Mayur OS's: fell in love:True meaning of love pg5

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Hi Guys this is a random scene that i have written on mayank and nupur i thought of it during school, no wonder why it take me longer to understand what we are learning 😆. I am lost mayur world most of the time 😳. Here is the OS.

Background: In this OS Mayank and Nupur are not the simple, sweet, lovely couple. Their characters are more modern (some might not feel so) they are of 21st century.

Name: Unconfessed love, yet confessed

Nupur was walking down the road, from her college. She was lost upset, since she just had an argument with Mayank in college.

Mayank on the other hand was in the college parking lot he was trying to look for Nupur. He wanted to apologize for what he said to her. It wasn't really his fault. It has been 3 months Mayank had told Nupur that he loved her but Nupur was neither rejecting nor accepting his love. She was always keeping him in confusion regarding her feelings. Finally he couldn't take in any more. Flashback: He took Nupur into a empty classroom. Mayank: "Nupur what is your problem, why don't you tell me". Nupur: (innocently) "tell you what Mayank". Mayank: (screams) "Nupur please stop it you know what I am talking about". Nupur: "fine I know what you are talking about Mayank, but it is my choice whether to answer you or not". Mayank: "Nupur I have never thought you will be like this". Mayank was about to go when Nups voice stops him. Nupur: "like what Mayank, (Mayank kept silence but turned around) come on Mayank answer me". Mayank: (lost his patience) "like a selfish girl who doesn't care about anyone feelings, who cares a damn about the world". Nupur just stood there shocked at Mayank's reply; he had never been this rude to Nupur at least not to this extent. Nupur: "fine if that's what you think about me I have no explanations to give". Nupur left the room controlling her tears. Mayank however did notice the tears formed in her eyes he tried to stop her but she left. Flashback ends.

Mayank was standing against the pillar looking lost, when samrat came behind him. Sam: "boo". Mayank jumped a little and was out of his thoughts. Mayank: "dude what are you doing". Sam: "trying to get you out of Nupur's thoughts for a while". Mayank heaved a sigh that told Sam that something was wrong. Sam: "ab kya hua what did you do". Mayank: "I fought with nupur". Sam: "tell me something new you guys fight 24/7, don't worry about it". Mayank: "it's not like that I really hurt her this time she was on the verge of crying". Sam sensed that this was a serious situation. Sam: "whose fault was it". Mayank: "whose do you think". Raising his eyebrows. Sam: "obviously yours after all you are so sadu, and have no control over your anger". Mayank glared at samrat. Sam: "sorry dude". Mayank: "yes it was my fault". Mayank then told sam about his and nups fight. Sam: "why did you say all of that to her you know na how sensitive she is". Mayank: "I know sam I just thought that if I provoke her a little she might let her feelings out, but I guess it backfired". Sam: "dude you can do only one thing go find nups and apologize". Mayank: "yes I think so to, okay bye I will go find her". Mayank and sam left.

