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Posted: 13 years ago

People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out, but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is revealed only if there is light from within.
Elisabeth Kbler-Ross

 

It was a long night in the Thakur Haveli. First there was the arrival of the long waited sister and then the local police force.

 

Part 1

 

Avdesh's sadness continues. Even seeing his sister after so long could not shake him from his despondency. He is finding it hard to come to terms that for the very first time in his life he has hit a wall. Neither his strength nor his fighting skill is helpful in this situation and he is left feeling useless, depressed. That thought consumed him and wrapped around his heart like a rope with thorns. Constantly pricking and drawing blood.

 

His sister joins him asking to meet her new bhabi, then she was praising Arpita and teasing him about their jodi....it was like rubbing salt on his fresh wound. Her perky voice finally shattered his fragile control and unleashed his self loathing. Shikha was the loving sister no matter how long she has been away. She was like a flickering candle in his dark life at the moment, and I hope she soon shows him a light filled path that would help Avita reunite.

 

A lingering shot of the wedding picture spoke thousands...the happy face of the couple felt alien in this sad room which was empty, awaiting the return of the one who belonged here. And yet the picture is also a beacon of hope that not all is lost, the couple shown are in love and have more faith in each other than others do about them. Most of all, the picture frame served as a promise that Arpita will be back in this room again. That Justice will prevail, no matter how blind at the moment.

 

Part 2

 

The residence of the haveli gathered in the main room, tense and angry. The police officer RV and his men are here, in the middle of the night to carry out a search. Avdesh barely able to contain his rage and fury turned his back as if to shut out this continuing nightmare he was trapped in. Once again he was helpless, his wife's captivity holding him down and locking his mouth against the torrent and hatred waiting to spill over on the man responsible for the grief he and Arpita are going through.

 

RV took the opportunity to shoot some poisoned arrows towards Avdesh, first saying a criminal has no izzat and that law does not differentiate between men and women ...fiery slices on Avdesh's skin. That he was being pushed and prodded so that he would lose his temper and gives the other man the opportunity he was looking for to empty bullets into him, Avdesh was very well aware. It was a testament to his love how he managed to turn the other cheek on the incendiary words.

 

As for RV, well I hated his words to Avdesh about his lack of izzat and that the justice was blind but unfortunately it was all true. People would say a criminal, by his very actions, has renounced all izzat and does not have any. As for justice, well her eyes are blindfolded so she could deliver true justice by weighing her scales only. Yet it left a bad taste in my mouth to hear RV say these words. With his very actions he is showing that Avdesh has more izzat and a more sense of Justice and fair play than RV will ever do. His senses have been skewered and it is only now that we are truly seeing his warped vision of life. Indeed, Justice in his case is blind but soon her scales will be weighed and everyone will see who tips the scales – Avdesh or RV.

 

Rv's depraved nature and the fast slide into darkness continued in the bedroom. His sly comments and the sense of excitement that was arising in him as he looked at the bed and the wardrobe and that intense look at Avita wedding picture all hinted at dark emotions within him. RV was jealous of Avdesh and wanted everything he had including his wife but not from a sense of love, I think. It is more about owning something that bhaiyyaji had. There was a certain look of covetousness in his eyes as he looked around. If he could step into this life, I think he would so. He also seemed to like tormenting people, physically or mentally, and it gives him some sort of boost a rush if the smile and enjoyment on his face is anything to go by.

 

Commentary:

I enjoyed watching the brother-sister interaction. Both seem very comfortable even though they had been apart for a while, it speaks highly of their love and affection and I remain hopeful that this arrival will be positive for Avita.

 

Bhauji though was furious when RV came, you could see her brain clicking away that he had come without telling her. Her speech on the balcony was correct and all but her eyes, mouth and tone were saying something else, which he very conveniently ignored – plus he could hardly explain all while the whole haveli was listening on. But I predict a major clash between these two about his midnight visit to the haveli. This woman would not take it kindly that her orders had been ignored. She had given him the weapon and told him to stay away from Avdesh. I wonder if RV in his raging appetite for revenge has given himself away too soon? Bhauji is a clever woman, if she is not satisfied by his explanation she will soon be ahead of him in this game of theirs.

