FF: Geet in an alternate world UPD CH10/P37 - Page 28

As I said before you rewrite these existing scenes brilliantly but also leave your stamp on it and I loved how you wrote it by their thoughts giving as an inside on how both characters felt during that scene anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Nice part

oh kia....that was amazing...👍🏼

very well written...👏👏

@zaara2212 - Thanks a lot for your comments😊

@shamima - Awww, thanks a lot for your comments. It really means a lot to me. cheers😊

@afsha - Thank you😊

@Krati5 - Thanks dear😊

@sommie - Thank you😊

You did proper justice to it...and the best part was it was raw and totally devoid of any gloss...just the way it should be...atleast in my opinion. Like a beautiful piece of modern architecture....no trimmings and straight elemental lines. And this is going to be a foundation for a more complex building that is coming up in future. So far both Geet and Maan are only being initiated into the complexity of the emotional roller-coaster they are about to go on.  Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

As usual brilliant piece of work...loved it ..enjoyed it...this is just the beginning .. waiting for more to come...😳

Absolute justice has been done her majesty! 😆

here i come to prepare a report on ur work yet again...firstly i would like to say few words...i loved ur update!Edited by --Shika-- - 13 years ago

awsome...cant wait for the nxt part.

nice update..............thnks for the pm.............