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Posted: 15 years ago
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continued....

Part 7

*they all reach n go out of airport to their hotel....gals seperate n guys seperatel*

In Taxi….
Nuts: ek important baat tho tum dhono ko batana hi bhool gaye...
Nupur n Ridzi: kya??
Nuts: jab wo milenga na tab....
Nupur n Ridzi: CHUP!!!!!!!!!!

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In Guy's Taxi...

Kandy: why are u'll shouting at me ?? 😔
Ammy: tho aur kya kare... kab se yeh pyaar pyaar pyaar laga ke rakha hai
Mayank: I swear... i hear this word 'pyaar' or 'love' from u once more...then u had it *warns kandy*
Kandy: Okay! *keeps quiet for a while* then if I say Mohobbat will do?
Mayank: Ammy, im gonna murder sumone tdy… *looks at Kandy in a murderous way*
Ammy: Im with u……bro *both catch kandy ka both hands as he was sitting in middle of both in taxi*
Kandy: Bachaooo!!!

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Nuts: pls yeh last baat...
Ridzi: say
Nupur: fast n last
Nuts: jab wo milenga na... maine books mein padha hai... tab gaante bajengi...😃

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Mayank: WHATTTTTTT???? u mean bells?
Ammy: Ting tong???? Ya Mandhir ki? ya phone ki? Tring tring?
Kandy: whicheva!...but this will be the sign... he is the one...

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Nuts: ...4 me! 😃
Nupur: uff...! tu nai sudhrengi na?
Ridzi: iss janam mein tho koi chance nai

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Mayank: I pity her...who u wil fall in luv with u!
Ammy: u mean him? or her? 😛 *laughs a bit..teasin kandy*
Kandy: NAUGHTY GUYS! like u'll *he again blushs😳! Mayank n Ammy look at each other*

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Nuts: vaise sumtyms barish bhi ho sakhte hai...aur sumtyms background mein music bajengi...then confirmed..HE is the one!!
Ridzi n Nupur: CHUPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!

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Kandy: OKOK! chilao math..my ears are sensitive! *puts finger on lips*
Mayank: thats better!
Ammy: Hey, Bhaiya{2 taxi wala/driver}..sir...Mr taxi wala.. how much time more to reach Hotel Kingston? As in how far is our manzil?

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Nupur: bass thodi door hai...humari manzil!
Ridzi: hey..there…I can see Hotel Kingston!
Nuts: wow..wow wow *strts jumpin in the taxi* the outlook is soo gud..im just luvin the sceneries..aur mausam = perfect for romance
Nupur n Ridzi: NUTSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!


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At Hotel Kingston!!!!

[Its a very old beautiful hotel...with a lake side view]

{gals check in n go to their room…on way to their room.. one lil boy dash Nuts n drops her bag..she gets hold of him n starts shouting at him}