 

Lastly, it was unbearable seeing Arpita like that, but I am glad we got to see her. For some reason, it felt like so much other stuff was happening and she was cooped away and almost forgotten except by Avdesh. This seem to correspond with her appearance, she is fading fast and wilting to the point of no return. It really hurt me to see her limping and I almost cried when she found the kalash empty. I so wanted one of the other prisoner's to offer her some water, a clandestine friendship and support network between them all. I am worried about the repercussion of her incarceration. it would leave some sort of mark on her soul, it would change her in a fundamental way, maybe give her some darkness. But more than anything, it was so glaring that for the moment, Justice was blind to her torment.

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok  dreamy yday u ordered me to go to sleep


now i order u  to go to sleep

go on  now

wud ans u aaram se on this..
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Posted: 13 years ago
and ya  the like count has been increased to  50 per person


nw me off catch u all later

dreamy go away go to sleep yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww dreamy this is also superbbbbbbbbbbb
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First off, hats off to you Dreamy for another fabulous analysis. I totally agree with your title. In fact, justice is blind in all countries and some of our laws are so stupid that I see no point in their mere existence. People that are so into following rules and laws are the ones that usually break them and make more horrendous mistakes. RV is an excellent example of a law enforcer who uses the name of law to commit sins. I agree that he enjoys tormenting Avi and his inappropriate phrases where just said to irritate and anger Avi. Also, I do agree that RV is jealous that Avi has a normal home life and loving wife despite his occupation as a gunda. He is annoyed that someone such as Avi could be cared for and that a wife is endearing many painful tortures for the name of the love with her husband. He can't comprehend how someone could fall in love and keep loving someone like Avi . But just like justice, love is blind and no one knows who their true loved ones are until they meet them. Right now, RV has the desires to remove all of Avi's strengths and leave him standing like a defenseless lone man. His jealousy for Avi's life might make him want to possess Arpi because he might also want to be care for just like Avi. For some time, I have imagined that during a life ending feud between Avi and RV, RV would tell Avi that he shouldn't worry about Arpi because RV would take care of Avi's wife after Avi is gone. All of RV's actions, just keep bring me back to this thought. I think that RV is going to become so obsessed with Avita's love that he would want Arpi for himself. His actions of caressing the blanket and touching her sarees had just added to this theory. Hopefully, I am wrong and we never see a track like this. It is truly unfortunate that the the memory of Arpi is decreasing hours by hours in the haveli, but it would remain forever in Avi's heart. I was hoping to see Arpi today and see how she was doing and her state was heartbreaking. If RV doesn't plan to kill Arpi with the train, Arpi would die from malnutrition due to thirst and hunger. Isn't it part of our culture to give water to a thirsty person? My mother had taught me that it was a sin to refuse to give one water to reduce their thirst. She had told me that god would punish me someday and that I would suffer a similar circumstance and thus I grew up following her rules. I agree that god would punish RV for his sins and he would not have the opportunity to seek for forgiveness. The only way he could redeem himself is by supporting Avita and singling out Bhauji. Dreamy you are correct in saying that justice was blind to Arpi when she was asking of water. This was a good hearted girl who never thought to harm anyone by heart and only circumstance had brought her to prison. Nevertheless, she was given no mercy and was treated brutally by constant torture, being forced to cook a major meal, and then being denied food and water. She was denied her most essential and basic need for survival. I think as Avi changes into a better person, Arpi might agree with his dark side. She now understands Avi's reasons for becoming a gunda and she might support him in the battle against the merciless law enforcers. However, I don't think she will ever agree to murder and not matter what she will not change this opinion. The thought of murdering RV had brought her to the point of attempting to suicide. She will not wish to experience that dread all over again. But now she will accept Avi for everything that he is and she will try to change him even though it means she has to step into the dark side. Arpi will be willing to do anything for Avi. Likewise, after the jail experience, I don't think Arpi will bear to see Avi suffer her suffering. She will struggle to keep him out of such misery and fight to change him to a different person. It is great that there would be another person to influence Avi thoughts such as Shika. I want to add that her entry was very loving, I could see that Shika had a place in this haveli and that indeed it was her home. The goons and Panditji gave her an expression of great respect and affection as if she was their own sister. Also, the interaction between Avi and Shika shows that they are very close because they have only each other for siblings. Even Bhauji can't interfere with their bond and it seems that she is disturbed by Shika's appearance. Shika will give Avi great support and she will be a hand in saving Arpi. I'm not sure if Avi is going to use an illegal or legal method to save Arpi but he would save her. Furthermore, it is true that Bhauji is very intelligent and that she will retaliate if she knows that RV has broken their agreement. This women is a snake that will be waiting to take her next strike, if things don't go her way. But maybe RV will blackmail her to inform Avi of their deal and Bhauji's betrayal.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Another beautiful analysis Dreamy....👏

