short OS~With You Now & 4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hola Friends 🤗

Kay So This is ma 1st n Hopefully the Last tyme Writtin any OS😆 Im Actually not into Such Things Buh This is Sumfin Which popped in ma Mind afta Watchin the Friday epi😆

So Not sure if u Guys Will like it 🤣 So chapals r welcome if u dnt like it 🤣

 

---With You Now & 4ever---

Geeeeeeeeeeeeet" Maan shouts While running n Looking For Geet

"Mujhe Maan Sir Ke Zindagi se Hamesha Hamesha ke Liye Door Jana Hoga! Mein Layak Nahin Hoon Inki Zindagi Ke ..."Geet Stops When She Sneaks n Sees Maan Broke Down Shoutin "Geeet! Mujhe Itna Bara Saaza Mat Do! ....Bas Ek Baar Mere Samne Aajao"Geet Wanted To Run To him n Hug him Tight buh She Stops n Says "Kyun Babaji! Kyun Kar Rahe Ho Yeh Mere Saath! Jab Meine Decide Kar liya Ke Mein Iss Shehr se Door Chali Jaongi, toh Phir Kyun Maan Sir Ko Yahan Phir Se Mere Samne Kara Kar Diya aur woh Bhi Itne Dard mein ... Aur Mujhe Itna Lachar Kar diya hai Ke Mein Unke Paas Bhag Kar Unne Gale Bhi Nahin laga Sakti aur Ke Sakti Ke mein Unne Kabhi Nahin Bhula Sakti lekin Mera Yahan Se Chala Jaana Hi Theek Rahe Ga .." in The Mean Time She Hears Maan Shoutin n Lookin Around "Geet Mujhe Pata hai Tum Yahan Ho! Please Mujhe Maaf Kardo !! Geet Mein tumhare Bina Nahin Jee Sakta!! Hain Geet Mujhe Aadat Ho gaye Hai Tum Hari! .. Meri Zindagi Adoori Hai Tumhare Bina Geet!! ..." Geet Stood there Helpless and Cried saying I Love You Maan sir aur Mein Hamesha Karti rahoongi Lekin Unke Ek Baat Ne Mujhe Tod Diya *Mujhe Laga Ke Tum Sirf Mere Ho Geet* Kya Mere Saath Jo Hua Woh meri Marzi Ti... Mujhe Laga Ke Woh Mujhse Pyaar Karte hai,Pyaar toh Woh Karte Hai Lekhin BAROSA ... Shyad woh Barosa Tooth Gaya" She Says while Lookin At Maan Helplessly.

Geet Starts Running As she Sees Maan Walkin Towards Her n Her Dupatta Flew n Touched Maan's Face. He stopped n Removed the Dupatta n says "Yeh Toh Geet Ka Dupatta Hai"n he Starts running All Over the Station Shoutin only 1 name GEET And every1 is just watchin Him how Helplessly he is Lookin For His Love!. Seeing his Craze For the 1 He is lookin for, an old Lady Says Aye Munda Baut Pyaar Karta Hoga Us Kuri Se, Babaji Milwa do Dono Ko"

Geet Stops n Realises That her Dupatta is missing n She rushes Towards Her Train buh Some1 Pushed Her Towards Him n she See's its Maan. MAHIIIIIIIIIIIII Moment.

