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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pathooz
good work yaar
cont soon👍🏼

thnxxxxxxx!!😳

yaa...will cont. soon..

Originally posted by: ayushma30

Manu 🤗

I am so sorry hun...I got back home today and just saw your PM. You're writing a FF..YaY!!! Love the first 2 part (make them longer next time 😛) Do continue soon and add me to your PM list too!!!

Love ya ❤️

Ayu!!🤗

no sorry yaar.......i knew u were out of town..so that's allrite..!!😊 umm...just giving it a try😆....

m so glad u loved it!!!😳😳 yeah sure.. will try n make it longer...😉

u r already added to the PM list dear😉.....

Luv yaa too!!

Originally posted by: AaRtINaKsH
Yup ! a bit short, but a great start 👍🏼

Keep updating and PM me also .....

thnxxxxxxx!!!😳

yaa... will surely PM u!!!😊

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Manasi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: joysorrow
nice start continue soon

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wow ya ...very sweet

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Manasi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: akshranatik
cont soon

yaaa sure......

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Originally posted by: shamasallfav
continue soon manasi.....w8ing......gr8 work...well done....

thnxxxxxxx Shama!!!😳

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Manasi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divi4u

hey manu sry 4 d late reply with holded ears

very nyc part

cont soon n make it longer n PM me

thnx 4 d PM

no sorries nd no holding ears divz!!!!😳

thnxxxxxxx!!!!😳 will try making the next 1 longer!!😊

my pleasure PMing u😊....

Originally posted by: preksha_naksh
keep it manu awesome

thnxxxxxx pree!!!!😳

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Manasi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Credit for the Magically Awesome Banner : Shikha

Hello Guyz...!!

My heartfelt thanks to everyone who liked and appreciated the 2nd part!!🤗

Here's the 3rd Part...

Part 3

She comes back to her senses and turns back.It is Naitik.Naitik finds her to be worried about something.He is about to ask her directly, but first makes her sit on the bed.
He asks her:Mere baare mein soch rahi thi?😳
Akshara smiles faintly.
Naitik continues naughtily : Aap mere baare mein sochte sochte itna kho jaati hai sapnon mein!😳Itna bhi pyaar mat kariye mujhse Akshara!😛
Akshara doesn't reply.
Naitik looks at her.He holds her hands slowly.
Naitik : Akshara, aap yahi soch rahi thi naa, ki aap yaha par sab phir se kaise sambhaal paayegi?
Akshara is surprised.

Akshara : Hmm..Par aapko kaise pataa chalaa?😕
Naitik smiles and says : Ab itna toh main jaanta hi hu aapko.Haan kabhi kabhi hum dono ek-dusre ki khamoshi nahi padh paate, par pyaar sab kuch sikha deta hai.Dekha, aapke pyaar ne mujhe ye bhi sikha diya!😳

Akshara blushes and smiles.

She rests her head on his shoulder.

Akshara : Naitik, main ye sab kaise sambhaal paungi.😕Ek baar kii hui galti ko main dohrana nahi chahti.Bas yahi sab soch-sochkar mera dil baitha jaa raha hai.
Naitik : Offo Akshara, kitni chintaa karti hai aap!Aap apne mann se ye darr pehle nikaal dijiye.Main hu naa aapke saath!😃Jo beet gaya hai, uske baare mein bilkul mat sochiye.Hum dono milkar sab kuch sambhaal lenge!😃Aur phir aap toh Ghar ki, Maa ki laadli bahu hai!😉Arrey haan, Maa se yaad aaya, wo..Maa ne aapko neeche rasoi mein bulaaya hai khaana lagwaane ke liye.
Akshara realises it is too late to go down. She is about to go, leaving the suitcase half-unpacked.Suddenly, Naitik holds her hand....

To be Continued Soon.......

Hope u'll like it!😊

Please do press the Like tab if u like it!

And please do leave in ur Precious comments & suggestions😊...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update manu....
Do cont soon......

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wonderful update manu..!!!👏👏👍🏼
when are u updating the next part..???😕😆

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zee.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Osum update yr ...👍🏼
conti soon...
Thanks for the PM...😊

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sia

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Posted: 14 years ago

a gud one again!!! really gud yaar!!👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome manu......

wonderful

pls pm me wen u update next one...

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