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Posted: 14 years ago
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Disclaimer: Ramblings again!!!

These ramblings are inspired by Panna's entry on her blog on "how Waiting is the only constant in life"

So just extending that to the dude, Prithvi Saxena, who was ,

Waiting for new job in NewZealand
Waiting for the return of his Dad
Waiting for Sameer's nautanki to end
Waiting for Varun to make a friend

Waiting for his dream girl
Waiting for Her to twirl
Waiting for him to guard
Waiting for Her to spar

Waiting for his Dad's freedom
Waiting for Elaji's confession
Waiting for Her to dance in trance
Waiting for Her dupatta to prance

waiting for his mom to recover
Waiting for Inder to disappear
Waiting for Her to soften
Waiting to touch Her hair silken

Waiting for his revenge to complete
Waiting for lose his senses in the heat
Waiting for the passion to explode
Waiting for his queen at her abode

Waiting for Her to understand his limits
Waiting for him to repent to his Mrs.
Waiting for the grief of Ela's death to pass
Waiting for Her to start the healing process

Waiting for Her to confide her fears
waiting for Sameer to come to his senses
Waiting for the PTC trauma to blow over
Waiting for the happiness to return with fervour

Waiting for Her smile again
Waiting for Her adamant stance
Waiting for Her touch again
Waiting for the blowing curtains

waiting for PTC to rot in jail
Waiting for his phatack to never fail
Waiting for Her to prepare him tea with sugar
Waiting for a son now along with his daughter


-- Mru

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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
awesome post.....🤗
missing them............😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely verses


hope Our wait for The Sequel is over soon

@Wow The Queen is back
love u for this pal
Edited by sia88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice verse
wow indeed a long waiting period for our Mr. Saxena

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Posted: 14 years ago
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jus BEAUTIFUL mrujeee.🤗
Guess u covered almost the whole series in jus a few wrds...😍
-Luv Niki 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FAINTS !! wottt thare itne bure din aa gaye ki
mhare nonstop badbad is inspiring u to ramble
Tasak Tasak Tasak

Originally posted by: Mru_bee


These ramblings are inspired by Panna's entry on her blog
on "how Waiting is the only constant in life"

Waiting for his phatack to never fail


-- Mru



Love dis line: Waitin for his phatack to never fail...
jus trying to add on to da story...
Disclaimer: Read at ur own risk. It might take u for a spin

waiting for da last day of shoot
waiting for a point dat was moot
waiting for da party dat closed it all
waiting for a sparkle to support da fall

waiting for redemption to his temper
waiting for his thots to remember
waiting for a reason to smile again
waiting for sumfink to ease da silent pain

waiting for da reunion of friends
waiting for jus a glimpse dat never ends
waiting for da wedding call dat ends it all
waiting for his unshed tears to fall

waiting to smile for da cameras
waiting for da conquest of new arenas
waiting for da axe to fall
waiting to get sum approval of yall

waiting for da last get-together eve
waiting for da time to leave
waiting for jus one single sign to be shown
After all its was his choice dat he stood alone

waiting for a window of opportunity to come
To ponder wot went wrong wer and den some...
and den some... and dem some... and den some !!


Loved ur Rambling Mru,
each stanza was created to make one realise
waiting is GUD for da heart.
It makes u PAUSE in life n realise wot wer is going wrong
and den u have a choice to find redemption or... NOT.

*skorpion*


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: skorpion

FAINTS !! wottt thare itne bure din aa gaye ki
mhare nonstop badbad is inspiring u to ramble
Tasak Tasak Tasak
Loved ur Rambling Mru,

each stanza was created to make one realise
waiting is GUD for da heart.
It makes u PAUSE in life n realise wot wer is going wrong
and den u have a choice to find redemption or... NOT.

*skorpion*




Jab Thari nonstop nautanki bandh hovey gee.. tabh mhari nonstop rambling khatam hovey gee chori!!! 😛

-- Mru

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Posted: 14 years ago
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son along with daughter...😍
loved it
too sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
Mruuuu !!
" Waiting........the only Constant " Panna is soo Right............ 👏👏
and our Pri too .......... Waiting forever .......... It is soooo True !! Fantastic !!
How Wonderfully , you have Encapsulated the whole show in these few lines !! 👏👏
and well , we are Waitingg too............. 😊
Amiya
Edited by petunia121 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mru...

beautiful prose that depicts the whole story of one n only Mr Pri Saxena :))..

Panna..

beautiful prose depicting the story of the one n only..... :P :D

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