Nuts: hey u..cant u see n walk
Ridzi: arre jaane de..chota bacha hai
Nupur: haan yaar, by mistake... whats ur name? *to lil boy*
lil boy: Roycee n u?
Nupur: Nupur! n this is Ridzi AUNTY 😛 n Natasha AUNTY 😛
Nuts: ok Nupur AUNTY
Roycee: Oh hi..nice to met u, girls! 😉 *winks*
Gals: haw! 😲
Nuts: ankh marta hai? ishe chota bacha keh rahe the..huh?
Ridzi: yeh tho Arman ka baap hai
Nupur: Arman???? huh? *Nupur says in teasin way*
Ridzi: *blink blink* maine arman nai kaha!
Roycee: so u girls are gonna stay in that room n in this hotel...??? *says in a frightful voice* so here, just a lil secret from me... dont tel anyone i tld u'll!
Gals: wat?? secret?
Roycee: there is a ghost in there... 2 ghost... 1boy... 1girl... GHOST!!!!! BOOOOOO… thats why we are checking out bcoz of the bad experience last night
*gals look at each other... errrrr..😲😲😲*
Ridzi: bad experience? 😲
Nupur: last night? 😕
Nuts: Ghost u mean bhoooooooot???😭
Ridzi: shut up...there is nothing like that
Nupur: do we look stupid to u?
Nuts: tryin to scare us? maine tho pahel hi kaha...aaj kal ke chote bache..
Roycee: Cool! ur wish..believe or no..! girls dont have brains...its proved today!!!...otherwise u'll would think..why would i lie? are u'll giving me a chocolate to scare u'll??
Gals: what what what??
Roycee: so listen now, Long Long time ago...nearly 400yrs ago..they had cum here for holidays..like u girls only..... suddenly sumfin happened..i cant tell u that...all i can say is they DIED!!!!!!!!! from that time...their spirits...are roaming in ths hotel...n haunting everyone who cums here......! SEE, for urself der is no much people here... bcoz no one really in Italy dare cums here... its only tourist like u girls who dont know the story..n dare to cum here
Nuts: OK! tu jaane ka kya lenga, mere baap? chocolate b nai hai!...OK NOW Go from here or........*warns Roycee*
Roycee: Going Going.......but just beware huh! specially at midnight n after
*lil boy goes*
Nuts: he is just lieing..aise thodi na hota hai *lil scared..acctually fully scared..holds Ridzi's n Nupur's hands*
Nupur: ho b sakhta hai 😉 *winks at Ridzi..to make Nuts more scared*
Ridzi: haan...maine b padha tha..ek old papper mein..hotel kingston mein
Nuts: acha bass bass...chup karo..aise kuch nai.. bass tum dhono mujhe chod ke kahin math jaana! Bathroom b nai! hum teeno milke ladenge bhooto se 😕😭
Nupur n Ridzi: done! *all giv each other thali n go to their room*


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[boys check-in now! n that same lil boy, Roycee throws a ball at Ammy]

Ammy: hey! *smiles n throws him back the ball. The lil boy runs n cums to Ammy*
Roycee: hello uncle!
Ammy: dont cal me... uncle!
Kandy: uncle..uncle..uncle *teasin way. Ammy stares at kandy... he becums chup*
Mayank: hey kiddo, whats your name? your staying here?
Roycee: No, we were staying... but we are just checking out.. bcoz of the bad experience last night *n here he starts his scary lil story again*
Kandy: bad experience?
Roycee: yups very scary-frightful-awful-ghost-experience
kandy: GHOST? 😲
*Mayank n Ammy look at da boy*
Mayank: Go on... *tells lil boy*
Roycee: dont telk anyone i told u...*tells the same GHOST story to them*
Ammy: ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.. gud one😆
Mayank: *laughin a bit under his breath*
Kandy: *jumps on Ammy* bachaoooooo!
Ammy: oye...uthar...! *says to Kandy*
Mayank: n suppose, i tell u...im that GHOST 😈 n Ammy is the SECOND GHOST 😈
Roycee: no, u'll cant b...!!!!!! the ghost are Italians!
Ammy: how u know? have u seen them? 😕
Roycee: errrrrr..no but
Ammy: we are only that ghost..........uahahahhahahaha 😈
Mayank: Yaaaaaa *says in a scary vampirish voice*😈
*lil boy gets scared n runs awy. Mayank n Ammy laugh n give each other thali/high-five n turn to find kandy all scared n paseena paseena/sweating*
Mayank: did u take our story for real? *to kandy*
Kandy: STAY AWY FROM ME U, BOTH MONSTERS! *scared way*
Ammy: So u think...we are really doz "intalian ghosts"??
Kandy: hmmmmm...im going to my room... bye *runs away from Mayank n Ammy*
*Mayank n Ammy look at each other n burst into laughin😆*
Mayank: 😆 Italy ke log....Beware of us!!! We r not Ghost but...
Ammy: 😆..worst then Ghost!😈
*cont laughing..giving high-five to each other*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
hay nic part yar 👏
n thanks 4 the pm 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
nice update
ghost part was really gud
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Ritu
lovely update dear
just toooooooo gooooooooooood
i really enjoyed it
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
lol just love this part u know sis !!!
the part about Armaan n Kandy about the bellzz
Madhir ki yeah cell phone ki
😆
n the part in the hotel
when that kid winkzz at Nupur🤣
n the bhoot ki story🤣
goshhh cant stop laughing
n the last line
*Mayank n Ammy look at each other n burst into laughin😆*
Mayank: Italy ke log....Beware of us!!! We r not Ghost but...
Ammy: .worst then Ghost!
*cont laughing..giving high-five to each other*
🤣🤣
I just loved this parts sis !!
have no wordzz for it !!
do continue soon na
cant wait to read more
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey ritu
wowowoowowoowowoowowowo i love love love love love this part
it's tooo funny .
i loved that ganti part .
and this little kid he is so naughty +openly flirting with girls (ridz is right yeah tu arman ka bhi baap hai ek saath 3 girls ke saath flirt what a daring kid )his ghost story .
kandy & nuts and their love bukhar(fever) nut's ka tu pata nahi but poor kandy ka A\M craze aadha tu utar gaya man A\M r hilarious and their ghost talk i m sure ghost bhi dar jay ga in se tu
today's update is blast (dhamakka) .
keep writing
update soon.
can't wait 4 next update.

