Maaneet Fanfic - Part 8 Page 7 Updated!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys i've read many ffs and just wanted to try one of my own...plzzz tell me what u think. 

"Help!" she screamed before a hand came and clamped her mouth. Slowly opening her eyes, Geet found herself surrounded by darkness. The ground was damp beneath her and the air was filled with the smell of fuel. Where was she? How did she get here? Why was it dark? What had happened? Who attacked her? Where had he gone? Questions plagued her mind as Geet tried to think straight with the pounding in her head. She soon realized she was covered in blood, had a gash on her forehead and a broken leg. But all her pain was forgotten as the thought of Maan came to her mind. Where was he? Had they got him? The guilt slowly filled her heart, if she hadn't been so stupid they would've never been in this place. Why did she always put him in danger? (dunno have been wondering the same thing for ages) πŸ˜†

jootas, chapals, everything welcome!  πŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey thats a Fabulous StartπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved it
Pls Continue Soon Dear
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey continue soon add me and be a bit longer
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, nice start ! Write more soon soon so that we knw more about d situation :-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the start looks interesting πŸ€—
do cont.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice start......do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Hey thats a Fabulous StartπŸ‘

Loved it

Pls Continue Soon Dear



thanks!
will do 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rinky70

hey continue soon add me and be a bit longer



don't worry the next part is much longer...i'll update it tomorrow πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey, nice start ! Write more soon soon so that we knw more about d situation :-D


hehehee...yeah knw its kinda confusing...don't worry it'll all clear up in the next part...hopefully 😳
thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

<font color="#990099">hi</font>

<font color="#990099">the start looks interesting πŸ€—</font>

<font color="#990099">do cont.</font>


hope u like the next one too....coming tomorrow sometime,
thanks for reading 😊