Nupur was on the still on the road she was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't even realized that she was walking in the middle of the road, cars were honking at her. Nups: "akhir what does he think of himself, huh says whatever he wants to and here I can't belive I am crying for that jerk". She wiped her tears while a car was coming towards her with high speed, she was oblivious to it. Than in an instant movement she was in someone's grip and pulled to the right side of the road on the side walk. As nupur made sense what happened she saw Mayank in front of her. His eyes were filled with anger. Mayank: (in a loud picth) "Nupur are you nuts what are you trying to do, could you freaken not see the car coming towards you, you could have'..". Mayank stopped. Nups shrugs of Mayank's hands from her arms. Nups: (angry tone)"so what huh why do you care I am a selfish girl na". Mayank: "nups please listen'to me'..". Nups: (continued ignoring Mayank) "whatever happens to me is my business you don't have to worry about me I can take care of myself". Mayank: "like you were just doing walking in the middle of the road". Nups: "well it's my life I can do whatever I wish to do". Mayank: "nups please I am sorry I know I hurt you, but". Before Mayank could finish nupur interrupted. Nups: "sorry that all you can say first you hurt me and then you say sorry, huh all of you guys are the same". Mayank tried to calm nupur talk to her but she carries on talking. Nups: You guys first hurt girl's feelings and then come apologize". Mayank was getting a little irritated at Nupur's blabbering, and more on she was not letting him speak. Nups: "seriously don't you guys have anything else to do". Mayank gives a flirtious smile. Mayank: "yes we do". Before nupur could sa anything. Mayank's lips were on her, he put his hand behind nups hand and kissed her lips not a passionate or hard kiss, but a soft light one. Nups was lost in the kiss, she felt mayank's love with his soft touch. Mayank let go of nupur it was only a quick 15 second kiss. Though nups was still dazed from the kiss, but soon she became shocked. Nups: "did you just kiss me" (angry tone). Mayank smiled flirtly. Mayank: "yah what you going to do about it huh". Nups was more shocked to see him smile. Nups picked her hands to slap Mayank; it was her privacy instinct that made her do this, not her heart. Her mind and heart were fighting heart wanted Mayank, but mind as usual stopped her heart. Before she could slap him Mayank got the hold of her hand put it behind her back, he also got her other hand put it behind her back. Both of nups hands were now pinned behind her back, she was struggling to get them free. Nups: "Mayank let go of my hand". Mayank: "what if I don't". Mayank didn't even care about the fact that nups was about to slap him cause he could read her eyes which held the unsaid love of hers towards Mayank. Mayank moved cornering Nupur to a nearby tree. Nups: "Mayank pls let go of my hand, you are hurting me". Mayank: (came closer to her their lips were only five inches apart) "what about the pain you have giving me". Nups: (a tear rolled down her eyes not because of her pain the pain that was visible in Mayank's eyes) "that's not my problem". Mayank: "But your pain is my problem". Mayank slowly let go of nups hand and put his hand on the tree taking another step closer to nups. Nups heartbeat increased. Mayank: (slowly clears nupur' tear with his thumb that had just rolled down her eyes) "Nups I know that you love me, than why don't you say it". Nups: "Mayank there is nothing to say cause I don't" (a straight forward lie). Mayank moved an inch closer to Nups lips. Nupur heartbeat increased more. Mayank: "oh really so you don't love me". Nups shakes her head saying no. Mayank moves another inch closer. Mayank: "so my proximity doesn't affect you". Nupur nodded no again, though she was now blushing. Mayank moved a bit more closer. Nups: (pushes Mayank a little) "Mayank pls stop it people are watching". Mayank: "so what you don't care a damn about the world". Nups: "yes I don't and you are also a part of that world so pls let me go". Mayank : "yes but I am part of your world, nups no matter what you say to me I know you love me". Nupur was now totally melted, she has always loved Mayank. Tears rolled down her eyes. Mayank: "see, Nups if you eyes can say the love for me than why can't you". Nups: "I am sacred" (Nupur whispered). Mayank could see the pain in her eyes. Mayank: "scared of what Nupur" (Mayank whispered slowly caressing nups cheek with his thumb). Nups: "you know Mayank". Mayank: "Nups do you really think I will leave you or stop loving you, you are my life shona". Nups looked up into Mayank's eyes. Nups: "Mayank I have never got love in my life, and you are showering me with it, I am sacred Mayank that if I accepted it, I will lose it". Mayank wiped the tears from her cheeks. MayanK : "I understand nupur, but nupur do you trust me". Nups: (nodded) "yes Mayank I do". Mayank: "do you trust my love". Nups: "yes". Mayank: "than that's it you have trust in me and I have trust in our love and you, I will wait for you to say those three words, even if it means waiting an eternity". Nups was amazed at this guy, she has never witnessed a love like his. Nups: "I wish it doesn't take that long" (Nupur muttered). Mayank smiled, he bent towards Nups. Nups understood his intentions but stayed still. Mayank kissed Nups lips softly he pulled her closer by her waist and Nups put her hands around his neck, it wasn't a passionate kiss, but a kiss that combined two hearts into one. Both let go of each other. Nups blushed as Mayank was staring at her. Nups: "what kya dekh rahe ho". Mayank: "at last after 3 months 10 days five hours later you have finally accepted your feelings and my love". Nups smiled Mayank put his arm around nups waist. Mayank: "so let's go girlfriend". Both Mayank and nupur walked together, holding hands, feeling the each other's presence and love.

So this was the OS Nupur confessed her love, but didn't really say I Love you. In love words don't mean as much as emotions.

Please do give your reviews on this, criticism is also welcomed.

Sorry for Grammar and spelling errors.

