Originally posted by: kiran_28
wen will u going 2 update then?
Originally posted by: Oblivious
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved premeer scenes...π
thanks for the pm ...and please update soon...
Originally posted by: kiran_28
yaar i totally luv ur FF/SS.totally crazy about them. i must say u r a great writter. keep it upπ
Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk
wow !
dat was awsum! Ajay n Hetal r goin good! hope 2 c them together soon wid Juhi :) ! πaw! luved meet scenesπ!! MEHER is so sweet! aw! missin meher lyk hell nw! πwow premeer romance was "hawttt" πi srsly thnk wht prem said "PB, did you and Bhabhi have a fight? Oh, I see what really happened...mattress fighting? When can we expect a Choti Heer or Chota Prem? Let's see nine months from now...that will be March of next year...I'm going to be a Chachu..."would b cumin true...! hehehe chahat on her way!ππaw! wht happened?? why did vinay bhinder cum?? is the truth out of ajay n hetal???thnks for d Pm!n do update soon dis 1 but before dat d SSπ³π³
UPDATE IS OWSUM.π THANKS 4 PM.π GREAT WORK GRACEπ
Awesome update yaar...hope hetals prblm solve soon...i want ph 2 hav their own child...
ok direct point premeer romance π³
it was βΊοΈ wt can i say βΊοΈ lollzzz m so crazy about them
seriously yaar luv ur writin ππΌ...u described so well...
ending part was serious type...hope nothin is serious...have 2 wait nw...
thnx for d pm...do update soon
Originally posted by: harshitideewani
thanks for the awesome update Graceπ loved the way PremHeer made Hetal and Ajay meet each other talk and sort out the matter betwwen them , π
hope Ajay excepts Hetal & juhiloved the Preeth and MehrβΊοΈ small and cute sceneOhhh Veera and Nihal avoiding each other , hope nihal πsoon realize and confess to Veera about his loveLoveddd My Most romaantic coupleee Prem β€οΈ Heer the steamy and hot bedrom scenes,what suddenlyy happenedddβwaitinggg for nexttt updateee sooon
Originally posted by: luv angel
hey amazingg updatee
loved it all specially premeerthanks for the pm
Originally posted by: vrushika
hey grace
loved the updateactually i firstly want 2thank u fr updatingthen say sryif i m late 2 replyand also thank u fr the pmand nw ur updatewow wow wowactually awsumsuperbfantastic lovelyall the best words fr ur updatent oly this bt alli just love themall are really very specialhalf of my day goes in thnkng wht u r gng 2 updateand whn u r gng 2 updateiu eagerly wa8 fr themtalking abt 2dy updateit ws superb frmstart till endespecially the bedroom part ws the besti cld imaginewht must b happeneingwow prem and heerand then wow wow wow!!!!how romantic and sizzlingand hope ajay accept juhi and hetaland i thnk that prem and heer shld really thnk abt whtpreet has saidactually it ws premwho immitated preetbut anuways they shldthnk abt itit wld b love;lyso plz update the next partasapwaitinglove vrushika
i m here grace π
Awesmeee update π ...luvd how premeer made hetal ajay meet and solve their problem out...hope ajay accept them bth...hmmm i think prem isnt quite ready to adopt hetal...like why to adopt smeone else's child we can hav our own...orr he must be fearin will he be able to fulfil this responsibility orr will he able to luv her the way he will luv his oen child.
Other than tht meher preet scene was really cute...aww nihal veera avoidingg each other...OMG i just luvd the premeer room scene...sooo hottt and steamy...enjoyed every bit of it.
Thanks for pm
Update sooon
Originally posted by: sreyap92
i really like how you didn't show them as parents right away after marriage!!! so we got some more romance cuz usually after the kids there isn't much romance and we got to see cute moments!!
Hey Grace great update.
