SR OS-Leaving Assumptions behind- Pt 7 update pg25 - Page 6

oh sarada

Hey Sarada,

Loved it .....The most important thing about ur OS is that it is quite close to real life.

1) Husband and wife will have fights, that doesn't mean they will part ways.
2) And it is not possible to have all the puppy love or romance all the freaking time.
3) What u have written is something which happens in real life between couples, unwanted-ly u hurt the other person.

Keep Writing
Lub
Bhavi 🤗

Edited by bhavi20_s - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: psarada

Thanks Zarqa. But this OS is solely based on SR only so don't worry I won't separate them. Almost all the OS on SR are romantic based only. I wanted to write something which will be more like them in the serial. The way they assume everything before the other talks is my main premise. Before I
give out the whole story I need to go. You read through the OS and let me know if you feel the story
is close to the serial in the sense does the situations remind you of Sid and Riddhima.

Thanks for your comments

you know wat ur rite...this OS is completely SR....100% SR...blaming each other and assuming things as always...but u knw I'm so used to reading romantic nd dreamy SR OS so got carried away...but ur rite this OS so much lyk the show and I can really imagine something lyk dis happening between SR too....nd thnx 4 not separating SR...hehe....and do PM me when u update the nxt part...thnx once again nd ur welcome...!!!

Nice update.......love siddhima
Pls do contine

Love manika

Hey great OS 👏 - loving it!!!! will be waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: mayuri.vet

oh sarada...lovely dear!!!!!...please continue...but why such a sad ending to this part?????

Hi Mayuri,

Thanks for replying and commenting. Yaar this OS has just started. Aage Aage dekho hota hai kya.

Originally posted by: supercool3

nice update

but this part was quite sad 🥺

 

anxiously waiting for the next part

Hey supercool, Hope you got my pm. Yeah this is flashback of Sid. You still have to go through the flashback of Riddhima too to know the complete story and the next part will reveal why Riddhima left the house. You know for that to happen I need more comments and I will post my next update. Pakka promise l will post the next part of the OS when the 10th page is hit.

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Thanks for the PM!

Nice update!

Cont soon!

Thanks Nikita. Yaar write something more than nice update. I want to know how you liked the update. But thanks for commenting. Chota hi sayi you did comment on my OS and that means a lot to me. Waiting to hear a big comment from you.

Originally posted by: AnnaNAshley

awesome update...really luved it👏

waiting for the next part😊

Thanks Anna. I will update the next part of the OS when we get to 10th page. Definitely will PM you.

Originally posted by: kiran255

oh sarada

its lovely

i love the fact that u write k  when a person in anger says something which doesnt mean what it sounds creates dozen of problem

plz update soon !

Thanks Kiran. Yeah when we are angry we say a lot of things which create a lot of problems. Sid didn't want to hurt Riddhima but her refusal of his gift made him say what all he said. I will post the next update on page 10.
Edited by psarada - 13 years ago