Edited by moonlight2630 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Hey Thanks... for reading n commenting
Hope u like the next Part.... A lil bit long but do read n comment😃
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Part 8

@Gals Room…

*Nuts still holding on to Nupur n Ridzi's hands*
Nupur: Nutsss!??????
Nuts: kya ? *started*😲
Ridzi: hath chod! its only 7' o clock! ab bhoot nai aata!😆
Nupur: haan! Tune suna na.. midnight yane 12 bajhe ke badh…😆
Ridzi: bhoot log..time ke bahut pake rehte hai😉
Nuts: *scared but leaves their hand* OK! Par ek hi room mein rahenge..
Ridzi-Nupur: HAAN baba!😆
Nupur: Wo recep mein keh rahe thi ke aaj raat koi Prog hai neeche.. some dance n dinner party?😕
Nuts: ARRE HAANNNNN!!! *gets excited n forgets the bhoot*😃

Ridzi: ya, lets get ready!

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@Guys room…


Mayank: AMMY! how many times I have to repeat same thing to u……common get ready, quick…
Ammy: hmmm ok *boarin face🥱* btw, gals also will be there?
Mayank: AMMY! Offcourse... girls reach everywhere n anywhere
Ammy: (😃 balle balle) tho lets get ready na! what are u waiting for..? kab se im telling u, Bro 😕
Mayank: OH! Ur telling me?.........btw, How much more time will this Kandy take to get out of bathroom? 😕
Ammy: uski tho…..lemme see him! abbey kandy..darvaza khol…..! *bangs bathroom door* 2hrs ho gaye…! Darr math, hum bhoot nai hai..we were just kidding
Kandy: I know…*frightened voice* harr pagal yehi kehta hai main pagal nai aur harr bhoot bhi yehi kehta hai main bhoot nai 😳 but pls dont do anything to me!😭
Mayank: U OPEN THE DOOR IN 40SECS or I WIL BREAK OPEN IT…40…39…38 😡*warns kandy*
Kandy: 😲😲😲
Ammy: haw!!!! Phir tumara shame shame ho jayenga… uahahhahaha😈…37…36…35
*kandy opens door, quickly…hidding his 'izzat' with a towel…looks at both of them as if they are rapist-cum-ghost n runs away. Mayank n Ammy look at each othr * 😕 blink blink *
Ammy: this guy….😕
Mayank: ….cant b for "real"!
😕


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@Gals Room

*All r getting ready for the evening party*

{Nupur gets ready in a red-strapless-gown while Ridzi wears a black-backless-gown. Both gowns are suggested n given to them by Nuts}