This chapter really had me laughing.I am glad Prem, Heer, Ajay, Hetal and baby Juhi's meeting went well. I was very proud of Hetal and her maturity towards her response's question about Ajay marrying her. She is right in every ways. Why marry someone if you really are not ready to marry that person or if you are not in love with them anymore. It would have been a big lie to Juhi.For the first time in my life, I actually felt bad for Veera. Not even in the show did I feel bad for her, not even when she died. When she died I was Ok, I know that was mean but that brat deserved it. π Anyways, she didn't deserves that kind of treatment from Nihaal. What is wrong with him? If he doesn't love Veera, just tell her why is he still avoiding and ignoring her...unless he really does have feelings for her but is trying to deny it π. Someone should do this to Nihaal ππ€£ <----- this was me when Nihaal and Veera fell into the pool. I thought I was going to die out fo laughter when that happened. At the end I loved how everyone eventually ended up inside the pool and Babuji, Kiran and Rishi won the battle. π That was a really great scene.Preet and Meher's scene was very cute. I am really glad Preet kept his mouth shut and gave Meher a beautiful compliment. β€οΈNaughty Prem and even more naughtier Heer. Those two lovebirds are too cute and too much in love. Loved their scenes and their love scenes π³. Loved how Prem was imitating Preet π. I wonder what Preet's reaction would have been if he heard his PB teasing him.I can't believe Vinay and Kiran's mom (sorry I forgot her name π³) showed up. Was Vinay even invited? π‘ This is going to be an intense confrontation. I really hope Kiran comes out of this fine. He doesn't deserve his good name being dragged in the mud by his stupid mother.π‘ π‘Thank you for the PM. I am really looking forward to your next update. π
Originally posted by: deshdeewani
sorry fr being late.
another wonderful update.realy luved it.πprem is waiting fr every one in the cafe.and when heer comes,he trying to kiss her in front of ajay.π³but heer did't allow him to kiss her.πprem is confused about adopting juhi.πbut he is right yaar.hetal is right but ajay has to accept the fact that juhi is his doty and his responsbility.premeer and scotch scenes was to cute.they r so sweet with juhi.πpoor veera...i really feel pity on her.and whtt nihal too comes in party ,but to meet his family not veera.πhetal juhi scenes was nice.and the family scenes was alsoo good.meet's part was short but cute.i m glad preet compliement meher.πkunal droped nihal-veera in the pool on ash's signal,πbut then get scold by maya-ash.poor kunalπand then every one is landed in the pool.and prem miss his heer.hmm.πno wonder,i too miss her that time yar.and premeer romance was justβΊοΈand then prem imitating preet was so funnyπbut he is right yaar,if preet had seen them at that time.he surly said something like that.and omg!omg!viney and heenaπ‘at the party.who invited themπ‘π‘π‘hope premeer controled the situation.and kiran don't get so embarrased in front of every one.i think after this situation,the maan's posponed their return.thanks fr the pmand update soon.π
Originally posted by: newt2007
Sorry Grace . i haven't commeted for past three parts.
Thanks for the lovely updates.
you handled every situation very well. with your wonderful writing you given life for each character.
I serioulsy want you to be script writer for the show if Harshiti returns together.
Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.
Originally posted by: sowmya18
awesome update...
loved it...
thanks for the pm...
Originally posted by: ummesulaiman
Thanks for the wonderful update! You are an amazing writer Grace!
Originally posted by: repunzell
thank u for the masalay darr updateπ!!!
it was so good of prem n heer to keep a meeting b/w hetal n ajay...hope it continuesπ!!n thn the hot romance of prem n heer was a treat to usππ³!!!!!! loved itβ€οΈ!!bt nw wht happened...i guess the family found out abt ajay n hetal or sumething lyke thtπ²!! i hope ajay doesn't back out n accept his family n prem n heer can handle the situation smoothly which is not possible thouπ!!anyway amazing update n doo update sooonnn...don't take much tymeee plzzz!!!!
Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
The update was wonderful ...
Specially Premeer part ...Premeer can never get enough with each other ...But i loved their hot steamy scene ...For me they are a perfect example for perfect couple ...The end part looked very twisty ...What must have happened ...Update soon ...Thnx for pm ...
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