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Posted: 13 years ago
Disclaimer:  Ever since Star One put up this poll of whether Dev should turn positive I have been wondering how to show them how women will react. This is an effort to do that. Please note that this is at the character Dev in the series. This is not meant to offend any one.

So after the engagement Dev corners Geet and wants to talk to her

Geet is shocked to see him and almost passes out. But then she remembers Maan's words saying that she has too fight for herself and stiffens her spine.

Dev asks Geet if she came back to take revenge on him?

Geet tells him that he is too full of himself and that the entire world does not revolve around him πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. Her world revolves around Maan (and she starts going into fantasies of Maan 🀣)

Dev is stunned at her brazen declaration and tells her that Maan is his brother and he does not want her to ruin his brother's life. 😑

Geet is stunned to hear that Maan and Dev are brothers and she says "How can Maan be your brother?
You are such a loser πŸ˜‘ and he is such a go-getter 😍
You are such a dhokebaaz πŸ˜‘ and he is such a stand up guy  😍
You took advantage of me 😑 and he is always taking care of me 😍
I almost died because of you 😑 and he saved my life many times 😍
I had to leave my life behind because of you 😑 and he gave me a new life 😍
You are such a moron 😑 and for me he is like bhagwan 😍
You are a fool 😑 and Maan is so cool 😎
You are an idiot 😑 Maan is the best period 😎

Note that all the while she is giving Dev angry looks while talking to him but going off into dreamland and has a tender expression on her face while talking about Maan 🀣 🀣 🀣

So Dev says "So like you really like my bro?" πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• Does bro like you too?"

Geet gets morally offended by this and goes on the offensive. She starts walking towards him and she says "First you marry me even though you knew you were already married. As if that was not despicable enough you actually spent a night with me. 😑 Then you ran off with my money and jewellery and left me at the airport 😑. Do you know 3 days in jail before my family came and got me out 😑? Do you also know that when my family discovered what you did they tried to kill me? 😑"

Geet has tears in her eyes and Dev makes a move towards her and she wipes the tears herself and tells him. "As if all that was not bad enough. Now that I have found love once more you turn up to ruin that too? 😑"

"How can anyone be so evil? I hate you?" She gives him three tight slaps and tells him
"well aaj mere pass tumhein teen se jyada thappad maarne ka time nahi hai
par kisi din. I have to go meet my janoo Maan now ☺️ ☺️. " 🀣 🀣 🀣

Geet steps out to find an angry Maan standing outside and a shocked daadi on the other side. They are staring at each other in shock.

Geet asks Maan "Aap?"

Maan says "haan woh I thought I would come escort you." πŸ˜‰

and Maaneet share an eyelock (Mahi plays) 🀣 🀣 🀣

Daadi asks Maan "Did you know of Geet's past?"

Maan hugs Geet and says "Yes but I did not know the cheapskate was my own brother. I will not forgive him 😑"

Daadi tells Geet " Hats off to you for being so brave. 😭 You are the right bahu for this house and Maan is the right husband for you. You said the marriage was fake right? So you were never married. I want you and Maan to get married as soon as possible."

Geet opens her mouth to say no but Maan squeezes her hand and she looks at him. With his eyes he tells her he loves Daadi's idea and both share an eyelock again (mahi plays). Then still looking at each other both say "Ji daadi" ☺️ ☺️

Daadi claps her hands and says "Wonderful" πŸ˜ƒ but before that we have to remove the raaste ka kaanta" 🀣 🀣 🀣
☺️
Then daadi says "Geet come with me."

Geet and Maan follow daadi into the room and Daadi tells Geet "In my presence please slap this fellow thrice." 🀣 🀣 🀣

Geet gets ready to do that but Maan intervenes telling daadi "No her hands will hurt." Maan takes Geet's hands in his and says "See her hands are already red." β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ "So I will do it instead" 🀣

Geet has tears in her eyes seeing Maan's concern for her and they share another eyelock πŸ˜†.

Daadi is moved by Maan's love for Geet and stops Maan and says "let me do it. After all I am the eldest." 😑

Daadi slaps Dev thrice and tells him that he is a dhabba on the khandaan's izzat. She tells him to get out of their lives forever and that she does not want to see him again. 😑

Then Geet spies Meera standing in the corner and asks her "Have you no self respect. How can you be friends with a guy who ruined a girl's life? Do you think he deserves your friendship and your love?" 😭

Meera replies "OMG. You are so right. I was blinded by my love. Thanks for opening my eyes. I am grateful to you. 😭" She goes to Geet and hugs her. Then goes up to Dev and slaps him twice saying "How did I let myself believe in you. You are a selfish loser." 😑 🀣 🀣

Unknown to all of them Mr. Manchanda, Pinky and Adi are standing outside because Pinky came to say bye to Geet. Mr. Manchanda is super mad now and tells Maan "This cheapskate came to my house and was asking all kinds of rude questions. I was convinced he was a creep and I was right 😑" He catched hold of Dev's collar and shakes him. He tells Dev "Geet is like a daughter to me. I will not let you go" and starts pounding Dev. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Maan intervenes and tells him "Geet is my fiancee so let me handle this, please. I will take care of him notwithstanding the fact that he is my brother. πŸ˜‘ " Mr. Manchanda acquiesces and stalks off to cool down.


