The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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Posted: 13 years ago

I am again here to start a new story. I know, u angry on me that I am not updating mypending FFs, but suddenly, the idea of this story stucked in my mind. I love this story, specially the background, it was attract me so much. So I thought to use the background in a Mayur story. 


So, here I am and this is another story from my side, this is another Mayur story, i titled it 'The Father of Blue Bird'. tell me friends, do you like this title???

It's a romantic love story of Mayank-Nupur, but I told you earlier that the background is totally different. I took this background from a Bengali Kishor(young people) Sahitya, the name is also the same, and also took some characters and some situations from the story, rest of completely mine.


I dragged Mayur out of metro. They aren't Mayank Sharma and Nupur Bhushan, I changed them intoBengali. Their behavior also changed and some situation also. Mayur meet in a
semi-town of a small Zilla in West Bengal. I introduce Mayank as Mayank
Roychaudhury, the son of a rich businessman, born and brought up in Mumbai, but
he's not a typical metro boy. He's character was very shy, extremely introvert
and less-spoken, he merely speak a word. Nupur as Nupur Sengupta, a
middle-class Bengali girl, lived in a small semi-town. She's not outspoken, but
a completely free girl, she couldn't hesitate to speak to a strenger. She's a Bengal
girl, happy in single and but, never mind if mingled. They are from a pure Bengali
family with Bengali culture.


There was some other character too, but introduce them with time. One of the important character wasJethumoni. His name is Abanindranath Mukherjee, his friends called him Aban,
and youngers called him Jethumoni (father's older brother, in bengali).


it was hardly 10-12 parts.So, if you like this story, then tell me ... its completely your decision
that I 'll continue or not. And you all guys are free to criticize... I appreciate all your opinions.


Thanks.


Love

Suja❤️


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Posted: 13 years ago
** INDEX **


Far from Mumbai        >>>    Page 3
Jethumoni's house      >>>    Page 6
Meeting in Dawn          >>>    Page 9
Beautiful...                      >>>    Page 12
Effects of Blue Bird(a) >>>    Page 16 
Effects of Blue Bird(b)>>>    Page 20 
Tamaso Maa Jyotirgmaya> Page 23
U,Me & Pranjal              >>>     Page 27
Said-Unsaid                    >>>     Page 32
I Love You                        >>>     Page  37
You are in My Heart  >>>     Page  42
Kismath                           >>>      Page  47

PROMO                             >>>      Page  52

Turbulence                     >>>     Page  53
Separation                      >>>     Page  59
Shattered Dreams      >>>     Page   64
Apart from Life             >>>     Page  71
Ray of Hope                      >>>    Page  77
Truth v/s Faith(a)        >>>   Page  83
Truth v/s Faith(b)       >>>    Page 89
Intezaar...                        >>>    Page 95
Intezaar(continuation)>>   Page  105
Aagaman                            >>>  Page  112
Faded Lovestory             >>>  Page  119
Confrontation                 >>> Page 125
Proceeding to New Life  >> Page 135
Vivah                                   >>> Page 141





Thank you⭐️


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES

*edited*

wow!!! i just love the cs
and the title suits the Cs
it is just freakin amazing..!!
im glad that m reading yur FF'z from now
but i have no idea wat to say 
how to describe in words
but this FF is minblowing superblowing 😆
just cont soon
ill be waiting for da updt and yippiee m the first person 🥳
thnkxx for the PM
Edited by Sanaya-luv-arti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Suja..
 
I am a great fan of Bengali literature..  From my childhood, I started reading Bengali novels ,ofcourse translated ones.. So im really interested to see Mayur in such background.. Pls continue.. but do continue Game too...
sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
am very eager to read the story dear....pls continue soon.........................
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think i have read this story....but i'll love to see it thru the MayUr angle, and i know you'll do full justice to it👍🏼

congo🤗

waiting for the beginning😊

and please do update Game😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the introduction is good
the concept is on bengali wow its great
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
suja i want to read it.................i'm a bengali......so i love to read mayur as bengali.....suja what is the name of that bengali shahitya can u tell me plz.............nd who is the writer......waiting for ur story.
kirti123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
would love to read it
thanks for the pm
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
do start it soon...eager to read the story