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Edited by daya0628 - 12 years ago

Congrats Dhayani on starting a FF!! 👏 🥳

Will read it in a bit - so for now

*Reserved* 😃


EDITED: Its a lovely FF Dhayani. You showed the sibling relationship so wonderfully. When Aadhi first came up i was thinking yeh kya - dutta kahan gaya 😆😆😆  Awesome FF, and once again congrats. Looking fwd to the next part 😳 👏👍🏼
Edited by sidra2007 - 13 years ago

congrats on startng a new FF! ⭐️ Edited by Suvi7884 - 13 years ago

very nice ff... congrats... update soon....

hey congratz...am soo glad dat ppl r startin new ffs nw   despite the negativity that has been goin on in this forum we still remain intact with our tasha passion lol which is obvious through lots of new creativity..keep it up guyz!!  

Congrats on ur new FF. Nice start... for a moment i thought Aadhi was her boyfriend lool.. Please add me to your PM list if you have one. :)

Originally posted by: sidra2007

Congrats Dhayani on starting a FF!! 👏 🥳

Will read it in a bit - so for now

*Reserved* 😃


EDITED: Its a lovely FF Dhayani. You showed the sibling relationship so wonderfully. When Aadhi first came up i was thinking yeh kya - dutta kahan gaya 😆😆😆  Awesome FF, and once again congrats. Looking fwd to the next part 😳 👏👍🏼

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it 🤗
yes I did Aadhi's part like that intentionally.
but I broke that bubble fast lol

next part will be coming soon ...

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

congrats on startng a new FF! ⭐️

Its really interesting..aww she has to leave her lil brother..to help with the business..aww they are so cute! I love bhai-behen nok jhok😳 cho cute!

Its awesome!!!

Continue soon! and thanks for the PM

Thanks 🤗 Glad you liked it :-)
lol yes i wanted to develop their bond first and their characters and bit
before I just move the story forward once... many characters yet to come 😉

Next part will be uploaded soon 😊 Thanks again :-)

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

very nice ff... congrats... update soon....

Thanks for commenting 🤗

Will update it soon ;-)

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

hey congratz...am soo glad dat ppl r startin new ffs nw   despite the negativity that has been goin on in this forum we still remain intact with our tasha passion lol which is obvious through lots of new creativity..keep it up guyz!!  

 

ur ff soundz rely honey..defo continue with it n plz add me 2 ur pm list  

Thanks 🤗
Glad you liked it 😊
& yes all these FF have made me want to write my own
Will definitely pm you when next one is up....which will be soon :-)