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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! di it was awesome update...
naku is such philosopher😆...but love the way she makes dutta to help his idol...
superbbb...looking fwd...love u...advance diwali wishes...

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Posted: 13 years ago
liked it 😊next part soon tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear shilpi
Thanx alot for the wonderful update once again ,,,loved it as always ,,,,,Keep up the great work ,,,will wait fr the nxt part ,,,thanx for the Pm ,,,u take care and see ya ,,,
Love and hugs
suhana🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful! Only one word is enough to describe this episode! Awaiting the next one eagerly!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the beautiful update, Shilpita😃.

Today, I managed to catch up with a few episodes that I has missed earlier. 😳

Cheers
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Posted: 13 years ago
i remember the time u had mentioned about how this one line came into ur head.. ek tukda aasmaan and you have written so beautifully about the same in the start! it was a sad state of affairs the way kamesh sir lost his licence.. but for someone like him that licence never meat much.. but for a young impressionable mind like Dutta who was in awe of him and adored the earth he walked on, it must have been very traumatic i suppose..and then in that angst, he cut off all ties with kamesh sir not giving him an opportunity to explain ..

the whole kati patang used as an analogy was brilliant.. i think when this story winds up, this is one thing that will stay with me for usre..it reminded me of those scenes from Jaane Tu Ya Jaane na where Imran's 1st GF always asked him ki kisi cheez ko dekh ke what interpretation can he make of it lol.. but this was very realistic and in her own sweet sensible way she points out to D the way she thinks is right..she understands and points out to him how he will always want to be like kamesh sir, at least a part of him will always want that..
naku shows her true selfless nature as she is wanting all this so that he can be at peace..yes, she will also be happy if he is happy,but ..

absolutely loved the relaxed, calm and no-drama wala entry scene of D to meet Kamesh and the way Kamesh asks himt o get his own steth!and of course, how D could not resist not helping out seeing so many sick patients and all waiting for sir to be free.. the inanae goodness in him as well as his duty as a doc prompts him to make that first move.. but it has been brought out so naturally and without any awkwardness or guilt or any other sort of inferior feelings between eitehr of them!

finally that old lady and her goat were hilarious.. showed D his place lol.. not an easy task that was hahaha.. Kamesh sir at peace too..

Now, i do hope you take the story onto the next level as i want the story to move forward and am sure you are working out something fab in that ever ticking brain of yours ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
For once u have managed to silence an ever bak-bak karnewali girl like me,i actually don't have right words to say what i feel about this chapter*awed muh*
The ending lines somehow brought tears ,such deep beautiful words,teri apni lines hai naa?
*Chahe saari kayanat ho tumhari par ek tukadaa aasmaan mera bhi*

Never gave any thought towards a kati patang,but u gave such unique thoughts about it & really amazed me the way u connected with one's life & their prospective for looking at certain things.

one cann't be the judge or jury for other's actions,same ways i cann't say what kameshji did to save that girl's life was right or wrong.Sometimes situations doesn't allow u to see things in pure white or pure black ,that time only ur inner soul guides u in right direction& same thing happened with Kameshji .But,unfortunately it ended badly with him loosing his licence & Dutta loosing his mentor.

Nakku as selfless as ever ,she is happy if Dutta is happy from inside & she saw what Dutta was trying to hide.Beneath all that anger,there was affection for his idol & Dutta also knows what Kameshji is doing is not ilegal,becaz trying to save someone's life is like god's worship & how can that be wrong.
One more time Nakku became KRISHNA & Dutta was ARJUNA ,who was stuck in the battle between his mind & soul.
Ur Nakku amazes me everytime with her simple yet wise thoughts,whenever i read her thoughts,be it on any issues,i feel thru her god is speaking,may be becaz she has such pure heart .But,the credit goes to her creator,that's u 👏its ur thoughts & ur words which comes out thru her.
May godess Sarswati always shower u with her blessings😊

Amidst all this,u managed to bring out a light moment thru Aajji & her goat,bechara Dutta ,kabhi kisine usko nalayak nahi bola hoga😆Finally Kameshji found another free-willed kite just like him but this kite has strong wings in the form of Nakku & he will flew to the heights which Kameshji always wanted for Dutta.


Chalo,ab meri ek complain bhi sun lo - *tumne badi shaan se worli sea-link ki sair kar lee,lekin Nakku ka number abhi tak nahi aaya 😕that's not fair.*
I think now the time has come for Dutta to realise the existance of Kanhaji.
Mujhe Nakku ka happy happy wala face dekhna hai*expectant muh*

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.
I love the poem. I don't really get what it means, but I love it.
It sounds nice. It would sound nicer if it was a song.
Um, so this doctor dude. He's freaky. I'd be scared of him, if I met him.
I don' tknow what to say. It's kinda confusing. That's why I like being a bimbo. I'm going to create bimbo land when I grow older. Have you read the Uglies series? I'm going to create a land like that...or maybe not...but I want to. I'll call it Happyland. Sab khush honge, and no problems, other than OMG I broke my nail. Cool na? Anyways mein kya keh rahi thi? Yeah so Naku goes on about a kite. ROFL That's so random. Koi aur topic nahi mila, so lets just start talking about a kite...and obviously later on I find out she was trying to tell him something...mmm so D goes on to help in the hospital..LMAO Lady with the goat...she wants D to fix the goat's horn🤣
Y'know, I reckon this Kamlesh dude is like me...sorta
I don't like fighting with anyone...if my parents scold me for something, and its not my fault, I still listen to it cause I know ki if I try and say something, it'll only make all the fighting go for longer, and I just want it to hurry up and end. But I still get and do what I want to, behind their backs. Only cause I know its right, though. I wouldn't do something bad, ever. I love myself too much to do that, na, thats why... =/
But I'm still confused.
You make me use my brain too much, Shilpi.
Now hurry up and update. Please. 😳 :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!!!! Finally I catched up , but ye kya there was only 4UDs :S
I think I came here after like 3months :/ hmmm

V nice the way the story hs progress , n N now studying catering n loL now lecturing too :p hahaha

This New entry is v intresting n now D too his sde n he guessed right who bought his change :)

Won't cmment much cos I am on phone, but nice going with ur FF n as said I knew it even before start reading te uD ;)

Thank n soon update han :p
Love Azy :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar please update karo its over one month
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