Edited by lopli - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome os dear..very cute os......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank both of you for reading this Os i was really excited when i wrote this.
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HUH WHAT AN ROMANTIC OS,MORE THAN MAYUR I M IMAGINING ARTI HERE😆
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fantastic work. enjoyed it a lot. do write more os.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow yaar,
Lovely OS...
Nicely written!
Do keep writing nd pm me....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsom yr........

its too cute n romantic.........
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it ws really awesum ria!!!
i luvd it!
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Hi everyone this is a scene that i have written, it is not the most beautiful scene, but it is out of my imagination. Most of us girls always think about our rajkumar, just like nupur and we let our imagination run wild, on how he would look, and what we wish he does for us just like nups.

Name: A birthday wish came true!

It was 11: 45 pm at night; Nupur was lying on her bed in her room. She was staring at the ceiling. She was really excited in fifteen minutes she will be turning 21 years old. Age wasn't the reason of her happiness okay maybe part of the reason because now she will be have less restrictions from her family but the main reason was Mayank. This was her first birthday with Mayank and her college gang and she that they would try to make it special for her. Just yesterday her friends were having an argument over who was going to message nupur first on her birthday. Nupur smiled at the thought of this, she turned in her bed and looked at her phone. Five more minutes till her birthday. While nupur was in her thoughts, she suddenly heard a noise. She got sacred, she moved towards her balcony door where she thought the noise was coming from. Then she heard the voice louder, like someone was trying to open her door, Nups got really scared. She was about to leave her room to call for her brother. When a hand covered her mouth and held her by the waist. Nupur struggled to get the out of the strong grip, she was really really scared her heartbeat increased. The person was pulling her out to the balcony, while nupur kept on struggling to get out of the grip.

Mayank wshipered in nups ear. Mayank: "chillana mat nupur main hoon". Just from nups voice she relaxed. She turned around to face Mayank.

Nups: "Mayank tum paagal hogaye ho itni raat ko tum yahan kya kar rahe ho (in a screamy whisper). Mayank opened his mouth to say something but nupur carries on. Nups: "agar mere ghar mein se koi uth gaya toh problem hojayegi waise bhi mera bhai ki ka karma saath mein hi hai pls jao yahan se go". Nupur tried to push toward the ladder he came up for her.

Mayank got irritated pulls her from the waist and covers her mouth again. Mayank: "shhhh kitna bolti ho tum thakti nahi ho kya". Nupur glares at Mayank. Mayank: main yahan se nahi jaa raha ho okay". Nups tries to protest under mayank's hand, Mayank continues). Mayank: "aur tumhe 15 second (looking at his watch) pata chal jayega ki mein yaha kya kar raha hun". Then Mayank slowly starts counting.

Mayank: "10…..9…..8…..7…..6…… (mayank nupur bot get lost in each other's eyes)5……4…….3……2……1. The clock struck 12 and their want a firework in the sky both Mayank and nupur looked towards it. The firework blasts in the sky writing "HAPPY BITHDAY TO YOU". Nupur was shocked looking at it. The sight was unbelievable to her. Nupur turns to face Mayank tears in her eyes. Mayank looked at the tears and wiped them away with his thumb, he cups her face in his hands.

Mayank: "Nupur maine yeh sab tumhe khush karne ke liye kiya tha, tumhe rulane ke liye nahi (nups was about to say something, Mayank continues) aura b yeh mat kehena ki yeh khushi ke ansou hai, kyunki tum mujhe apni khushi smile kar ke bhi dikha sakti ho, toh mujhe jyada acha lagega".

Nups gives a huge smile to Mayank. She takes mayank's hands in hers.

Nups: "thanks Mayank for making this birthday really, special, aura b toh main yeh bhi nahi keh sakti ki yeh meri life ki sabse best moment hai, kyunki jabse tum meri life main aaye ho, you have made every second of it really special, thank you so much".

Mayank: "yeh sab toh karna hi tha nupur after all tumhara Raj jo hun".

Nups: "nahi Mayank tum sirf Mayank ho mere Mayank aur kissi bhi hero se kam nahi hai".

Mayank is delighted by Nups words, he gives a mischievous grin.

Mayank: "Raj se bhi jyada better hoon".

Nups: "haan Raj se bhi jyada".

Mayank: "wow kya baat hai nupur aaj toh bari romantic ho rahi ho". Taking a step closer to her, nupur gives a shy smile and pushes Mayank a little from his chest.

Nups: "Mayank , I think tumhe ab jana chahiye".

Mayank: "oh really mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta".

Nups: "likin mujhe aisa lagta hai". She said pushing Mayank a little more away. Mayank hold nups hand that was pushing him away.

Mayank: " acha baba thik hai likin ek second". Mayank says holding nups hand, he puts his other hand in his pocket and tries to look for something.

