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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Chapter nine

When Viren turned toward his father and said "Papa, it is Aham, Aham Modi do you remember? It is news about Gopi, Mr. Kurana felt that he was struck by lightning. He staggered towards his chair. Hansa caught just in time. Both the brothers could not understand the pain and anguish in their parent's eyes, especially Viren. Soon after throwing Aham out of their house, he learned the truth from Gopi. He realized that he had mistaken and wronged his best friend. He was ready to even beg forgiveness from him. But his father stopped him. Not only that he had accused Viren of cheating him. He was angry for bringing a Modi home and keeping him in ignorance. Mr. Kurana made him promise that he will not meet Aham or try to meet him in future. Viren had tried in many ways to know the reason for his father's hatred towards the Modi's. But in vain. His mother who never refused him anything remained tight lipped. In fact Aham's call made him happy for two reasons. First his sister was in the safest place second he will know the reason for his father's anger.

Laksman kurana was shocked to learn his daughter was in the very place he was afraid of. Actually he had nothing against the boy Aham. In all the five years he had known him, he was respectful,  polite and was hard working. But this will not change the reality. He was his mother's son. He was the son of the woman who had hurt him a lot. He was the son of the scheming Kokila Modi. To him she was a woman who could do anything to gain money and power. Her ambition unleashed misery on others life, even on people who loved her. He had lost his friend because of the treachery of witch Kokila Modi. Now his daughter, the angel of his dream was in her power. Lakshman Kurana got up with a determined look. Whatever his daughter might have done, he will not allow her to be in the power of Kokila. He turned towards Rahul and said: make arrangements for the journey. "We are leaving immediately".

Kokila had never seen her son like this before. His handsome face was tired and there was apprehension in his eyes. When she tried questioning about the girl he refused to answer. Since the girl was given sedatives she could not question her. There was something in the face of the girl that disturbed her. She had the resemblance of Chirag.

Chirag was the only person for whom she had cared other than her son. He was the reason that she had lied, schemed and got bad reputation. But he had left her shattered. He had found someone more important than her. Someone whom he loved very much. Some one for whom he was ready to leave kokila. Thought it had hurt her, she had helped him. But he had not kept his promise. He did not return as he promised. The only person who knew about Chirag refused to help her. She did not know why but had a feeling that the girl in the guest room had upset a hornet's nest.

By evening Aham informed Kokila that he had found the girl's family and that they might be there any time now. She made arrangement for their stay and was ordering the servants of their duties, when the family of the girl entered. The bowl of curd which kokila was carrying slipped and fell from her hand. She stood astonished. Even in her wildest dreams Kokila would not have thought of meeting this particular person. He was the only person who can bring back happiness to her family. He was the same hard hearted fool who refused to help her. He was the man who broke her family. He was Lakshman Kurana.

Lakshaman Kurana and Kokila Modi kept starring at each other as if they had seen a ghost. Intense emotions clashes between them along with the faces of Chirag Modi and Hetal Modi.

Precap: gopi's thoughts

(Just thought why not add precap like serials. i ll be able to update it most probably by Monday. but with a treat of two chapters)

 

Edited by shruthi2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Nice update.. Koki eyeing chirag.. ROFL..
PS : wheres my Rashi tonite?
Tadap tadap ke is is dil se aah nikhalti rahi, mujhko satati pyar ka.. Aisa kya gunah kiya? *crying*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Ooh, evil with Koki, huh?  Love it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
keep guessing, nothing is true and nothing is false, the CV can change the story line as they can. that is me.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
lovely update shruthi...
and indeed Suspense Thriller....

and m looking forward to next two updates.........may be something sweet after diwali....
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Wonderful dear... read it a bit late from usual but it was really worth the read... now am waiting with bated breath to see how you introduce this Chirag and Hetal part... god... you are really something

too much suspense is not good for my healthπŸ˜”
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Chapter ten

Gopi opened her eyes and glanced around the room. She was puzzled for a few minutes before she realized where she was. When she realized it she felt a warm glow in her heart. Her heart told her that somewhere in the house the person dearest to her was present. The thought of him send her blood rising, she smiled to herself thinking that of all people in the world it was Aham who had saved her. She silently send a thank you to her Kanaji for making her meet Aham.

