FF: Kismat ki Kagaz par..- Last Part , pg 107 - Page 44

Originally posted by: wel1111

aree.....shai...i always wonder how do u manage to write each nevery part soooo well......loved angry shaan.....sooo cute.....but tumne bada suspnese create kiya hai, itna to pata hai ki shaan ko kuch hone wala hai....(accident or plane crash...)...plz yaar we want shanak.....want him safe.......

love.

Originally posted by: AzaraA

shai dear u write so well that i can imagine all of the emotions and romance and other emotions also u r a gr888888888888888888888888888888888888 and sensible writter.....


luv zara

Originally posted by: Trupti.P

Shai loved Shanak phone convo & another superb update waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Hey Shai ... Nice update dear .. Loved Shaan's frustration & Khanak wanting to be with him before he leaves .....
Please Shaan ko kuch hone nahi denaa ...Waiting for the next part ..... Lots of SHANAK mangtaa :D

Originally posted by: shiksha_03

hey shai
ur post ws brilliant n i m waitn 2 c shaan & khanak together again so pls bring him back soon

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

Dear shai shanak convo was so real over phone and aswesome part loved it.

Originally posted by: iluvmanar

shai..it's 2 good yaar....thanks 4 the update...really i always wait 4 ur updates...

Originally posted by: angel_9

hey shai loved ur ff

i read all the parts n they were awesome.

u really are nice storyteller u potrayed it so well.......

loved shanak part it is as original shanak onscreen

pls update next part soon...............

Part 48:

Khanak came home early from office….she was sad, and frustrated at shantanu …..(to herself in anger) burthal hain….koi bhi wada nain pura karte…jane se pehely kaha do din ka kaam hai …pir kaha her gante main phone karon ga….lakin koi bhi wada pura nain kiya …our aab aik din our rukna hai…..lakin main janti hon wo do din se zayada nain ruken ge….lakin phir kyun kaha ke aik din our lage ga….shayad koi kaam ho…per mujey kyun lag raha ki wo aaj hi aney wale hai….dadi saw her talking to herself, …

Dadi: arey khanak beta kya howa….khud se batein kyun kar rahi ho……our gusse main kyun ho, aaj tum ghar bhi jaldi a gi…hmmm kya baat hai…

Khanak: (composed herself) nain dadi ase koi baat nain hai….main theek hon…bus office main maan nain lag raha tha…tu ghar a gi…

Dadi: hmm lagta hai koi kisse ko buhat maan se yaad kar raha hai…han na …she teased her ….

Khanak: arey nain dadi..aap bhi na….(in her mind) une koi fark nain parta ki koi miss kare na kare wo tu aik din our enjoy karne wale hain waha par….tu phir main kyun un ko miss karon….then she excused herself from dadi and walked to her room ….dadi knew that she was missing shaan …after a while dadi asked her to prepare something for shaan to divert her thoughts …..

Khanak got busy in the kitchen…she decided to prepare halwa and kheer for him…she was sad but equally excited for his arrival…after a while she decided to call shaan…

Shantanu: hello…han khanak…

Khanak: kuch nain…bus wesay hi phone kiya hai….kya aap busy the…

Shantanu: arey nain …main busy nain tha….our wesay bhi agar hota to main tumhare liye sab cancel kar deta….

Khanak: han han janti hon….sab jhoot hai….aap kuch nain karte mere liye …ager aisa hai tu phir aik din our rukne ki kya jarorat thi…shantanu on the other side, tried to control his laugher….

Shantanu: arey yaar…tum tu har waqt gusse main he rehti ho…he cut the call…

Shantanu on the other side, was stuck in the traffic…he was coming back early to surprise her…but was stuck in heavy traffic of Mumbai….after cutting her call….. khanak bar bar phone kare gi tu traffic ki awaj sun li gi…our phir mere sare surprise ka band baj jia ga…. .lakin wo gusse main hai….kya karon …then he saw a small girl selling flowers…he signals her …he brought all the flowers for khanak….he knew she ll be happy with these simple and beautiful flowers….he placed the flowers on the passenger seat and smiled ….abb tu khanak mujse gussa nain ho gi…then he cursed the traffic….damn this traffic man…ai traffic ki waja se mera plan fail howa to …tu..main khabhi travel nain karon ga…..then he realized what he said….arey nain yaar….travel nain karon ga …tu office kasey jio ga…..bad idea…after a while he smiled at khanak name's flashing on his phone….tu madam betab hai …ais liye bar bar phone ai rahen hain….then picked u the phone …..

