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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
awwe that was really sweet..!!!=)... fabulous..!!
amazing as usual swity..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
great Love reading everything about Maan and Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay, so just imagine everything the same as they show it in the drama, other then few expection which are, maan is the onli child, geet runs away 4om hp cuz she was tried listening to her borthers... so she neva met dev or got pregrent, and after working in maans office, they both fell in love and got married

geet: how can you do dis... its just been one week till we hve been marriaged, and you wana leave

maan: i neva wana leave it is just for 2days geet....

geet: maan plz, cant sum1 else go on ur behalf

maan: geet darlin

he moves forward to her and cups her checks: no, look its nt like i wont miss you, bt i reali have to go, and u would nw, as this is veri important for our company...

geet: likan maan log apne honeymoon apr jata hai, aur tum akela hi jaa raha hoo

maan: im nt goin on my honeymoon alone... like dat would be worng... - maan smriks

geet: maan

maan: geet...

geet: fi9 jaoo

maan: thanks, he gives geet a long lasting favourish kiss on the lips and even geet replys the same way, maan nw wants to let go of the kiss and geet holds on to his lips and hold his back wid her hands(hug) and she slowly starts to remove his shirt out of pant

maan: MMMM (in pleasure bt also saying mmm in anger)

at last maan lets go

maan: geettt

geet just looks at him...

maan just cant stand stand to stay wid her...

maan: ufff

he goes back and plants yet another kiss on her lipss, dey both have a tougue fite and at last maan forgets abou the ticking away time, and moves down to her neck

geet who is so out of breathe says breathing fastly: thansk for nt goin

maan suddenly stops: no im goin

geet looks at him puzzled

maan: i promise we will count where we left

maan leaves his room and stands out of the door: oh geet how can u make u understand i reali dont wana go... lost in his thots outside of the door, geet inside the room thinks: it is final im nt goin to make maan go... DATS IT

she play a c-d in thier room

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro, zara therhro
Main bhi to chalta hoon, zara unse milta hoon, zara therho

maan enter the room

Jo ek baat dil mein hai, unse kahoon
(To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm
To chalun, to chalun, to chalun)

he doesnt see geet anywhere... where is she, he thinks hard

To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm
To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

just then the bathroom door opens and geet cums out of the door wearing a hot red coloured releaving saree, wid open hairs

To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm
To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

maan just couldnt himself anymore he goes to her

Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro

and picks her up in his arms


Unke chehre ki yeh narmiyaan
Unki zulfon ki yeh badliyaan
Unki aankhon ke roshan diye
Unke honton ki yeh surkhiyaan)

maan is just tooo lost in geets eyes and so is geet

Sab unke hain jalwe, main chalne se pehle
Saanson mein, aankhon mein, khwaabon mein, yaadon mein
Aur is dil mein unko chhupaake rakhoon

he makes her ly on the bed and starts to leave


To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm
To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

he reaches for the door  


Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro

geet cums up 4om the back, and holds maan 4om the back


(Main kahin bhi rahoon ae sanam
Mujhko hai zindagi ki kasam
Faaslein aate jaate rahe
Pyaar lekin nahin hoga kam)

and brings him to the bed, and makes him ly down and she goes on top of him...


Jinhe chaahoon, jinhe poojoon, unhe dekhoon, unhe chhoo loon
Zara baatein to kar loon, zara baahon mein bhar loon
Main is chaand se maathe ko choom loon

geet takes her hand and starts 4om his head and moves her hand down to eyes, nose, checks, lips and den moves to his neck and his shirt and opens his button of his shirt slowly


To chalun, to chalun, hm hm hm hm hm
To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

maan stops her hand after 2buttons open, and looks deep in her eyes


Ae jaate hue lamhon zara thehro, zara thehro
Main bhi to chalta hoon, zara unse milta hoon

and maan opens the rest of the buttons himself and hug geet


Jo ek baat dil mein hai, unse kahoon
To chalun, to chalun, to chalun

maan: i love you aur ek deal chorni mera bari baat nhai  hai

geet gets a naughty smile: i love you too

and they start to comsumate more!

hope u guyz liked... i do have another idea of a os will update that soon, and yes i will update my ff soon as... and plz commentsss

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mina both of ur OS was really nice. thanks for the PM and S plz update both ur FF's soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Veryyyyy romanticcccccc os.
Waiting for another maneet os.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
nice os...hope u update ur ff's soon too.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏AMAZING YAAR👏LOVED UR OS A LOT👏ADD ME TO UR  PM LIST😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Thats Amazing
Loved it
Thanq so much for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arthirajendiran

mina both of ur OS was really nice. thanks for the PM and S plz update both ur FF's soon.

thank you, yes im workin on it... it is gonna be supper lonnngggg! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Veryyyyy romanticcccccc os.
Waiting for another maneet os.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima

thanks for liking itt😊