Gopi had a life which most people envied. She was loved by her parents and pampered by her brothers. Still she was pure, innocent and kind at heart. She always put her family before doing anything. She was good at studies and passionate about drawing. If she sees something inspirational she draws it to perfection. Another quality of Gopi, was her obsession for dance. Since her mother was a classical dancer, Gopi learned Kathak and Hindustani from a tender age. More than everything Gopi loved Kanaji. He was her favorite god. She always talked to him as if he is her friend. She dreamed of marrying Kanaji.

On one beautiful morning she had planned to tease her brothers, but it was someone who resembled her Kanaji of her dreams who fell for it. When he came run towards her, and asked where she was hurt, she fell speechless, but somehow she ran away from that place. From her mother she learnt that it was her brother Viren's friend Aham of whom she had heard from her brother. After Viren began to go for the university she missed him desperately. Rahul was there but Viren was fun. Rahul was always the protective big brother, while Viren teased and played with her. When he came home for the holidays, he usually talked about his friend Aham, which made Gopi, jealous and curious. She used to tell her brother that if she met Aham she would give him her piece of mind for taking her brother from her.

But when she met him she felt shy. She could not understand why, but she could not met his eyes. His eyes were dark brown and told her something which she could not understand. Till the day he left their house Gopi watched him hidden behind curtains, pillars and windows. The more she saw him the more she loved him. Yes she realized she loved him, she had dreamed of him she had seen him as her kanaji in her dreams. But something stopped her from facing him. Viren started making fun of her. Thought she was angry at him, deep inside her heart she was pleased.

Then came the day when Aham left for his home. She felt as if heart was torn away from her. After that every year she waited for him to come. But he never came. She could not ask even Viren about it, so all her feelings were hidden by her smile. To forget her pain she plunged into studies, dancing and painting. Whenever she was overcome by her desire to see Aham she used to go to the spot of jasmine vines where she had first met him. After nearly two terrible years her Kanaji came back for her. Aham came back to see her, especially to see her. She knew it when his eyes started to search for her. When they came face to face their eyes connected and told each the  feeling of the other. They knew that the two years of parting was terrible for them. Yet their mutual respect for their families kept them from confessing their love.

Finally the dreadful day came. It was Aham's last day at their house and Gopi had planned to tell him about her love. She had painted a special picture to present him. Her painting told everything her words could not. But everything changed. She was electrocuted, Aham was thrown out of their house and above all her father was angry. He told Viren to stop all his communication with Aham and threatened him if he found that Viren had not listened to him then he would see the bad side of his father.

Gopi was heartbroken. She could not go against her family. She took an oath that if she got married it was only to Aham otherwise she will remain unmarried. Soon Gopi joined college along with her friends. Though she tried to forget Aham, his thoughts were always fresh in her mind. He was her first love. He was the love of her innocent heart. How could she forget him? Gopi went though her life mechanically, always with a fake smile and drowning her pains in drawing and dancing till the fateful day which brought her to Aham.

(sorry thought I could finish two chapters but could not)

for precap: Kokila's confession - aham - gopi brother n sister?

Edited by shruthi2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
shruthi.....what is the precap....
i cant believe....................pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it should no happen....

btw loved the whole part except precap.....and it made me remember some moments of my life too..........

thanx a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
i totally agree with sADhli...😭
 
Everything is picture perfect... but for the precap😭... why brother n sis... i know like the SNS CVs, this CV is also planning to frustrate us before getting Ahem in Line😭
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Jaldi agla chapter warna mujhe dehydration ho jaayega roroke
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
diya...m also crying.....no sis n bro relation....i wont READ it Again if this will happen in next part.......