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Everyone welcome; These are my baby steps attempt to write a full fledged ff in this forum..You are all free to comment liberally with your posts...
Roses or Guns, Praises or Criticisms I accept humbly. For a change if the story is lagging or dull or without interest you are all welcome to give me suggestions and I will incorporate ur ideas.. So thanz in advance for patiently reading this and enjoy the story....
DO DIL ❤️ ❤️.... MIL RAHE HAIN
PROLOGUE
Saachi was looking at the Bouquet of Red roses and the greeting card tucked within it..It caught her attention as the first thing this morning.. She was late waking up as she was busy the previous night giving finishing touches to her Ballet. It was to be enacted out at her school's Annual day..Her tired and weary eyes were hurting and stiffling an yawn she got up from the bed.. and Lo these beautiful roses caught her eye...she saw the card ;nothing was written in it except a big heart shaped balloon figure.. wondering who had sent it she went in search of her mammi...
Good morning mammi ji, g mornin mama ji; she wised them both and joined them for tea.. Maami aap ko path hai kya , khon mereliye roses bejeha aur woh card?
Kya rose or card beta mujhe toh patha nahin.. shaayad Shreya se pooch..Jaldhi thyaar ho ja beta late hora hai school ke liye..
Saachi was on the way out when Shreya on the way in from her tuitions greeted her..gmornin didhi... wow dekha woh bouquet. kithni sundar hai.. mein subh ootne se hi dekha.. kisne bejha hai didhi? saachi was at a loss for words.. toh thume bhi patha nahin who gave these flowers... Ajeeb lagtha hai.. does naanu and naani know anything shreya?..
Arre didhi woh dono aaj hi aane walena haridwar se.. yeh kaisa ho saktha hai? jo bhi ho someone is really fond of you.. wah kya baat hai didhi.. kya kuch chakkar hai kya? Shreya thum bhi na.. kya kya bolthi hai.. chalo mein baad mein dekungi, ab school jana hai, bahut late hogya.. bye bye..
Saachi's mind were on the flowers and mystery card.. who wld have the audacity to place them on her bedside when both shreya and herself were sleeping...
the very thought gave her goose bumps and an uneasy feeling...with these thoughts she entered the Doon School....
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