Nuts: wowww *whistle* atom bomb!!!!!!!!! red signal..!!!!!!!!!!!😃 kya jakaas lag rahe ho..tum dhono *tells Nupur n Ridzi*
Nupur: err *lil lot uncomfy with her dress* maine kabhi aisa nai pehna…
Ridzi: *conscious of her dress too* nor have I!😕
Nupur: *looks in mirrow..still confused* patha nahi how am I looking?😕


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@Guy's room

Mayank: ur looking really cool….😉..{tells Ammy… who is dressed in a white-shirt-and-black-jacket-casual-cool-wear}

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@Gal's room

Ridzi: *looking at her clothes* I hope its not looking bad 😕

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@Guy's room

Ammy: Nah! Trust me…ur lookin really HOT😉…{tells Mayank… who is dressed in a black-suit-with-a-red-tie-formal-wear}


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@Gal's Room

Nuts: ekdum phatake lag rahe ho…koi uda lenga… ;) *tells Nups Ridzi* n wat bout me {dressed in a orange-mini-dress}
Nupur: haan haan tu bhi jakaas lag rahe hai!


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@Guy's Room

Kandy: Mr Hot n Mr Cool…..u'll r jst twoooooo cutes😳
Mayank: …wish I could say the same about u! *to kandy*😕
Ammy: 😆
Kandy: WHAT? Oh well..neva mind but…this rudeness really suits u 😳
*Mayank stares at kandy*
Ammy: arre bro, bache ki jaan loge kya…?? dont look at him that way… 😉

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@Gal's Room

Nupur: these looks of yours really scare me!....... Nuts? Aise kya dekh rahe hai..is it lookin so bad???
Nuts: nai nai…..its looking really gud for a change! Im just shocked…u both can actually look sexy too!
Ridzi: sexyyyy?????? not me pls😲 *feeling shy of her open-back*


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@Guy's Room

Ammy: dnt feel shy yaar! Ur seriously lookin sexyyy… 😉
Mayank: Im not shy of me….!
Ammy: then….?

Mayank: OF HIM!!!!!! {Mayank points out to a kandy dressed in a pant-but-shirtless-with-a-tie-hangin-to-his-neck-lik-sum-faasi}
Ammy: *looks at kandy* 😆 are u seriously gonna wear this n cum..? 😕
Kandy: OFFCOURSE! this is the 'IN" fashion
Mayank: Im off frm here…! *irritated* common Ammy


*Guys go down*

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*Gals also walking to the ball room*

Nuts: arre chill yaar… dont b so conscious..!!! Yeh Italy hai…sab aise aur ishe zyaadha nange poonge hai…wo dekho!😆 *points at kandy from a distance*
Nupur: OH NO! Kya pehen rakha hai iss namune ne? 😆
Ridzi: ishe tho hum hi better hai! 😆
*all giggle*


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{@The ball room entrance..everyone has to pick a mask from the basket… gals from pink basket n boys from blue basket!!! Ridzi picks a red mask.. n Nupur picks a black mask}

*Gals go in first…then guys come after some time*

{Many people at the ball room... Music n Party on in full swing}

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Nuts: yaar..bahut pyaas lage hai..kuch thanda lekar aate ho *tells nupur n ridzi*


*Nuts goes to get sum cold drink at the bar-counter n just that time Ammy n Mayank come there to get a hard drink*
*Ammy at Nuts's right side n Mayank at Nuts's left side*

Nuts turns right: *ddlj music starts to play in her mind on seeing Ammy* OMG....dashing...Mr Hot......is he the one for me? 😃

then she turns left: *kuch kuch hota hai music starts to play in her mind on seeing Mayank* OooooooO…..another..handsome...Mr cool? is he the one for me? 😃 ……
Turns back right *looks at Ammy: nai! He is better!😕
Then turns left *looks at Mayank*: Nai! He is better!😕

*😕 Nuts- fully confused who is better! By the time, she sorts her confusion, Ammy-Mayank take their drinks n go*

