FF.MAANEET*HEARTBEATS*~Thread 3 - Page 42

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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz....I just loved this part....poor Maan.....🤣...n Dadi is just tooooooo goooood...luv her...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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is geet some alien or cartoon from loonaland.. Poor maan.. Geet is loony from loonaland.. And maan is toonpur ka super hero ...

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typically dramatic and tragedic couple.. Lmao.. Breaking knews.. Maan singh khurana notes ahead with child marriage

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pari oh sonpari or some kali pari.. She keeps bleeding she keeps bleeding....

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dadima.. Omg .. Ekta kapur se trauma acting course karke ayi hai..

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lady 1 and lady 2.. Heya dude..why dunn yu say ke agar ye bachi hai to msk hum se shadi kar lo.. We are old and can adjust with a gay.. Lmao..

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heya keyama.. Buddy.. Nice going.. Geet rocks.. Awesome update.. I was laughing throughout... Continue soon.. So now let me faint or else i will collide with something in my room..just trying to imagine every scene lollz..

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww poor maan....what is geet up to..LOL
it was awesome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Both are best nautankis
Maan will bang his head if they both stay in same house
Geet's wish cam true
Haaye😆😆
Update soon n plz keep updating this FF
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update

its soo funny
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
updating …. anyone want one?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

updating '. anyone want one?

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me me me........😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heartbeats
part 10

Maan stood there... Worried sick...
Dadima- beta... Attack! Heart attack...
Geet- nahiiiiiii.... Dadima apko Kuch nahi hoga... Meri would be kanjus husband will definatly do something.
Maan- geet!
Geet- ka hi? Ap hamesha ku hampe chilate ho?
Maan- just shut up.
Geets whole family walks in... Bit worried what Geet was putting her self in to... She was still growing up...
Merra- Dadima... Ap tik to ho?

Everyone started to became worried seeing Dadima on the bed. Hand on her chest.
Merra- Dadima...
Dadi- maan.... Beta... Maan...
Maan knew well how much a actor his Dadima was. He couldn't say much infront of the people. For atleast her old age. Just incase she gets a real heart attack with the embarrassment.

Maan- yes Dadi...
Dadima- if I die... My last wish is you to marry Geet...
Maan gets really irritated now... Everyone in geets family was now in shock... She must be kidding... Geet with maan! Have anyone seen her age...
Maan- Dadima you must be joking. She is 17! She is not my type. She... Are you crazy?
Dadima looks at him in shock... And everyone takes a shy breath... That maan have no intrest in our baby Geet...
Merra- thank god. I was thinking. Now I am sure that was a big misunderstanding.
Dadima sits up instantly...
Geet with a small laugh... Like she just got cought with her biggest chori....
Maan- I thought you were Ill?
Geet- of course she is I'll...
Maan- you be quit.
Geet- are... Anyway... Meri bet ka paisa bapas karo....
Maan- what bet?
Geet- are you sure you want me to tell right infront of everyone...
Maan- yea.. Lets here it...
Dev- NO BRO... He snaps knowing Dadima will defiantly will fix there marriage after this...
Ridzy walks towards her...
Ridzy- no Geet... Let's go...
Maan- no! Let's here it what her stupid brain was planning...

Merra was so lucky that her dad wasn't here. Otherwise all this would have... Oh god. Geet back to London by now.
Merra- GEET!.... She shouts out suddenly in betweens everyones silly arguments...
Merra- oh... Ehh... We going to camping 2 Moro... So we have to pack.
Ridzy- we going camping?
Merra- ha... Umm... We hav to go Dadima... Enough of this nonsense. Dadima we should leave.

Maan gives geet an angry glare...
Geet- I want my money back. I will come back before we leave 2moro.
GEET gives him a extreme look and disappears...

Later on the evening Dadima calls merras dad to talk about geets hand for maan. She was aware of the age... But she was willing to wait for geet until she turns 18...
Merras dad wasn't that happy... Specially with the age gap...
Dad- per savtri Devi... There age gap is huge... Understanding in a relationship is very important... And Geet... She is very childish...
Dadima- that's what exactly I need for maan. Someone who can bring back his childish part... He is too serious all the time.
Dad- that's the think... He is maan sing khurana... And it's just not right. I don't know let me talk with geets dad.
Dadima- we are willing to wait.

Dadima was not sitting still... She forced maan to take Vicky to the camping with Geet, Merra, Ridzy, Dev and Armaan....
Maan always loved camping... So no harm there... Of course maan refused... 1 week with Geet would be hell from him... And that's also on the montain side. Dadima must be joking... But our little Vicky played along with his pary Dadima... Rolling on the floor... Crying his eyes out... Screamming non atop all night... Maan gave up eventually... He had no other option... He wanted his good night sleep....

Next morning Dev drives in with his jep... Geet screaming his head off that she wants her money back from maan.
Merra suggested her not to go in. She was back in her short and vest top. Ponytail hair... Her curve was prominent... Making he look extreamly sexy.. Dadima surely will have heart attack... Over night this much change...

Maan walks out packed all the camp item on his jep.

Dev- please bro... Give her money back... She is eating my head.
Maan looks at Geet... She was back to her usal self...
Geet- my money...
Maan- why don't you flee... You embrass me enough yesterday...
Geet- umm... Apka hi to fault tha. Isme mera ka galthi hi? If you like playing touchy touchy and dominate over me in front of the whole wedding house then ofcourse...
Maan- Chup! Bilkul chup...
Geet- kanjus khahika...
Maan- ha...
Dev- actually forget it... Now bro you will bring her with you and Vicky. I am not willing to fall in your silly fight...

Armaan on the other hand jumped up... He was geets and ridzys age... He found geet attractive and... No way 7 hours he will spend with Ridzy...
Armaan- I will go with them to... Protection round Geet....
Maan was going insane... Now he have three loonatic in his jep for 7 hours... Dev drives off hurriely...

Then maan flows... Geet next to him while Armaan and Vicky at the back'.


next- Poor maan'😭 stuck with our geet😳'


part 13


hay you all' well i am trying my best to update all my FF regularly.. lol.. hope u lot liking it' i am bit busy Soorrryyy yar' but maybe will be back with another one tonight' hope u lot liking this' pls pls pls do leave some lovely comments I loved them all' it motivates me allot'

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol that was really good. OMG can't wait for the next one. Maan and geet. Make her 18 soon. Lol. I think maan will sure to loose control then. Lol
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Hahaha child marriage. OMG maan is on it's way to the child marriage. Lol
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Edited by BadGirlKiss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
You know what this is turning our to be Comedy heartbeat then a romantic heartbeat luving this

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