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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sana


dear i jus read ol ur updates now..i mean ur ffs bth threads..
n now i read dis sequel 2..
n i am like WOWWWWWWWWWW.
it was sooooooooo damn interstng...i mean d traks....sonam n gnjn prt.n olll
was simply amzinggggggggg
include me in ur pm list n cont soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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Posted: 13 years ago
too good yaar
just read the whole ff again.
loved it.
please plzz plzzzzzzz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update....plzz add me 2 ur pm list.... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, is all i got to say, hoping for the best..............one a lighter note happy aniversary mjht and welcome back nupur
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice update
loved it sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen r u continuing this ff...im dieng to read it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
cont sooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 13 years ago

                                        Part 58

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sam pov

s:yeh chashmish ab tak switzerland kyun nahi ayi ab tak toh uska plane yahan land kar chuka hogA KYA KARUN HE WAS THINKING ALL THIS ALL HIS CELL RANG

s:hello

a:adi:hello papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

they shouted from other side sam smiled widelyyyyyyyyyyyy

s:hello bachonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

n the three some laughed loudly together

adi:papa aap aur mama kaise ho humain aap dono ki bahut yaad aa rahi hain

a:haan papa yeh thik nahi hain aap dono ghumna chale gaye humain chodh kar

s:pehli baat papa aur mama yahan ghumna nahi aye hain kaam sa aye hain aur jab hum phir honga toh aap main aur mami papa sab ghumna jainga ok

a:adi:okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

a:papa muma ko phone diye na humain unsa baat kar ni hain

s:hmm mamawashroom main hain

he lied

adi:oh noooooooooooo

a:ab hum kab baat karainga unsa papa

s:hmm kal

a:ok

she said sadly

s:baby my princess tu nirash kyun ho rahi ho mmais missing u too

bas woh abhi wash room main hain nah toh umnsa baat nahi kar sakti kal baat kaaingi ok

a:okkkkkkkkkkkkk

s:chalo ab dono ppa ko ek badiiiiiiiiiiiiiii si kissi do aur sono jao

a:adi:okkkkkkkkkkkkk muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bye papa

s:bye my babies

adi n aditi giggled n kept the phone

s:huh yeh chashmish hain kahan..????????

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In police station

police women:hey ladki

she said refering togunji

g:main

pw:haan tu hi chal tera photo lena hain

g:kyun

she asked confused

pw:kitni bholi ban rahi hain dekho,tujhe patya nahi kyun aksar pakdi jati hogi ah aisa dhandhon main

gunji looked at her with disgust

pw:chal chal zyada bakwaas math kar teraphoto nikalna hain taki kal ka akbar main dal sake chal

g:kya meri koi photo nahi nikalna main dhandhe wali nahi hoon

saying dhandhe wali too disgusted gunji

pw:sab dhandhe wali aaj kal yehi kehte hain chal

she dargged gunji out n gunji just cired trying to free herself but the women was oo strong infront of gunji strength

after taking pics of gunji she locked gunji in other cell with some other girl

when gunji entered th cell some womens were having alcohol n some were smoking

gunji immidately kept her pallu on her nose

n sat in corner crying badly

the other womens just laughed on her behaviour

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sam's pov

s:yeh chashmish gayi kahan hongi

he looked around hi room n thought to search chashmish out in switzerland

he was driving his car n stopped near his mansion THEIR mansion

the flash backs of his chashmish ran through in his brain

dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai

gunji was crying too remembering their days in switzerlan their good memories which will never be again happen in real

she closed her eye letting a tear escpe from it

dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai

s:g:Beete Lamhein..........

sam entered the house to remember gunji on every way in his mansion sometime he imagine her standing in dinner room or some time standiong at kitchen door or some time stting obn sofa n reading a book

n when he went near her n touched her check she vanished

s:Chand Lamhaaat Ke Waaste Hi Sahi
Muskuraakar Mili Thi Mujhe Jindagi

he went into his room n sw her standing near window smiling at him n as he took steptowards her she vanished


