BHPH-17th Dec-Written Update-Dadi meets Shravan

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the delay guys! Had a final this morning. 😳

~Rocky's Garage~

(Shravan sees Sanchi coming towards her and gets happy. He goes to her.)
Shravan: Give me your finger.
(Sanchi forwards her hand and he bites her finger.)
Sanchi: Ouch! What are you doing?
Shravan: This is not a dream either? Sanchi, do you know how much my pay is? Rs. 50,000/-
Sanchi: (surprised) 50,000? Really? You have surprised me and now its my turn. I have something for you.
Shravan: What?
Sanchi: First promise me you'll do what I say. (and takes him outside)
(Shravan sees Dadi coming & gets happy. Dadi is sad to see him like this.)
Dadi: Bittoo, you stay here? You've lost weight in two days. Look what I've brought for you. (gives him sweets)😭. How do you live here?
Shravan: I am fine Dadi! I work and finally earn. I don't have any problems here because..because..
Sanchi: Because he has an identity of his own here, dadi!👏 Doesn't matter how this place looks like.
Dadi: (to shravan) Today my son has grown into a mature responsible man. I am very happy. You make sure to show Pratap what you are.
(Dadi leaves and Sanchi to come back on time)
Sanchi: Thank you shravanji
Shravan: For what?
Sanchi: You assured Dadi you're fine.
Shravan: But do you think Dadi will tell Hitler to call me back?
Sanchi: Why do you keep on repeating the same thing? You are doing such a good job here. We have already won half the battle. Now, just think about our golden future.

~Jaiswal Mansion~

Pratap and Saurabh (finally😲) walk in from the main door and are talking about work. They stop when they hear Madhura talk on the phone.
Madhura (on phone, Nidhi standing beside her): Shravan is fine, right Ma? Give him lots of love from my side.
(she hangs up the phone, turns around, and sees Pratap)
Pratap: Sanchi is with Ma too, right?
Madhura: Ma was really worried when she heard about Shravan working in a garage. So she just wanted to see him once.
Pratap: Alright. If you had accompanied them too, I wouldn't have mind. Now, I won't say anything to anyone. And my plans won't change either.
(He leaves and Saurabh seems to be angry too🥱)

~Rocky's Garage~
(Shravan & Sanchi are sitting in a car looking at each other. Sanchi sees Rocky standing behind Shravan's window.)
Rocky: Where's my gun?
Shravan: (to sanchi) Get out quickly!
Sanchi: Who's he?
Shravan: My boss!
Sanchi: 😲Oh no! relatives aren't allowed here, are they?
Shravan: Forget relatives. Wives are definitely not allowed.
Sanchi: Why?
Shravan: In haste I forgot to tell you that in order to get the job, I lied that I am still a bachelor. (phew.. atleast she knows now)
Sanchi: But that's a lie. Go tell him the truth now. Better late than never.
Rocky: Hands up. Who's she?
Shravan: Customer
Sanchi: Wife
Rocky: Whose?
Sanchi: His (pointing to shravan)
Shravan: She's here to buy a car.
Sanchi: No, he's my husband.
Shravan: I don't know her husband. (to sanchi) I beg of you, please buy this car.
Sanchi: Don't show me anything. Just tell him the truth.
Shravan: I am telling you the truth. You'll find the best cars in our garage.
(Rocky seems to be believing Shravan)
Rocky: Sister, the salesman is right. Show her properly.
(He asks him to show the doors, horn, etc. and everything is not working right. Sanchi controls her laughter.)
Rocky: Actually we're still working on it.
Sanchi: Stop it. I don't need a car. I'll come back w/ my husband tomorrow.😲
(and leaves)
Rocky: Do come back. I'll give you the best deal.
(Sanchi looks back at shravan, smiles, and goes away)
Rocky: what were you doing? Why didn't you fix the car last night? I'll deduct from your pay.
Shravan (irritated): Go ahead. I'll definitely sell the car when the customer comes back.
Rocky: But for now, you've ruined it all. Go work!

~Jaiswal mansion~
Pratap and Mama are together. ( I knew it 🤢)
Mama: Should we tell sanchi?
Pratap: Not at all. She has too many hopes from my son. So this won't be the right time.
(Dadi walks in)

Dadi: Madhuraa... Do give offerings today in the temple
Madhura: why?
Dadi: Your son has taken a step towards responsibility. His pay is Rs.50,000
(Pratap turns his face towards them) Did you ever think that the son who was being insulted till date is finally doing something?
Pratap: Inderji, there are some people in this world who trust such a person blindly who lives a lie everyday. Anyway, lets go do what we have planned.😡
(They both leave)

~Garage~
Shravan is mumbling to himself.
Shravan: I'm good for nothing. Sanchi's bday is coming up and I have to buy a gift for her.
(the kid hears this)
Kid: Who are you talking about?
Shravan: Rocky. (goes to Rocky who is looking at some pics) what are you doing?
Rocky: Why are you asking? Want a slap?
Shravan: Fine. Can you give me an advance of 10,000?
Rocky: why are you asking for an advance of two months?
Shravan: Two months? Why are giving me disturbing news? You said my income is 50,000 per month.
Rocky: After deducting for everything you use, break etc., it comes to 5,000 a month.
Shravan: This is cheating.
Rocky: And what about what you did? Rats? You ate all my lunch. Telling me I cheat. (and leaves)

~jaiswal house~

Sanchi is preparing to sleep on the floor again. She sees Shravan's jacket and remembers all her moments with him and goes to sleep. Pratap sees her like this and seems to be distressed. He goes downstairs while talking to Inder and tells him that they will have to put the plan in action a.s.a.p. Dadi comes out and he stops talking. They both stare at each other. He changes the topic. He tells Dadi he was planning some business with Inder. And leaves
Dadi (to herself): was he planning something related to business or something else? We can't trust him these days.


~Nidhi's Room~
Nidhi: Saurabh, you're still up. You work so much. Now please take rest.
Saurabh: i have a presentation tomorrow so just preparing for that only.
Nidhi: Do you know Shravan works a lot now. You'll be proud too if you see him.
(Saurabh gets angry, shuts off his laptop and goes to sleep.)

~next day in garage~
( A CLEAN SHAVEN SHRAVAN... 🥳)
Shravan: (to kid) Give this rotten rats to Rocky and tell him we weren't lying.
(they see someone in the garage)
Shravan: There's a thief.
Kid: No, she's Mandira. Rocky's sister. (Mandira turns around)
Shravan: Hi.
(She doesn't reply back)
shravan: I said hi. How come you are here?
Mandira: Wallet. I was looking for brother's wallet.
(She takes it very shyly--smitten by shravan--- and leaves)

THE END~

Precap: Pratap tells mama that after the divorce, he wants Sanchi to re-marry and has a perfect guy in mind. (KARAN WAHI ENTERS)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow....!😲 what an episode....! Thanks for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnks for the update! :)
wooooo! he shavedd im soo happyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
b4 saachi was single and rejected by 25 guys and now a guy is willing to marry a divorcee?? thats BS but anyways thx for the g8 update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nycsweetie

b4 saachi was single and rejected by 25 guys and now a guy is willing to marry a divorcee?? thats BS but anyways thx for the g8 update



very good point👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
great now im so happy karan is comin yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. now there will ba twist in the story. and we twist we twist we twist oh coooollllllll man
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the lovely update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I THINK MANDIRA LIKE SHRAVAN......
HE LOOKED SO HANDSOME AFTER SHAVING HIS NASTY BEARD ...EVEN I WAS STARING AT HIM ON MY TV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE.....
THNX JAAN.......