ne..my colledge frnd..

s-ohh soo just a frnd??she said looking at him naughtily..she dint knw why biut she just hoped dat d ans was a yes..

m-yess..she has a boyfriend..

s-oops sorry'she fdint knw why she felt soo relievd now'

 m-so kyunki main itne saal baad Mumba waapas aaya hoon..tumhe mujhe saare naye ache cheeze dekhane hai

s-ok baba  done..both smiled at each othr..

As days passed thy became more closer 2 each othr..they used 2 spend alott of tym together..everyday after their work mohit used 2 pick her up n thy both used 2 go out..thy used 2 go 4 shopping alott..which irritated mohit alott but still he did 4 sanaya..n also eating at restraunts as bth were big FOODIES..thy felt gr88 in each othr;s company..thy loved pulling eachothr;s leg..n mohit never left a chance 2 irritate sanaya'although san used 2 get irritated but she always njoyed  how mohit used 2 manoa her sweetly..everything was  perfect 4 them now..'

Sanaya was reading a book in her room..when her mothr comes..

Sm-soo san aaj kal toh madam kaafi khush lag rahi hai..koi khass baat

s-mom main hamesha se khush thi'aur koi khass baat nahin hai..she said still reading her book..

sm-haan but aaj kal kuch zyaada hi lagti ho..especialy Mohit ke aane ke baad..she said emphasizing on mohit's name..

s-mom aap jaisa coch rahe ho waisa kuch nahin hai..woh sirf mera best frnd hai..

sm-ohh toh waisa hai..but maine toh suna tha ki ek ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nahin rehsakte..

s-mom aap baahut filmy hogaye hoo..hum dono sirf dost hai..aur mohit se kaise pyaar aksrsakti who toh mera dost hai..

sm-acha toh maine kab kaha ki tujhe usse pyaar hai'san realizes..

s-ab who..woh actually..mom mujhe neend aarahi hai..main baaht thak gayi hoon..gudni88..she said lying down on d bed..sm smiles at her'she covers her wid a blanket n kisses forehead wishing gudni88..after she leaves d room..san getz up n sits on d bed n starts 2 think

sanaya's pov-yeh mom kya keh rahi thi..main mohit se kaise pyaar kar sakti hoo....woh toh mera SPECIAL frnd hai..spcl??main fi waisa soch rahi hoon..nahin who mera dost hai sirf dost..haan mujhe uske saath tym spnd karma acha lagta hai..jab bhi mujhe who dekta ta hai toh mujhe kuch ajeeb lagta hai..aur jab bhi who mere kareeb aata hai tab mera dil zorse dhadkene lagta hai..aur who jab smile karta hai tab toh'she realizes wat she was saying'uffo san tu paagal hoagayi hai yeh tu kya soch rahi hai?lagta hai mijhe sona chahyeh..she said lying down switching of d table lamp near her bed'd next moring I was woke n saw mohit infront of him..he was sitting very close 2 me..n he was staring at me..i felt soo nycc..it was d best moring of my lyf'seeing mohit's face close 2 mine..i stared at him n toched his face wid mine..when I realized wat I was doing i shouted

.s-AAAHHHHHHH

m-oye san kya kar rahi rahi hai??he said keeping his hand on her  mouth..why d hell r u shouting..

s-tum yaahan itne subha mere kamre main kya kar rahe hoo..she said in a loud tone..

m-who dad ka uncle se kaam tha toh maine socha ki main tumhe yaahan disturb karne aajaun..miss sleeping beauty..main yaahan kab se baitha hoon aur aapko pata nahin chalta..

s-acha toh tumne mujhe jagaya kyun nahi

m-kyun tum soti huye bahut..he realies wat he was abt 2 say..

s-baahut??

m-bhootni lagti ho..

s-YOUUUUUUU/ idiot..she strts running after him n hitting him wid a pillow..

m-ok ok yr m sorry'

s-gud u bettr be..

m-hmm who aaj raat mere saath baahar chalogi..

s-nahin..

m-good uska matlab hai hai haan..

s-mohit'acha yeh batau kahan jaana hai..

m-hmm who secret hai..

s-secret??

m-yupz'tum bas 8baje ready rehna il pick u up..

s-par.

m-par war kuch nahin bas ready rehna..aur.

s-aur.??

m-aur he said coming close 2 her she moves back n finally hits d wall..now she btw d wall n mohit..thy both were staring at each othr lovingly..

m-aur..aaj raat red pehna tum usme gorgeous lagti hoo..he said whispering in her ears..n kisses her cheeks softly n leaves d room.

sanaya blushes badly n touch s her cheeks were mohit kissed her'n runs inside d washroom..