Poor Pinky is in tears now and is being consoled by Adi πŸ˜‰

Pinky explains to Adi through her tears "He destroyed my friend's life. Then he tried to flirt with me too. On top of that he pumped me for information about Geet. I hate him and I feel like slapping him."

Adi is mad at Dev and feels for Pinky πŸ˜‰.....so he tells her "So what is stopping you?"

Pinky looks at Geet and starts getting madder at Dev for what he did to her friends and before she can think she has stalked up to Dev and slapped him twice. πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Everyone is stunned, but no one more than Pinky herself πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† and Pinky runs out of the room in tears. Geet wants to go after her but  Daadi tells Maan that she wants to lie down and so Meera takes her to her room. Geet asks Maan to call the doctor while she goes after Pinky. After asking the doctor to come immediately, Maan calls his security team and asks them to stand guard and tells them not to let Dev escape. Until then he asks Adi to stay with Dev to keep an eye on him.

Once Maan leaves Adi eyes Dev with disgust and Dev smiles at him. This angers Adi and he sticks his foot out as Dev is walking causing Dev to fall flat on his face. Adi then gives him a couple of kicks telling him that these were for Geet and for flirting with innocent Pinky and walks out seeing the security team enter. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Dev picks himself up and crawls to the chair.

Geet goes looking for Pinky and finds her with Sasha and Tasha. πŸ˜‰

Geet finds Pinky talking to the Asha twins. Sasha taunts Pinky asking her why she is crying and Pinky tells her that these are tears of happiness because she had slapped someone who ruined a girl's life. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Sasha and Tasha are stunned and ask whom. Pinky says that Dev - do you know he fake married a village girl, slept with her and ran away with all her money. Her family tried to kill her because of that. And then he has the gall to flirt with me. So I slapped him."

Unfortunately for Dev, Sasha turns out to be a women's libber and is mad on the poor village girl's behalf 🀣 🀣 🀣. So she asks "Oh so Geet told you this?" So Pinky says "yes and Dev confessed too."

Geet comes and Pinky says "I admire you.". Sasha feels an unwilling admiration for Geet who dared stand up and tell the truth. It does not occur to her that the girl is Geet herself πŸ˜‰ so she thinks this was probably some girl from Geet's village. πŸ˜ƒ

She is mad at Dev because he swindled a girl and also because he had tried to put the moves on her. She tells Tasha "No one no one gets away with this. How can he even think of flirting with me? I will show him." 😑

She stalks off to the room where Dev is being held and talks to the lead security guy whom she is pals with. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

She tells him the whole story and asks to talk to Dev. They let her and Tasha enter and stand there looking angrily at Dev.

Dev tries to charm them and says "hey how are you guys today? How did you enjoy the party?" 🀒🀒🀒

Sasha delivers two slaps to Dev and tells him "That was for attempting to flirt with me again. I will be pressing charges if you ever come near me again. Save the rubbish. If you had not been MK's brother I would have pressed charges on the girl's behalf. But I know MK and he will punish you. " 😑 and she gives him a wicked smile.

As Sasha stalks off Tasha come up and slaps Dev too. When Sasha looks at her in askance she says "He flirted with me too."

Sasha says "Good job" and Tasha is stunned because Sasha has praised her for the first time. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The Asha twins leave a stunned looking Dev behind.

Adi finds Pinky and tells Geet to go back to daadi and that he will take care of Pinky. πŸ˜‰

Geet goes back to daadi and finds Meera sitting with her. The two girls hug and Maan comes back. Maan requests Meera to sit with daadi as he wants to talk to Geet and Meera says "Go right ahead. Take all the time you want." and winks at both of them.

Geet blushes and Maaneet leave.

Maan takes Geet to his room and apologizes to her and tells her that he will understand if she wants to break up with him. He tells her he would understand if she never wants to see him again after what his brother did to her. He asks her why she did not tell him about the airport and how she suffered? 😭

Geet tells him that "you heard me tell Dev that you are my life and how can I visit your brother's sins on you? He is the criminal not you. You saved my life and my baby's life. I love you. I wanted to find him and punish him myself, which is why I did not tell you. Also I did not want to hurt you."