Arpi's state was sooo pitiful...I too had tears in my eyes 😭
For heaven's sake, give her some water...she's not asking for anything else...this Shyama is sooo brutal She shud join Bj's gang....
Again...a woman who is now the greatest enemy of another woman (Arpi)....

And...about Shikha and Avi...I loved th
eir chemistry...

The fact that Avi is happy seeing her..but at this moment he can't express his happiness towards her...was portrayed wonderfully 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey meri cute se ,pyaari se dreamyy
this is 4 uuuuuuuuuuu
teraa analysis aisa hai humdum
jiase chamke dhoop mein shabnammm
jabse humne  analysis padha kasam
hum rahe nahi hummmmmm
kya kiya kya kiya re dreamyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dreamy kya keh ke
rv ko bulaogi maar kah ke jab aayega
ohh dreamyyy
kinaa maza aayega jab rv  hasne ke kaabil bhi nahi rahega
itne achhi police ki dress kon pehnega
ussey pehnane wala(rv) toh ab jinee se raha
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi i m back.. what to say dreamy i read and re read and re read now i m at point of no read hehee
sorry  just trying to do bit of comedy.

everythng u mention from the title its  perfect

justice is blind and i have this image of justice lady.
insaaf ka tarazu  in hindi

blind and holding scales

those scales tip to other side now and then.

u know yday was a tale of one night. one night shikha enters police enter haveli search in haveli plus a momentary sad glimpse of arpita in jail.

whole one night story and the sequences leading to it..

dark forces have entered haveli and playing havoc on avdesh mind, soul and heart. and the light only comes from arpita love.. its keeping avdesh intact and controlled, but he wud seek his full revenge..  when time comes..

i liked the line in beginning the photo was the happy moment there rest was alien..

and as for rv again justice and law
in guise of law he seems to justify his actions on criminal..

someone tell him since when is arpita a hardcore criminal to be treated  with total cruelty..
for that matter neither is avdesh hard core criminal.

i had said mayb rv is lal singh man but there is just this point  tht he is big egoist and over ambitious. and mayb thats how he got to the top
he is too ruthless and in his ego he is blinded by lot of things and resorts to mind games.,

time wud come beta wait till our lion wakes up and u would have taste of ur own medicine.


when other day at time of shikha entry there was happiness on everyones faces and happy music played which signified she is positive force in haveli..

what more to say
i m short of words..  rest everyone has said everything perfect


and u dreamy better u go to sleep on time. i know when i hv lack of sleep what happens to me.


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey  ferdous🤗

humm where do i start?

at the first  bahujis reaction: exactly bj s face showed she  wasnt happy to see RV &  she shocked too.( i think ) & i m waiting for  major clash b/w them!

as for RV: i must say he is very skilled at his work .he is a intelligent & especialist  psychologist.he exactly knows how motivates a man like avdesh.at the first, entered to his bedroom & sat on the bed.the most private place for a man! where only couple can stay with each other & spend best & private moment.( of  course  we know till now they didnt have  SR) .

he  was aimed ardors & enthusiasm  of avi.
he touched  their blanket &  arpis sari.
the worst torture for a man- especially  eastern man - is   insult  to  his wife &  to aim her purity.

one point: if RV wud undersatnd  that  bahuji is only reason for all of avis crims & she ordered to him that he has to revenge of LS, what will he do?
if he really is a honor & decent man after knowing truth he should behave differently. what do u think?

Edited by chista - 13 years ago