Nuts: *looks for ammy-mayank* Kidhar gayi... Mr Hot n Mr Cool? 🥺

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*On the other side… kandy trips on the carpet n goes n falls on Nupur*
Nupur: heyyyyy u! Andhe ho kya?😡 *slaps him n he goes n falls on Ridzi*
Ridzi: aaaaa!😲😡 *slaps him… n he comes back n falls on Nupur*
Nupur: UUUUU!!!!!! get away from me varnaaaaaa……😡 *Kandy turns n finds Ridzi on his other side*
Ridzi: varna we know how to get guys like u on line!😡😛
Kandy: SHADAP! U'll beat me? Sharam nai aati? 2gals attacking a poor guy like me?😲😭
Both gals: NAI ATTI SHARAM!!!😡
Kandy: Just wait now, I will complain to Amu n Mayu..huh den u'll see what happens to u'll… just wait n watch 😡 *goes*
Nupur: Mayu??
Ridzi: Amu???

Nupur: Nam kahin tho suna suna sa lag tha hai😕

Ridzi: Amu = Arman n Mayu = Mayank... kahin aisa tho nai?😲
Nupur: unhone humare peche yeh jasos(kandy) bheja.......??? Nai Nai Nai yaar…duniya mein doosre bhi amu log aur mayu log ho sakhte hai!!!! Uss Mayank ke bache se bhagte bhagte mein Italy pooch gaye... he better not follow me!!! 😕 (grr)
Ridzi: haan yaar! Mayank aur Arman yaha kaise ho sakhte hai?!!!!!!! 😕

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*Kandy goes to Mayank-Ammy like a school boy complaining to his parents*
Kandy: *pulls Mayank-Ammy ka hands* come with me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭
Ammy: Kidhar? Where?😕
Mayank: what happen?😕
Kandy: waha….2gals…. they slapped me… see here *shows cheeks*
Mayank: Good! they did what I wanted to do from yesterday...slapped u… made my work easy!😆
Ammy: Bhala ho unn gals ka..i want to really met them😆


_____ ________ ________ _______ ________

*That time only lights go dim n spot light come on stage n a man=host comes n says*: HELLO PEOPLE!... All who are new here…we would love to welcome u to Italy! Hope u enjoy ur stay here n todays evening!
Now, there is gonna be a couple dance on the floor…But i would just like to add a lil bit twist to the couple-dance. Husbands are not gonna dance with their wifes… nor girlfriends with their boyfriends! They will be all random-couples dancing on the dance floor!
As u know, u'll all have a mask in hand.. I request u'll to put it on…! Now, there are 2colour-kinds of each mask… one will be with a girl n second one with a boy… match ur mask n find ur patners!
So what are u'll waitin for? GO search ur partners… The first couple to find their partner…within 3mins… will be the 'Couple of the evening' … on count of 3… Go…..3…..*lights get more dim* 2….*stage light off* n 1 *quite dark but stl bright enough to find the partner*…..Go…..

*All panic-ghadbhad-noise everyone searching their Partner*

Ammy: {his mask is red} Miss Red-Riddin-Hood…Gulabo....Tu kaha???❤️…*searching his partner b/w all girls*

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Ridzi: Main yaha! But pls dont find me…I dont like dancing with strangers..specially boys..errr *trying to hide her mask colour with her hand so that her partner doesnt find her*
Nupur: Its jst a game! Tu bhi na, Ridzi….be a sport yaar! main dhond thi ho..apne Mr Krish-Bat-Black-Man ko..my jodidar…😉 where is he? *her mask is Black*

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Mayank: here! *standing in one place looking here n there…not bothered or interested to search.. just looking at the mad people running around to find their Partner*

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Kandy: I wish my partner is Mayank or Arman😃

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Nuts: I wish its one of those two guys… at the bar-counter
😛
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*on stage*Announcer-Host: countdown………30….29…28