In eveingg san got ready by 7:45.she wearing a red  knee length dress wid white sandals..she dint knw why she felt soo nervous'she had gone out with mohit earlier she thought abt d moriing n blushed badly..yeh mohit bhi na'paagal kahinka'wen she heard car horns..lagat hai who aagaya she looks at herself in d mirror  for 4 20th tym in d evening .. goes down hurriedly..n saw mohit standing outside his car he goes near her 4wards his hand n makes san sit in d car

 s-hii

m-hey

s-mohit abt toh batau hum kahan jaa rahe

m-nopes surprise..

s-plzz batau na I hate surprises..

m-nopes sorry wait 4 sometym.

s-uggghhhh I hate uu

m-bt I love u he says in his mind..

s-kuch kaha tumne?

m-abb nahin toh..

s-hmm'

m-ur looking beautiful

s-thanks..she blushed

after sometym thy both reach d destination..but mohit puts a cloth on sanz eyes..she gets irritated but does only 4 him..he takes her inside

  

s-mohit kahan ho tum??aur yeh patti kyun baandh ke rakha hai dekho agar tum abhi nahin aaye toh main yeh patti abhi kholne waali hoon ok..wen she doesn't get mohits reply she finally opend d cloth..n was surprised 2 see d place it a beautifull decoratd garden beautiful curtains were hung on d pillars n it had all her fav flowers n a table 4 two was set at d centre n on d table it had sanaya's fav choclate cake..she was surprised n impressed by d decorations she turns 2 look 4 mohit n was shocked 2 see mohit sitting on his knees'

s-mohit yeh tum kya kar rahe hoo?

m--plzz sanaya aaj mujhe bolne do main nahin jaanta main yeh tumhe bolke sahi kar raha hoon ya nahin par main khudko aur rok nahin sakta I LOVE U SANAYA main nahin jaanata kab kaise but I hv madly fallen in love with u..sanaya was socked hearing this tum mere lyff mein ek angel ho jab tum saath rehti hoo tab sab kuch perfect lagta hai tumhaare bina mein hamesha incomplete tha jab mein London mein tha tab main tumhe sabse zyaada miss karta tha meri har khushi aur gum hamesha tumhare saath pehle share karma chahta tha Mumbai waapas aaneke tumhaare saath spend kiya hu aek eke lamha mere lyf ke sabse special moments hain jab tum khush rehti ho hasti ho tab mere dil ko sukoon milta hai aur jab tum sad hoti ho tab mere dil mein dard hota hai.im sorry sanaya shaayd yeh kehkar maine apni frndship khodi plzz sanaya hamri frndship mat thoda na mein tumhaare pyaar ke bina reh sakta hoon but I cant stay alive without ur frndship..plzz before he could say anything more sanaya kneels down n cups his face he was shocked 2 see her crying.

s-yaad hai mohit main tumhe hamesha apni prince charming ke bare mein abtati thi ki who mujhe aayega aur apni duniyan mein le jaayega main aaj tak uska intezaar karti hoon par main yeh jaan nahin paayi ki mera prince charming mere hi saamne tha bas mein hi usse pehchaan nahin paayi maine sirf hamesha se tyumhe apna best frnd maana aur mujhe pata bhi nahin chala kit um kab mere best se sabse spcl frnd bangaye tumhaare saath spnd kiya hua hare k lamha mere lyf ke best momnts hain tumhaare saath jab bhi rehti hoon tab main sabse zyaada khush rehti hoon.. aur  yaahan aaj issi waqt yeh realize hogaya ki..ki still cryng I LOVE U TOO Mohit tum hi mere prince charming ho jiske saath main apne lyf ke har moments ko spcl banana chahiti hoon. I really love u n hugs him tightyh ehugs her back thy stay in dat position 4 10 mins crying in each othr arms feeling d most beautiful  moment of thr lives..aftersometym mohit breaks d hug

m-soo miss Sanaya Irani will u marry me??sanaya nods yes mohit slides d ring inside her hand.

s-i love uu

m-i love u too..he says flicking his nose with her's thy stare at each othr 4 sumtym n then finally touches his lips with her n both were lost in a passionate kiss...

