RN - Imtehaan.[The Test Of God]

hey...guys...😊
Missed u all alot...
here m back with mah New Fan Fiction
Well...m gonna start it ..... I hope u all will like It...!!!
This is totally diffrent from LRL concept but m havin the same characters
But hope u all will like it....basically m concentrating On Naina...so
here It goes...!!a little twist is dr in name Of some one..so plz co-operate..😛.

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Cast
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Gauri Tejwani - Saraah
Priyanka Bassi - Naina
Rajeev Khandelwal- Rizwaan
Mishal Raheja - Jay
Amir Ali- Zayed
Prachi Desai - Rashmi
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Ok Guys i know cast is totally diffrent but i really wish u guys will enjoy...


Naina a sweet girl of a city , sweet city......called Asaam....
She is totally diffrent from all girls...totally tom Boy type..
She doesn't were ear rings even , She is always in her own world hvn
sweet Dreams in her sweet little eyes...
Today she has become 11 years old girl...and she is goin to a new school...
She is so happy...she is goin 2 a diffrent place..diffrent people are there..
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Episopde .1
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(Naina's Mom):Naina.....Nainaaaaa.....Uth beta late horaha hai .....
Dekh 8 baj gaye hain....jaldi uthja beta....chal jaldi se uth jaa...
Naina: Ruko naa maaa...sone do na...
Mom: uth na beta dekh aj tujhe naya school bhi to jana hai...

She wakes up excitedly......
Naina:areee...ha ma...aaj to school jana hai na...
main jaldi se taiyar hojati hoo..
Mom:are abhi 8 baj rahe hain....itna tension mat le...aram se taiyar ho
school 10 baje jana hai...samjhi..!!
she has gone n brushd her teeth n....n done with her arrangements....
Its 10 o'clock now....

Naina:maa..main jaa rahi hoo dor laga do jaldi..se....
mom:are ruk tu akeli kahan jaa rahi hai..main bhi chalungi..
Naina:nahi ma tum mat jao sab friends dekhenge...
Mom:are chup kar...chal chup chap mere sath...
Naina:Tum boht gandi ho...humesha mere sath jati ho...
Mom:chal Chup chap...

At School
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Mom:Ache se padhai karna...aur badmashi mat karna samjhi...nahi to
sham ko teacher se poochungi..
Naina:ha..thik hai abhi tum jaao naaa please jaldi jao sab
friends agaaye hain dekh lenge tumhe jaldi jaao please..
Mom:Bye Beta.!!
Naina:bye ma...!

At Class Room
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Teacher:hello....Students.....Hope U all are good...Well ur Class Teacher...My name is
Sanyukta n m here to teach u English...Who ever will shout I will surely punish him/her
okay so please be quiet...n yes Remember ur Roll Numbers...okay....

Suddenly Naina Has seen her old friend sitting in her front bench
Naina:Hey Simi....
Simi:ohh...Hi Naina...tune bhi yahi Admission liya kya..
Naina: ha  yaar yahi liya..
Simi :achha kia..

(Simi was naina's friend in the old school but both of them were
not that gud friends...coz simi was a gud student than Naina LOL..
So Simi doesn't like to talk to naina..But naina...talks to every one.)

After 2 months passed in school...Once naina was moving around on the corridor..
and she watched a girl also moving around like her in the corridor...well that
was a saturday so morning school is on....and that was the time for lunch break

Naina (In her mind ):ye kaun hai...isse aj tak class main to nahi dekha...
boht proud lag rahi hai....pata nahi kaun hai...Kameeni..ki tarah lag rahi hai..

The Girl was keenly watching Naina but not telling any thing..

Lunch break was over....and the day was finished also....but Naina couldn't find
that girl...

On Monday..
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Naina Found The girl sitting Beside Her...
Naina was little more tall than every girl so she was sitting in the last bench
and that girl was sitting beside her beacause she Was late on that day ...
Naina:Hey...Hiee....
THe Girl :Hello....
Naina:tum nai ho kya.
Girl : han actually main kisi aur school main padhti thi..
Naina : to yaha kyu agai...wo bhi 2 months late main
Girl : actlly ghar shift hogaya n wo school boht door hone laga
isliye yaha transfer karwa lia...
Naina: par tumne entrance examination to nahi dia hoga
Girl : nahi dia...par admission ho hi gai..
Naina : oh..okay...Friends....!!
Girl :ya..Sure....
Naina:Wots ur name..??
Girl :Mona.....n urs ?
Naina:Naina....
And they had a shake Hand..also....


[Hey it was the 1st episode of the fiction N I hope u all are not gonna say...Yak.....
Plz Agar pasand na aye to mat padhna hahahaha.....waise mujhe boldena Ki  Riti u dont write
FF..please...I wont be upset LOL...I know..Writing meri bas ki baat nai but still..m trying..
Hahaha hope u will like...!!]

With all my love Riti😊
Edited by rlrl - 13 years ago

Hi Riti

Hi Riti

Hey Riti...thanks for the PM...Nice start...it was sweet...ud soon...n do PM me....!!!

😊hi ,my name is ria i am a rn fan too 😊so when i saw ur fic i quickly read it out the fic 😊is nice all the characters are good 😊 Edited by ronojoy_ria - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey Riti...thanks for the PM...Nice start...it was sweet...ud soon...n do PM me....!!!

Hey dhara Thanku So much for the Comment...😊
And I wiil pm u pakka n yup i will update it soon..😳
Take care Bye
Love
Riti😛

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

😊hi ,my name is ria i am a rn fan too 😊so when i saw ur fic i quickly read it out the fic 😊is nice all the characters are good 😊

plz waiting to see our raj so cont soon and do pm me when u will up

Hey Ria...
Thank u so much I really feel great....
Thanks alot...😛
Yes Thanks That u liked it .....
And ya...i will surely pm u..😊

Hiiiiiiii Riti

read ur fic nyc startng
Naina is school gng kid........interesting
w8ng for Raj's entry
do cont soon
plz pm me wen u update

Luvs
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 13 years ago

hii riti how r u dear....
remember me sweety i am priti.......
well really loved ur intro of the FF........
plzzzzz do cont. soon.......
and i also loved the title of ur FF.......
and don't forget to pm me whenever u upd.
take care........love u lots.......byeee......

Nice start