Teri Aaghosh Mein Din The Mere Kate
Teri Baahon Mein Thi Meri Raate Kati

he closed his eyes as he remember his realisation day inhis room


Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Pal Mujhko Yaad Aate Hai
Dil Se Saare Gamon Ko Bhula Jaate Hai

gunji looked around in the cell there were all rubbish womens talking nonsense thing about dash dash she cant take this carp anymore n she cired loudly thinking how sam was so potective about her n never let her hear such things in her whole life NEVER...


g:dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai

s:dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai


g:Beete Lamhein..........

gunji kept her head on the wall n let some other fresh tears escape

mere Kaandhe Pe Sir Ko Jhukaana Tera
Mere Sine Mein Khud Ko Chhupaana Tera

sam remember their hug in his bed room


Aake Meri Panaahon Mein Shaamo Sehar
Kaanch Ki Tarah Woh Toot Jaana Tera

by remember the all back days he was feeling good n sma;; smile appered on his face but still he was sad n was crying from inside


Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Manjar Nazar Aate Hai
Dil Ki Viraaniyo Ko Mita Jaate Hai
dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai

sam n gunji just cired their hert out


Dard Mein.... Beete Lamhein...

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gunji was crying harshly when a women came upto them n sat beside her

in fear gunji backed off

women:daro math tum acchi ladki lagti ho yahan kaise aa gayi

gunji kept quite she was hell scared

kisi sa baat karna chaogi

gunji nooded

w:yeh loh phone jaldi karlo koi nahi dekh raha

she said making sure seeing left n right

gunji immidately took the phone n called samrat n wanting too as no one was there in switzerlan

but his cell was engaged

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In sam house

his cell rang

he picked it up

s:hello baby

adi:hey papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

s:hi kaise ho baccha

adi:papa mama ko phone do nah umain unsa baat karni hain

s:not fair papa sa toh koi baat hi nahi karna chata

a:main toh karna chati hoon

aditi shouted from other line sam smiled

s:awwwwwwwww meriprincess kaisi hain

a:fit n fine bilkul papa mummy ki tarah

hearing gunji name sam was sad god only know whee she is n y she left him again

a:papa mumma humsa naraz hain kya

s:nahi prioncess aisa kyun spoch rahi ho

adi:kyun ki jane sa pehla eoh humsa mili nahi

s:accha

a:haan

s:aisi toh koi baat nahi hain muma aap dono ka liye shopping karna gayi hain

adi:reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

s:reallyyyyyyyyyyy

a:adi:yayyyyyyyyyyyy

s:accha ab papa ko phone rakhna hoga papa meetting main hain okay byeeeeeeeee

a:adi:byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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In police station

while sam was talking with adi n aditi gunji tired alot to call sam cell but it was engaged

than she called khushi

khushi seeing whose no it is not rconising she picked it up

kh:hello

g:hello khushi main gunji bol rahi hoon

kh:kya hua gunji tu itni ghabrayi hui kyun hain

gunjan explained her everything n khushi was shock to the core

after a serc the line went dead

kh:hello hello...he...

b:kya hua khushi

benji came running off seeing how badly khushi was shouting

kh:humain jaldh hi sam ko phone karna hoga

b:hua kya

she ignoring benji called sam

he piked it up

s:haan bolo khushi adi aur aditi tumhin pareshaan toh nahi kar rahe

kh:yeh san chodh

n she sad everything in mute n after hearing all things the cell slipped from sams hand

kh:hello.....hello.............

b:kya hua

kh:line dead ho gayi

b:shit wahan uska saath koi nahi hain woh pareshan ah ho jaye

kh:tum kyun nahi chale jate switzerlan

b:okay mainjata hoon

khushi n bnji got in work to get going their soon as for sure sam needs benji

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In police station

gunji got caught by a police women calling khushi

pw:teri itni himath ki tuna cell istemal kiya

cell kahan sa aya tera pass

g:cell mera nahi iss aurat ka tha

the wpomen looked gunji as she was purely lieing n aid

w:yeh jhoot bol rahi hain

g:kya main jhoot kyun bolungi vcell issi ka tha

pw:bol cell tera hi tha aur bata kis ashiq ko tuna phone kiya

she slapped her hard causing blood to get out of corner of her lips

gunjicired hard

n she shouted

g:kyun tum logh mera picha pade ho main shareef ladki hoon samrat shergill ki patni hoon main