Geet says "If you do not want to marry me after knowing I am carrying your brother's child I understand."

Maan looks angry and tells her "What has that got to do with anything? This is our baby and I am the baby's father. I don't care who is the biological father."

Geet says "Then we are both on the same page."

Maan says "I will spend a lifetime making up for all the pain you have been through." and kisses her forehead.

Maan adds "Let us get married as quickly as possible. I cannot wait to make you Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana. "

Geet blushes and nods. Maaneet hug and time stands still for them. ☺️

At the other end of the house. the security team is also mad at Dev and giving him dirty looks. 😑

Nacool is passing by and overhears the security guys saying that they would like to slap him themselves. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Nacool (Nakul) is mad at NT because she always gave him extra work and yelled at him πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. He tells the security guys this and they ask him why he is telling them this. Nacool tells them that he really wishes he could slap Dev and the security team asks him to go right ahead πŸ˜† πŸ˜†.
Nacool is stunned and wastes no time giving Dev two slaps. He then thanks the security team and leaves.

At the other end of the house Maan's phone rings and Maan picks up on seeing that it is Meera. Meera tells them that daadi is asking for them. Maaneet break apart unwillingly and go to meet daadi.

Daadi tells them that she will speak to the pandit tomorrow and set a date for their wedding as soon as possible. She tells Maan that she wants Dev out of the house by dawn the next day. Maan leaves Geet with daadi and assures daadi he will take care of everything. Then he leaves.

Nacool is rubbing his hands in glee and walking down the corridor when he runs into maali. Maali asks him why he is happy and Nacool relates what happened and Mali asks can you take me too. I want to slap him too. He destroyed my plants 😑. Nacool agrees and takes him to the security team.

The security team takes Maali inside and the maali says to Dev "my plants are like my children and I care for them like that. How dare you harm them. You decapitated my poor plants. I have been waiting to get back at you." He jumps on Dev and starts slapping him πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. After he has slapped him a few times the security team intervenes and drags him away.

Dev is shocked that the servants and employees alike harbor such hatred in their hearts for him πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The servants leave the room and encounter Maan coming in and run away. Maan enters the room and sees Dev's red cheeks and cannot figure out why his cheeks are so red and swollen. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Dev sees Maan and knows his time is up and Maan has come to give him his just desserts. He sees Maan asking the security team to leave and knows that his brother intends to teach him a lesson he will not forget. He fears the expression on his brother's face because Maan's face displays a cold rage that he is fighting to control. Dev knows he had never shared a warm relationship with his brother but he had never seen his brother's eyes reflect the contempt he sees in them now.

He wonders what fate is going to befall him and what exactly his brother intends to do with him? He then remembers his brother doing his Tai Chi moves and knows that his brother is going to use some of those very moves on him. πŸ˜‰

He knew his fate was sealed and prays that he is alive to see tomorrow. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago
Jhan!! This is awesome!!! πŸ‘

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Dev getting slapped is such a treat 🀣🀣🀣
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Jhan: slap fest, such a treat. Charan sparsh πŸ˜†
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General Jhan
I followed your order and commenting 
TOOOOOO goooooodyyyyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jhan...🀣 🀣...its a slap fest and I want to be a part of it!!! 🀣
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Jhan tussi great ho......taufa kabool karo......πŸ‘

this is hilarious.....🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣.....i wish i could slap Dev too......chalo de hi dete hu.......virtual slaps from moi.....
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and yahan bhi Maahiiiiii...these chillaying aatmas torture us in fiction too........🀣 🀣
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Jhan loved all the slapping. lets start a andolon and get the Cvs' to make all the characters stand in line and slap Devtard. πŸ€£ Then for the finale, Maan beats the living day lights out of him. πŸ˜ƒ
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Jhan, what a treat I got first thing in the morning πŸ˜† Awesome dear.

Dev slap fest?? Can we be a part of it? Just imagine Dev after we are all thru with him... 🀣

I was expecting a very serious OS and this thoroughly surprised and entertained me. Thanks darling for this. πŸ€—
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OMG so many slaps, i am sure his face would be like a balloon after so many slaps..Swollen hogaiee hogi na.....





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Posted: 13 years ago
🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 OMG! This is tooooo funny! 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 Maan stopping Geetbecause her hands will hurt...awww..😍

Maali & Nacool 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Why do Meera, Nacool, Sasha, Pinky slap Dev only 2 times 😑 πŸ˜† Please write some more...I can never get enough of Dev getting slapped πŸ˜†