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

*Nupur sees a guy wearing exact her black mask type*: GOT HIM! 😃


*Same time Ammy sees a gal wearing same red-mask*: THERE SHE IS!😉

*on stage*Host: Time is going…hurry up guys n gals..find ur partners..he is here only..its just that u have to recognize him/her..… 27…26…25..24..23

*Nupur runs to her the guy wearing black mask(Mayank)... n holds his hand*
He: *sudden shock but cool…. trying to see the face of the gal but as the mask is on her face...he cant see her face clearly*
Nupur: come before…before it gets too late…to realize it

*Other side....Same time*
Ammy slides to the girl wearing red mask(Ridzi) n pulls her zor se
She: oouch
Ammy: we are made for each other…yane ki our mask are made for each other

*Nupur pulls Mayank to stage n Ammy pulls Ridzi to stage*

*on stage*Host: 3….2….n…..

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Ammy: I found her..I found her *yells out loud*😃

Nupur: I got him…yayyyyyy 😃 *screams happily*

*both get on stage…more or less..same time n lights comes on*

*Both say at same time…*
Nupur: He is the one for me *holding Mayank's hand*
Ammy: She is the one for me *holindin Ridzi's hand*

*still dint see each others face coz all are wearing a mask*

*Both-Ammy-Nupur talking at the same time*

Nupur: I was just searching like mad…dint even realize..that he was here only n I, stupid…could not see him
Mayank: (Thinks: I know this voice!!!) *Removes his mask n looks at Nupur*

Ammy: I was searching everywhere like idiot n she was just beside me….n I could not see her
Ridzi: (Thinks: Maine yeh awaaz pahele bhi suna hai?!!!!) *Removes her mask n looks at Ammy*

*meanwhile, Ammy n Nupur also remove their mask*


*Nupur n Mayank look at each other..while Ridzi n Ammy look at each other*

Nupur-Mayank-Ridzi-Ammy: *looking at each other* 😲😲😲😲

Nupur: YOU ! *to Mayank* 😲

Mayank: Yups ME! *raising his eyebrow* the one for u?? As u said just now 😉 *teases Nupur*

Ammy: ONE FOR ME????? NEVA! 👎🏼*tells Ridzi*

Ridzi: u said that…"she is the one for me"… NOT I… OK!😳 *tells arman*

Nupur: Haan, I said because I dint see ur face…😕 *tells Mayank*

Mayank: but…u said it!

Ammy: but I dint mean it!

Ridzi: Thank Heavens..u dint mean it!

*everyones eyes are on them….they realize n stop fighting*

{*Kandy n Nuts also look at them fighting on stage*- Nuts: Nupur? Ridzi? Ladd kyun rahe hai itne handsome ladko ke sath?…Kandy: Amu Mayu..Wats goin on?? *Nuts n Kandy bump into each other*: eeohhhh!🤢.......*make a disgusting face at each other n run away from each other*}

Host: There was just point few secs difference b/w u'll!!!! *tells Mayur..n AR* So, we announce u both as our 'couples for the evening'…*wispers to them: ur name?*

Ridzi: His name is Mr LBW(lattu before women)! *says to irritate ammy*😛
Ammy: whao n she is.... Miss Moong Wrath 🤓 *finger on lips*

Nupur: He is Mr Kadus!!!😳 (Videsi Gawar kahin ka)
Mayank: *laughs a bit at this kidishness* Ok..n she is Miss Nataungi 😉


Host: Ok so our couples for the evening are…… Mr Kadus(Mayank) with Miss Nataungi(Nupur) and Mr LBW with Miss moong wrath!!!!… A big hands for them! *everyone claps* So couples of the eve, pls take ur place at the centre of the dance floor… we wil ask the DJ to play ur fav song!

