A new beginning - Kabir OS. - Page 3

Akshuuuu this is so beautifully written
u left me speechless...kudos to u
Loved the way u portrayed Kabir's feeling
feeling bad for him..its heart breaking but u did a great job with this OS mann...keep writing more OS

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

that was awesome os

Thank you Pooji. 😊

Originally posted by: CoolAquarius

Akshuuuu this is so beautifully written
u left me speechless...kudos to u
Loved the way u portrayed Kabir's feeling
feeling bad for him..its heart breaking but u did a great job with this OS mann...keep writing more OS

Thank youu Hira! 😳
Aww, thanks. And I love Kabir, I can read his mind. :P
Thank youu.. And yeah I will try.

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Thank youuuuuuuu 😃
It reminds people of Jacob, not Edward and Bella. 😆 But tum hatke ho, hatke hi rehna. 😛
Nope. Me not gonna continue! It was supposed to be ONLY a One Shot. 😊
Thank youu, again.. 😊

It was great... It made Kabir sound like Jacob... hmmm... when will i stop loving unsuccesful love stories!!! hmmph...

BEAUTIFULLY WIRTTEN

dis was simply outstanding............i m speechless after reading this.......i feel so bad for dis guy..😔
i wish even i cud write lyk u....😍

It was an amazing OS from Kabir's POV👏

wow.. Kabir's thought nicely penned down..

i am so glad kabir is moving on here. hopefully it will be the same in pyek