Written Update - 7th July

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Posted: 13 years ago
Guyssssssssss...........
 
Its 2pm here and I am soooooooooo sleepy!! *stiffles a yamn*....and the damn office AC is also not working.....and ppl around are sweating and stinking......yeaks!!!............Mujhe bachchaaaaaaaaaa!! boo-hoo........chalo, will take a break and jump to Khadelwals house.....Kya karaamaath dikhaa rahe hain woh log!!!
 
*peeks in Khadelwal House*
 
1. Akshay and Mr.K are scolding Shaan for letting Khanak go laste night when its not safe in the city. Shaan explains that he did have a fight with Khanak but she herself decided to leave, he didnt tell her to do tht!! (Waah Shaan, being a smart a** huh? we all are witnesses to what u told her, u told her to "Chali Jao Khanak...LEAVE".....Kyun behnoan....bola tha na?? ......*opens a morcha against Shaan*...bola tha!! bola tha!!....🀣🀣).....Akshay gets very annoyed with Shaan and tells him to grow up and understand his responsibility...he cannot keep spoonfeeding him always! He leaves from there....
 
2. Khanak is beautiful pink saree is wandering around the city aimlessly. She is tryign to grab an auto but none stops....Noone knows where she can find the bus to Dhulwadi....Khanak sits on the bus stand wondering what to do....A bus comes there and the conductor informs everyoen that this bus is to Gujrat....Khanak jumps in the bus......
 
3. BD is worried about Tashu and annoyed that noone cares about where Tashu is....Akshay tells ehr to shut up! (Wah Akshay, have u given up your, "Joru Ka Ghulam" title for ever?....🀣🀣....Shaabash mere sher! *gives Akshay two pats on the back!*,....)....He tells BD that whatever happened today was noone's fault....BD gets more annoyed that Tashu has always considered this family as hers but she has only got humilation and hurt from this house....Akshay mellows down and tries explaining that they would get back Tashu.....but BD doesnt listen to him!!
 
4. Khanak recollects many ugly and sweet moments with Shaan and then at last BD and Shaan's words asking her to leave! She cries.....(Arre, yeh kya ho raha hai....Suraj has been replaced in her thoughts with Shaan? 😲😲...Love is in the air!! 😳)
 
5. Dadi, Mr.K and Shaan are in the hall....Dadi is scared that something wrong might happen to Khanak.....She tells her son that he is the elder of the family and its his responsibility to do justice and explain Shaan that he shld stop being a kid and get back Khanak...She is Khadelwal family's responsibility.....(Dadi, Iss bade bachche ka bachpana to mein nikal ti hoon....ruko! *ties Shaan on a pole...takes out her whip*....saayein...saayein......who among you gals, wanna spank My.Irrresponsible?? huh?? 🀣🀣).........
 
6. Khanak gets down at some stop and wonders which bus would go to Dhulwadi...Noone is able to help her when a man in the van spots her and recognizes her...He calls Choksi and tells him that Khanak is in Khedanakka....Chowksi doesnt believe it but the man insists that she is Khanak....Chwoksi wonders what Khanak is dng there.....
 
7. Shaan recolects Dadis words about how Khanak is alone in the city and has no clue about what needs to be done......Mr.K comes there and explains to him that he understands the dilemma Shaan is in...He has been his friend always.....He understands why Shaan should hate Khanak and love Natasha...thats his decision and he is right...but kicking out someone in the night does not suit Khandelwals! and It wuld be a legal issue ...its a matter of 6 months, and he has to be responsible.....He doesnt wanna know what happened between him and Khanak but he wants Shaan to be respinsible and not run away from it......(*two mores spanks to Shaan*...🀣🀣)
 
8. Khanak is sitting alone on the road....few guys come and get excited to see her alone...They decide to talk to her....One of them ask her if they can help her out in anyways as it looks like she has forgotten her way! (lal tapak rahi hai charoan ke muh se!! Gadhoan....*fixes her cop hat*....abhi batati hoon.....gals, out with ur dandas and hockey sticks....In logoan ko to dauda dauda ke and then ulta tangaake....maarenge! ).......Bechari Khanak is so innocent, she tells them that someone told her this is the bus stop to Dhulwadi and she doesnt know where to go now...the guys dupe her by sayign that someone gave her false info and this is not dhulwadi bus stop...(where is that Van walla guy?? Stupid guy, left her all alone?? Aaj kal ke guys mein chivalry reh kahaan gayi hai?? 😑😑😑.....lagta hai, boys boycott aandolan shuru karna padegaa....chivalry seekho else pacific ocean mein doob jao...and pacific ocean jaane ka intezaam khudh karo....🀣🀣🀣🀣)They take her somewhere...
 
9. Shaan is thinking about Khanak and how Mr.K told him that it doesnt suit Khandelwals to throw someone out....Chowksi calls him and tells him that Khanak was spotted in Khedanaaka! Shaan gets super annoyed that why are people pestering him if Khanak has left home.....and he doesnt have to report to him if Khanak leaves home.....(OMG!! Shaan tune aisa kaha...How careless can u get.....*5 more spanks*.....🀣🀣)....Chowksi just wonders if Khanak might fall into any problem! Shaan sarcastically asks him what he needs to do.....He starts wondering what he needs to do and decides to find Khanak....
 
10. Shaan tells Mr.K and Dadi that he is going out to get Khanak back.....They both are very pleased with him. Shaan tells Mr.K very cutely that he wanted Shaan to be responsible, so here he is....(*Gives one kissey to Shaan in the cheeky!!*..🀣🀣)
 
11. The baddies take Khanak to an empty bus. She borads the bus and tells them that she feels weird ehre as noone is here...They tell her not to worry and ppl would come soon...
 
12. Shaan is in his car leaving to pick Khanak...He keeps cursing Khanak that which sensible gal would leave home in the night...Just because he tells her to leave, wuld she just leave? As if she listens to everything he says!
 
PRECAP -
1. Khanak is alone int he bus with the baddies and tells them that she is feeling weird.
 
2. Shaan doesnt knw where to find her...He reaches a red light area.....
 
 
Love,
DD
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shaan!!!! Hurry up!!!! Save her!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks!!

i really hpe shaan finds her in time
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the lovely update!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† DD  all ready with my wipes and what not to spank Shan darling.....so count me in....we can share the spanking job between us.,...no need to tire yourself alone....πŸ˜‰πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£
 
As for those yucky looking Ghondas.....urg...am already with my ammunition too....cricket bats, hockey sticks, lead pies etc..just tell me when to attack as am holding out for Shan to save the dayπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ...but if he doesn't then those items will be used on him asn well as the ugly guys.😑🀣🀣🀣
 
Aww....Shan darling looking for Khanak ends up in Red Light area....Chandni Bar.....🀣🀣🀣🀣 to get entertained 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣...guy you need to be where Khanak is.....knock knock.....anyone there...🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
Love your update dear. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
As usual,a funny update.Let's see how shaan first saves himself and den khanak tonite.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you DD....
 
I am so annoyed with shaan and his childish behavior when is he gonna grow up instead of being cry puppy all the time...
 
Poor khanak I hope she will be safe tomorrow....
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u
poor khanak
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx 4 d update.
Edited by Nilam2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the updateπŸ˜ƒ......