FF~4~HEARTBEATS~ Unfinished- notepg 69

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***HEARTBEATS***

part 18



Geet looked at him... He was right...
Geet- au... Me...
Maan- let's go...
Geet didn't look back at him at all... It's been 1 hours since they didn't talk... The mountain the deep stream was beautiful... Yet here both alone... Lost in one another... But not talking....

Maan never seen her this quit before he could feel how his few words made the situation so akwarde... But it was true! She hardly know him or him knows her... In a relationship it's important to know one another... Before anything take place... She needs to grow up... Understand what type of relationship she will be in... There are many responsibility that she have to fulfill towards me and my family...

There canoe came near the land....
Both gets off... While Geet sits on the rock crossing her leg... She still didn't say a word... Maan came and sat next to her... She kept a safe distance... And moved way bit...
Maan- ka hua? Why are you so quit?
Geet nodes a no... Nothing was wrong...
Maan- hmm...
Geet- the thing you have said earlier... It's true... I don't know you at all...
Maan looks at her. Bit surprised with her maturity.
Maan- that's true.
Geet- I fell like it's just me who likes you. If you don't I will stay way.
With those word she gets up and walks way.
Maan felt a bit guilty... But he meant something els. He meant we should talk more to know one another... But she took it completely wrong way...
Maan gets up and flows her. He holds her hand to stop...
Geet spines round... Not looking at his eyes...
Maan- Geet... Meri ako me deko...
Geet nodes a negative...
Maan- I want you to know me before we move on in our relationship...
Geet looks him with her dark brown eyes... Something he always love... He unwillingly walks towards her... Not sure where he was heading...
Geet rests her self against on of the rock...
The surrounding was beautiful and romantic... It was breathtaking... The strong sun rays just started to get mild... The warm cool breeze was touching there soft skin... Making them shiver...
Geet puts her hand round his neck... Maybe a kiss she thought. It was a perfect moment for a kiss... She looked at his lips... It was tempting.... Her heartbeats raised as he came really close to her... She parts her lips breathing hard. Maan could here her rapid breathing and her sweet scent was Tempting him.... She tightens her hand round his neck....
Maans hand unwillingly travels to her waist bringing her close... There was a weird urge was building up in there body... But then suddenly maan backed way...
Maan- not now...
Geet looks at him questingly...
Maan smiles and kisses her forehead... Even with the small peck geet felt warm... She hugs him tight... Resting her head on his chest... Maan hesitated to hold her for a minute... But then he puts his hand round...

After long time of enjoying there little sweet hug they walked back towards the canoe... There was few centimeter gap between them... Geet wanted to fill it by holding his hand but she kept way respecting maans wish....

Geet- can I sit at the back?
Maan- umm... Why?
Geet- umm... Au...
Maan- no it's safe for me to sit at the back...
Geet- why?
Maan- I can keep an eye on you...
Geet looked at him for few minutes after realizing what he meant she blushed... She sits in with him...
Maan removes the barrier and brings her close.. Geet rests her self on him and puts her feet in the water... Enjoying the view along with him...
Maan- you are in 2nd year in collage?
Geet nodes...
Maan- umm... It's not holiday yet... Isn't that effecting your study?
Geet- umm... No!..... (kitni boring hi ay.... i am trying to enjoy my self here he is asking me about study)
Maan stops rowing as the reached the high speed of the current... He hugs her from the back... Geet gets more comfortable... And relaxes more enjoying the warmth....
Maan- hmm...
Geet- I am doing travel and tourism... Working on India... It's 100% corse work. No exam. And India is one of them... I am nearly done... You see I will wright about this experience as well...
Maan- with me? Maan looks t her as she looks up...
Geet- why do you want me to... She smirks... Maybe how you teased me to kiss then disappointed me...
Maan gives her a glare...
Geet- joking baba...
Maan smiles...
Maan- are you going to university?
Geet- no...
Maan- ku?
Geet- usce pahely apse shadi jo kar lungi....
Maan looks at her in surprise...
Geet- why? Don't you have any intention to merry me?
Maan- au bath nahi hi...
Geet sits up...
Geet- do you have wife already? She asks suspiciously yet joking....
Maan- umm... What if I say I do... He answered jokingly...
Geet widens her eyes... - I will jump in this deep stream straight way.... And she was about to when maan holds her tight....
Maan- umm... What if I say…. she is would be….. and is right in front of me....
Geet gives him big wide smile And hugs him tight...


after few hours....

Maan- we are back...
Geet- itni jaldi... Can we go again...
Maan- Geet!
Geet- ku... Don't you like being with me? She asked teasingly...
Maan- stop joking and let's go...
Geet smiles and frees her from his hug... Maan pulls the canoe on the land... While Geet waits for him... Geet always smiles at him while maan always look grumpy....
Geet hugs him from the back...
Geet- I hardly see you smile... Meri liye ek hasi to de do....
Maan- umm...
Geet looks at him from the back... Maan spines his head on the side finding geets face mere incise way... But before they could even do anything... Everyone comes in...
Geet frees maan instantly...
Maan smirks at Geet...
Maan- ka hua? Aur pas avo...
Geet- why you don't mind? She smirks and holds him more tighter...
Maan started to get uncomfortable... Who was he kidding... She wouldn't even care if anyone sees them...
Maan quickly frees him and walks way... Geet flows him giggling....

Merra- you 2 r back quick...
Geet- umm... Yes di...
Maan looks at geet... While Geet blushing...
Ridzy noticed something defiantly happened between them... Ridzy decided to ask her...

Later in the evening...

Geet came from shower Flowed by ridZy...
Ridzy- so tell me... What you 2 have been up to? I could clearly see change in maan... And you blushing...
Geet- umm... She started to blush again hearing maans name....
Ridzy- look... You are blushing again... Tell me na... Please...
Geet- nothing much...
Ridzy- did you two kiss? I heard older the wiser... You know he might have more experience....
Geet gives her a glare...
Geet- he will only have experience with me... And no one els....
Ridzy- he is 26! He might have some collage GF!
Geet- umm....
Ridzy- you should find everything out before you get too close to him...
Geet- who cares... He likes me now... Don't eat my head'.




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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First wee. Amazing update.
Loved there talk.
Maan is so sweet.
Love him
Geet lol.
And ridzy idiot. I wonder what geet will ask maan now
XEdited by Ahill-ks - 13 years ago