"Aap ...."Says Geet while Lookin into his Eyes. "Haan Mein! .."Says Maan. "Kyun Aye Aap Yahan! Meri Zindagi Koi Khel Nahin Ke Jab Chahe Toh Agaye Aur Mann Bar gaya Toh Chor ke chalegaye! Meine Apse Kya Manga? Baas Ek baar Meri Poori Baat Sunlete!! Aur Jab Sunna Toh Woh Shabd *GEET MEINE SOCHO TUM SIRF MERE HO* Kyaa bhi Ladki Woh Sab Apne Zindagi mein Chahti hai! Meri Kya Kasooor hai Iss Sab Mein! ..."Stoood There Listenin to Her n Said "Geet..." while Geet stopped him Saying "Baas Aab Aur Nahin! Mujhe Bhi Dard Hota Hi! Kissi Ke Bhi Jee Chaya toh Agaya Mere Zindagi mein Aur Jaab Jee Bara Toh chor Diya! ... Kyun? Isliye Ke Mein Ek Ladki Hoon! Kyun hamesha ek Ladki ko Hi Har Pareshani Face Kar ni Hoti Hai! Lekhin Aab Aur Nahin! Please Mujhe Yahan Se Jane Di Jiye Aur Aap Bhi Apne zindagi Mein Hamesha Kush Rahi ye!..." Maan is Full Shocked, Has Nothin to Say! Buh Just Wants To Stop her n Appologise buh in the mean time Geet  pulls her self Away From him n Starts Walkin Away, while Maan Breaks Down saying "Geet ..." in a Heart Broken tone "Itni Bara Saaza Maat Do Mujhe Geet ... Mar Jaoga Mein! Tum Meri Zindagi Ho Geet! ... Nahiin .. Nahiin Jee Paonga Mein! Mujhe pata hai Ke Baut Bari Galti Huwi hai Mere Sath Geet, Lekhin .. Lekhin Uss Waqt .. I Was Full Shattared! Samaj Nahin Araha Tha Ke Kya Kahon! Uss Waqt Mujhe Uss Insaan Par Itna Gussa Araha Tha Ke .. Ke .... Geet! ... Please Maat Jao Mujhe Chor kar.." Geet Sees Maan in Tears n rushes To him "Kyun Kar Rahe Ho Aap Yeh Mere Saath! Sab kuch Jante huwe Bhi ke Mere Zindagi mein Pehle Bhi Koi tha, Aur Mere Peth Mein Kisi Aur Ka Bacha hai Aur Aap Phir Bhi Mujhe Apne Zindagi mein Chahte Hain..."Maan stops Geet "Pyaar Kiya Hai Tumse Meine Geet! Aur Woh Insaan Joh Bhi tha, Jisne MERE Geet Ko Itna Dard diya hai, usse toh Mein Dund Kar Hi Rahonga!! Aur Yeh Bacha, Yeh tumhara Zindagi Ka ek Issa Hai! Ab Yeh Sirf tumhari Zimedari Nahin Hai Geet! ..." Geet is All lost in his Eyes While Maan Says "Mein Hamesha Tumhare Saath Hoon Geet .. Hamesha ! Aur Maan Singh Khurana Kabhi bhi Apna vaada Nahin Torta" Hearin This Geet Hugs Maan Tightly n Maan Does Same "I Love You Geet n Always Will" MAHIIIIIIIII moment !

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Kay so Now Please Lemme Knw How it Was 🤣

-Manal

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One word fr this
Perfect.
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*Reserved* 🤗
 
Okay first before I tell you how your OS was, I have to tell you this, I have seen you around IF alot, and never got the chance to say this, but I completely love your username. 😆 What does it mean?
 
Hmm, no chappals for you for the OS, rather jahppis for it. This is something I would always want to see in Geet. This OS had parts which describe Maneet and their relationship perfectly, this OS had scenes which i could just picture, and I think is commendable. 
 
I have been on an OS reading mission today 😆, and by far this is the best one I have read ! Kudos to you :)
 
Also, one thing I really loved about your OS, was the fact that it brought out a very basic human pysche. Geet is dying to rush into his arms, yet when confronted by him near the train, she blames him and that is a basic human defence mechanism. Freud will be proud of you. 🤣
 
I really liked the OS. Do PM me if and when you write more. Actually scrap that, make it when you write more, cause this surely cant be your last.
 
Much Love.
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Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

awww Thnks Lekhu 🤗

Chup behoodi mar paregi. Agar tu ne thanks. Bola to
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awww thnks Aarti 🤗
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Awww 🤗 Thnks 😆
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Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it.
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BEHOOOODI 🤣🤣 wow man!

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Originally posted by: cooldude10

BEHOOOODI 🤣🤣 wow man!

🤣🤣See I Fulfilled ma Dream by ma Self 🤣 i made MAAN CRY 😲 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Pata nahin CV's Kab Mera Wish Poora Karenge 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
manoo cv's made maan let out his feeling by tears dear in the last two epi's