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Posted: 13 years ago
"kehte ha.......ke insaan jo jaisa karta ha.....usse uski kiye ki saza usi janama me bhagtni parti ha.....jo jaise karat ha..saza usiko milti ha......par mere sath esa nahi hua......jabki galti mane ki..aur saza kisi aur ko mili ha.....jisne humesha mujhe pyar kiaa...mera sath dia....meri har mushkil ko asan kiaa..har kadam pe mera sath nibhaya.........usike sath mane esa kiaa....meri galtiki saza...mere pyaar ko...meri chashmish ko....kyu????? kyu???? bhagwan meri chashmish ne kya kia tha??? usne to kuch bhi nahi kia thaa...wohh to..nirdsh thi......mujhse itna pyaar karti thi... aur mane usike pyaar pe bharosa nahi kia???????? aur aj mere ek galtike wajase usse saza milrahiha..................kyu???? kyu??? saza muhe milne chahiye thi...plzz...bhagwan....pichle do saalose meri apse yehi dua ha...meri chashmish...meri jaan....... gunjan ko theek karddooo..plzzz...." n it is samrat....who is crying like hellll....his eyes are deep red........n tears r flowing like.....water falll..........n he s holding a hand of a girl..who is lying beside him...on a bed...in a hospital room......with a oxygen mask on her face......with sindoor on her forehead..n mangalsutra in her neck........she is gunjan............samrat is holding her hand.......n crying...
s=plzzz chashmish....2 saal hogaye ha....ab to lot ao.....plzzz........plzz..chashmish...in do saalome mane kaise tumhare begar ek ek paal kata ha..ma janta hu...ma zinda to hu..sirf isiliye kyuki tumhari saase chal rahiha.....lekin chashmish........neha ka kya/???? humari beti ka kya???usse kaun sambhalega?? ma to tumhare pyaar...tumhare ehsaas...aur tumhare saasose ji raha hu...lekin tumhejaldi theek hona parega..apne lie nahi..mere lie nahi..neha keliye...plzzz chashmish.....jago chashmish...........................
n he starts crying again....................
s=chashmish..mane jo galti ki thi..uske lie tum kyu saza bhugatrahiho......? plzz...jago ar mujhe saza do...meri galatfemi...aur bhoolki wajase..ma tumhe takleef ma nahi dekh sakta....plzzz.....chashmish...ma zindahu...to sirf aur sirf...TERE LIYE......
so guys....this is the intro..i hope u will like my new..sajan ff...........plzz do comment.....n you will understand the concept in the further parts.....
 
 

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomee intro dear
it seems reallyy interesting..
Looks like Gunjan is in comma.. and sam misunderstood her and also did some mistake or something like that because of which she's in this condition today😕
Looking forward to this ff..
pleaseee cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice intro!!! I like d plot!!!
plz cont soon!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
 
i just loved it 
 
continue very soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME  INTRO YAAR  WRITE SOON PLZ 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Toooo Good! Maishaa.. where do youu get such ideas from??
I loved it!! Gunjan and samrat ki shaadi ho gayi,...
Shes in comma... Samrat had done something jiske wajah se shes in coma!!
Neha.. they have a daughter!! i love that name!!
N samrat is living only for his chashmish..
N its been two years!!
ab update karne main do saal mat lagana!! plz jaldi update karo!!
Love your ffs!! always!!
--Manjari!
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyyyy maisha..
dis cncpt seems damn interstng...
n d intro was realy touchng..
sajan married n olso dat dey hv a daughter..
bt den wat happened..??
realy vryyyy interstng..
cont sooooooooon n thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg, amazing can't wait to see what happens next, you are amazing, inshallah you may get more ideas like this
saduf thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice concept
looking forward
cont soon
Edited by saduf - 13 years ago
Kiely thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
man how do u get such concepts..u r a beautiful writer