5 YEARS LATER'

mm-mohit beta tum chinat mat karo san ko kuch nahin hoga relax son!

m-mom mein relax  kaise rehsakta pata nahin waahan san ko kitni takleef horaha hogi finally after a while d Doctor comes out frn d openration theatre

m-doctor kya hua sanaya theek toh haina plzz aap jaldi batyeh na

d-relax Mr Sehgal congrtas u r blessed with a baby girl mohit  was on cloud 9 he just couldn't ebleive his ears he immdeitaly goes indside n saw both his angel holding her princess

m-congratz jaan he said sitting beside her putting his arms arnd her

s-same 2 Mr Sehgal n gived d baby 2 mohit..

m-thanks baby 4 giving d most precious gift in my lyff..

s-sshh dnt say thanks 2 me yeh hamri pyaar ki nishaani hai..n kisses his cheeks so aapne apni beti ka naam ke bare mein socha'

m-yupzz..

s-acha janab ne soch liya aur humme bataya bhi nahin very bad..toh  toh kiya socha aapne?

m-bataun?

s-haan ji batayeh

m-RICHAA(sorry richu tujhe mohit ka beti banadiya)😆

s-wow baahut pyara naam hai..toh hamari pyaari princeess aapko apka naam acha laga na meri cuties princess  kisses her forehead

m-i love u jaan

s-i love u too baby n thy spnt their whole tym ..staring n talking der princess RICHA
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i hope u guys liked it..this was my first try..plzz do commnt or hit d like tab...
luv ya
shreya

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Posted: 13 years ago
RESSIE
 
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Heyyyy doll!!!

Pehle toh im really sorry for editing my comment too late!!!

And now coming to your os,

You gave a really very good try!

And who says ki you don't know how to write an OS? It's not too difficult!

This was monaya os, toh mujhe ye padhne mein double mazaa aaya!!

The way you described their feelings towards each other was so beautiful!!

And the best part of this OS was where sanaya felt insecure when mohit was talking to jenny!! Possessive girlfriend!

And then confession…….kiss…..haaayyyeeee it was sooo magical!!!

Aur finally shaadi…..fir ek cute si baby girl……..that was really very sweet!!!

I hope richa ko bahut achha laga hoga!!

Aur next time agar tune kaha ki you don't know to write an OS, to bahut maarungi!!

 

Love youu!!!

 

P.S- Do write more OS……would love to read them.

Edited by ria_lovesajan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice OS......really cute.and very well written. Do write more ......and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing,superb,fantastic!!!!!!!!!
Omg dear,it ws jus a perfect os .
it ws vry beautiful writen.
realy realy realy luv d part.
it ws an outstanding os dear.
plz do write mre nd mre os.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 13 years ago
well shreyu lovely OS yaar

its for Richu dats greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Happy birthday Richu
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.......!!!!!!
awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm OS richa........
it was toooooooooooooooooooooooo cutttttttttttttteeeeeeeeee.......
hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeee........luvd MoNaya confession.......
m lostttttttttttttttttttt in MoNayaland..........😍
wow last me unki beti bhi hui........tooooo good......
& tune richa ko unki beti bana diya???? lolzzzzzzzz........😆
hey richa "HAPPY B'DAY DEAR".......🥳
it was mind-blowingggggggggggggg dear..........
do write more & thnx 4 the PM........😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwww it was seriously wonderful OS loved it to the core yar 👏u did wonderful job hon 🤗 richa will love it for sure and thanks for pm 
Posted: 13 years ago
Really awesome Shreya...Loved it....Its for Richu that makes it more special...Do write more...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiiiiii
Beautiful os
Loved it
2 good
Loved da concept
Thanks 4 sharing
Plz do write more
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ria deeps n manji-unres soon..:):)😆

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