Nups: "kya doondh rahe ho Mayank".

Mayank: "ek second". Finally Mayank pulls out a little heart shaped velvet pink box, he opens it and there is a ring not a diamond, but with two hand holding a stoned heart. Nupur was mesmerized it looked so beautiful.

Nups: "Mayank yeh".

Mayank: (gives a sigh) "I know ki yeh ring itni expensive nahi hai par.

Nups: (interrupting Mayank) "you are right yeh ring expensive nahi hai, kyunki yeh priceless hai". Mayank smiles, he knew she never cared about money love was what held more importance in her life. Nups puts her arms around Mayank's neck.

Nups: "aur waise bhi gift dene wale ka dil dekha jata hai, na ki bill, aur tumhare dil bohut bara hai ". Nups winks at Mayank.

Mayank: "who toh main janta hoon, but thanks". Nupur takes her arm off his neck while Mayank takes the ring out of the box, takes nups right hand and is about slip the ring on when nups stops him.

Nups: "ek second Mayank".

Mayank: "kya hua nupur".

Nups: "Mayank tum kuch bhul nahi rahe ho".

Mayank: "kya?"

Nups: "yehi ki ring left hand main pehani jaati hai".

Mayank: "itni jaldi kya ha shone, who ring toh tumhe sabke saamne pehenaunga". Mayank gives a naughty smile. Nups blushes. Mayank slips the ring on her right hand kisses it lightly.

Mayank: "I love you nupur, thank for being in my life".

Nups: "I love you too Mayank". They both hug, Mayank kisses her lightly on her forehead, they separate at hearing a noise. Both look toward the main gate and see their friends,Benji, dia, uday and nups sis gun, and her jij sam coming holding flowers ballons and cake.

Nups: "yel log itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe aaj meri kher nahi , chal nupur neeche isse phele ki mom bulaye". Nups forgets about mayank's presence and walks back into her room is about to go out of her room, when she stops realizing Mayank behind her and Mayank bumps into her.

Nups: "tum kahan aa rahe ho".

Mayank: "tum hi ne toh kaha ki neeche chalo".

Nups: "Mayank main apni baat kar rahi thi, aur agar meri family ne mujhe aadi raat ko mujhe kissi laadke ke saath kamre se bahar aate hue dekh liya toh……".

Mayank: (trying to be innocent) "toh koi problem hojayegi".

Nups: "problem nahi bohut bari problem hojayegi, pls jao na". Nups pushes Mayank a little.

Mayank: "okay baba jaa raha hun". Mayank gives a quick kiss on nups cheek and leaves. Nups goes downstairs and sees everyone of her family member and friends there, and just then mayanak also enters the party. They were all standing by a cake on the table. She comes towards the table and everyone wishes her a happy birthday. Nups cuts the cake and feeds her family members and her friends, and they feed her back. Everyone was enjoying the late night party. Nupur walks over to her cousin Gunjan.

Nups: "gun yeh sab kya hai".

Gun: "yeh tumhare uss raj, mayank ka plan tha jo usne mere through convey kara". Nups shakes her head and smiles.

Gun: "acha chal". Gun takes nups hand and starts to pull her towards the kitchen.

Nups: "arre kaha le jaa rahi ho". Gunjan takes nupur to the kitchen where Mayank was waiting for her, gunjan pushes nups and she fells straight into mayank's arms. He holds her and picks a piece of cake from a plate.

Mayank: "zara cake hamare haath se bhi khayi". Holding closer to her mouth, Nups takes a bite. Mayank holds nups closer to him. Mayank looks up at gunjan who has covered her eyes with her hands.

Mayank: "saali ji apne akheing kyun band kar rakhi hain".

Gun: "who kya hai na (removing her hands from her eyes and opening them) hone wale jiju main kuch aisa nahi dekhna jaati jo hum bacho ko liye censored ho". Nupur blushes, Mayank smiles.

Mayank: "nahi saali ji who baatein toh bas aapke aur samrat ke beech hoti hain, since aap dono ke paas license hai, mere paas toh abhi sirf learning permit hai". Mayank winks, gives a naught smile, nupur blushes more. She runs out from the kitchen. After one hour of partying everyone leaves. Nupur goes back to her room and sleeps with a huge smile plastered across her face.

Please give comments, criticism is also welcomed. I know, This is not one of the best scenes with the best dialogues.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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loevly os!!!!
it was jst fantastic..
luved it a lot!!!

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