Nupur: I cant dance (with u!) *looks at Mayank* (Thinks: OH NO this is not happening…jis se door bhag rahe ho..wohi samne kadha hai aur tho aur i have to dance with him!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hey Bhagwan, mujhe utha le...... 😭 nai nai......😲 iss Mayank ke bache ko uthale.......😃 uthale aur america wapis chod de.......😃 please Bhagwan...main aapse aur kuch nai mangogi....😭 pls pls pls pls)
Mayank: dont mak a scene! Lets dance…I'll show u How! 😊 *says in a supporting tone*

Ammy: I'll teach u dancing…cum baby cum…uhahaha…😈 *devilish tone*
Ridzi: U? n teach me? Pahele khud sekh lo 😕 *irritated* (Thinks: first of all dance karna hai aur wo bhi iss lafanga arman ke sath?? 😭)

Host repeats: which song u'll would lik the DJ to play for u'll???

Mayur n AR: Jaane tu ya.....jaane na!
*they are shocked themselves…ke on wonder they agreed on something…ATLEAST!*

*Mayank offers his arm to Nupur… n she not-wantingly entangles her arm with his..n both go towards the dance floor!*

*Ammy just pulls Ridzi's hand n drags her behind him to the dance floor*

{All couples start dancing… Mayur n AR in the centre}

~~~❤️Song begins❤️~~~


Mayank holds Nupur's waist with one hand..n her hand with other hand..n pulls her near him looking in her eyes..but she looks down!


*Background Music*
~Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi....Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Ammy pushes Ridzi far n near..jiving her hardly! Turning her round n round n round..n finally she falls into his arms!

~Mera tujse hai pahele ka naata koi...yoonhi nai dil lubhaata koi~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Nupur just happens to look in Mayank's eyes at that time..but she quickly looks down n tries to escape his eyes..but again halke se slowly tries looking in his eyes..then looks quickly down..but again looks in his eyes… n his eyes locks her eyes into his eyes!
~
Jaane Tu Ya...... Jaane Na~


~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Ammy is doing his various funny-dance-bollywood-hollywood-cum-karate-steps with Ridzi… n she is just looking at him..with a shock expression😲! but she is forced to smile…because he is dancing like a 5-yr-old-kid!
~Maane Tu ya.... Maane Na~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~


Nupur looking in Mayank's eyes. Some unknown feelings from her heart flood into Nupur's empty-empty eyes!

~
Dhuaan Dhuaan Tha Vo Samaan
Yahan Vahan Jaane Kahan

Tu Aur Main Kahin Milay Thay Pehle
Dekha Tujhe To Dil Ne Kaha
~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~


Ridzi unconsciously starts admiring Ammy's childish side when he is dancing! Ammy lifts up Ridzi slightly in the air n turns her round n round n then slowly puts her down. Ridzi's heart starts beating real fast.

~ Tu Bhi Rahi Mere Liye
Main Bhi Raha Tere Liye

Pehle Bhi Main Tujhko Baahon Mein Leke
Jhooma Kiya Aur Jhooma Kiya~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Mayank slowly holds Nupur's hand…n entangles his fingers with hers…one by one finger…romantically entangle with each other! Constantly, looking in her eyes…not a sec diversion! While Nupur goes blink blinks her eyes consciously as Mayank is starring at her…her heart-beats r racing!

~Dekho Abhi Khona Nahin...Kabhi Juda Hona Nahin ~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~


Ammy swings Ridzi far n pulls her close..n their heads bang with each other…n they happen to look into each others eyes…continue the dance..with their head-touch n looking in eyes

~Ab Khel Mein Yoohin Rahenge Hum Dono..Vaada Raha Ye Is Shaam Ka~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Mayank turns Nupur…halke se/slowly..turns her round…n again fix their gaze on each other… still not losing eye-contact


~ Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi....Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi~


~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Ammy goes on his knees opening his arms to Ridzi… while Ridzi's eyes goes blink blink..blushin a bit

~
Mera Tujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi...Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Nupur leaves Mayank…realizing she was getting carried away… looks down again

~Jaane tu... Ya jaane na~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Ridzi comes back to reality…goes 2steps far from Ammy but still looking at each other

~Maane tu... ya maane na~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

❤️*Song finished…but still they are in that romantic-island n not back to Real world*❤️
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