Shantanu: hmm kya hai abb….

Khanak: arey aap aisa kyun bol rahe ho …theek hai main phone nain karti…rhakti hon…

Shantanu: khanak ruko na…she smiled on the other side…abb phone kar hi liya hai tu kuch baat karo na…

Khanak: kya baat karon….aap tu baat nain karna chate…pehely phone kyun kata …..hmmm….

Shantanu: arey nain yaar….he said in frustration …..acha yeh batio kya kar rahi thi….tum aaj ghar kyun jaldi aiii….

Khanak: arey app ko kisse pata ki main ghar par hon….

Shantanu: oh madam khabhi caller id ka naam ka nain suna….mere phone par ghar ki number par tumhara naam hai our tumhari photo bhi ..…tum na puri burthal ho khanak….

Khanak: she laughed …kya kaha ….burthal…then laughed ….but suddenly stopped when she heard car honking in the background….. shantanu yeh awaj kya hai …app kahan ho ….

Shantanu: (in his mind) shit man lagta hai khanak ko traffic ki awaj suni hai ….oh man abb kya karon ….sare surprise par pani fir jia ga ….(out loud). …arey wo main ….main…wo.. hotel ki bahar kara hon …our tumey traffic ki awaj ai hai….

Khanak: acha ..par aap hotel ki bahar kya kar rehe ho…app ko tu ander hona chaye….tu fir bahar kyun ….

Shantanu: main hotel ki bahar…sheila ki jawani par dance kar raha hon ….bas ..happy ….

Khanak: kyaaa…..she yelled in the phone ….yeh sheila kon hai…our app us ki saath dance kyun kar rahe ho….

Shantanu: arey yaar…tum tu phone per bhi buhat chillati ho …mera kaan phat jia ga....our koi sheila nain hai…main mazak kar raha tha…kya main abb hotel ki bahar bhi nain kara ho sakta …..tum bhi na khanak…bikul pagal ho…

Khanak: acha theek hai…yeh sab choro…main aap ki liye halwa bana rahi thi…par app ho ki kal ai rahe ho …meri sari mehnat per pani par gaya na ….she complained….

Shantanu: tu kya howa main kal ai ki kha loon ga…..lakinnnn….agar main kahon ki main aaj ai raha hon tu fir kya mile ga muje …

Khanak: kya….sachii …app aaj a sakte ho…nain main janti hon app mazam kar rahi ho..main nain manti….

Shantanu: arey yaar tumer meri har baar mazak lagti hai …main koi joker hon jo her waqat mazak karta rahta hon…

Khanak: acha theek hai app jo bhi chate ho main karon gi ..lakin aap aaj a jio…

Shantanu: dekh lo…apni baat se palatna mat…jo muje chayee wo do gi…he asked her mischievously …she knew from his naughty tone what he wanted, and smiled shyly ….

Shantanu: acha theek hai…mujey jana hai…bad main baat karta hon…theek hai ….he looked around the traffic and looked behind his car…he saw part of the road clear…hmmm lagta hai ...pechay hi jana parey ga …werna aaj tu main ghar nain pohench pion ga…khanak se jo jhoot bola hai wo sach na ho jia, our aik din our khanak se door rahna parey…then he reversed his car and derived backward …. But suddenly…a big truck came in full speed from the other side and banged in his car….his car went flying in the air and landed on the other side of the road…..his body half hanging out from the window with flowers in his hand…..khanak…..a whisper escaped his lips……flowers and his body covered in blood…a large crowed surrounded his car….

On the other side, khanak felt someone saying her name and accidently cut her finger and saw blood ……

Don't kill me for this part guys…

Cheers

shai