pw:haan haan amita bachan mera pati hin bolungi toh tu kya maan legi

gunji looked at her frtom hatefull of eyes

pw:aisa ath dek warna ankhain nikal lungi samjhi

ayi,she addressed othre women

pw:isse bhi le jao dosra jagah aur bech do

g:kya bakwass hain yeh chodh mujhe main koi bikao nahi hoon main SAMRAT SHERGILL ki patini hoon chodh

she shouted but no one heard her

hearing too they just ignotre her n the women whohelped her just felt mad on herself for lieing...!!!!!!

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precap:sam reach station

gunji is no where to be found in her cell

n will sam wll be able to find gunji back or ajan ho jaingaalag hamesha ka liya..?????????

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Note:ignore my misakes kindle plz...!!!!!

loads of loads of love,

Sanu.

Edited by sana_sajan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
u do write very well!!!!!!
song is  depicted  wonderfully .........
but i think i'll take a little time to read all the parts as it is my first visit .......
i have full 57 parts to catch so i'll comment about the rest later .......
this one writen beautifully but abhi story ke liye cannot comment .........
thanks for the pm ...........
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
 
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itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa chota update janiiiiiii
not fair
was thinking to ae nae hy kya krn
phir dekha tera ff
was like 😃
tera ff parhon gy to will miss u n will sesm that m talking to u
loveeeee uuuuuuuu
n missing u
 
ok
going off topic
awesome
tooooooo good
brilliant
loved it to the core
and so on
 
ab aa ff ki taraf
mein kya bolonnnnnnnnnnn
u made me speechless
first scene
awwwwwwwww my jaaan kya fit tha
my sammy with additi
to start py hy was like
then moving forward
jani bara third class police station hy severly
aik lagao sab ko
in sab ko bhi under kro
batameez
sammy bechara itna pareshan hy
kab sy dhod raha hy usy
bechara sab in police walon ki waja sy
seedhy tarha kaam kyun nae karty
jaldi sy photo do n newspaper sammy k ghar do
phir pooch ly ga sammy in sab ko
 
ok
kya fitttttttttttttt track tha jani
just loved it
outstanding
really suits them
n brilliantly choreographed 🤣
mera shweeeto itna acha writer hony k sath itna brilliant choreographer bhi hy
love u
u r simply the bestest
n really the way u have corelated the song
n then sammy in home remebering the old moments
n gunjun in jail remembering all this
hats off jani
u roxxxxxxx
sammy roxxxxxxx too
 
n then agan love the treat 🥳
another sammy additi scene
just loved it
sammy bechara itny jhoot bolny par rahy hy
love the way he alwys use to console them
n dear aik baat bolon
to ny aj jo additi n sammy ka scene likha us mein sy tery smell aa rahy hy
straightforward pt lagta hy to ny likhy hein
they r really written very close to the way u used to talk
literally i dont know wasy mujhy to wasy bhi har jaga to dikhty hy
 
n wo jail waly oman kitny batmeez thy mein samjhy chalo gunjun ko koi hamdard milla
ulta or use phasa gae hy
wasy gunjun bhi na chup k baat krty
pakry bhi gae hy
again sammy bechara ae ga or huh
 
another bestest part
oh God
sammy kitna cute laga us scene mein
jahan khushi called him
n phone slipped
heart broken majnoo
just love the way u have written that scene
n sammy was extra cute in it
 
aik or baat bta
ye to ny jitny bhi serials dekhy hein un mein slap k bd lips k corner sy hy blood nikalta hy kya???
to hamesha slap k baad blood kyun zaya krwaty hy becharon ka
or abhi to hero bhi nae hy
k to ny koi emotional scene plan kia hua ho
then???????
 
n jani
m waiting
update kab kry gy next???
jaldi karna
n sammy ko ziada pareshan nae karna
wasy actually kar lena
twist ae ga
 
last but not the least
proud to b a friend of such a superbbbbbbbbbbbbb writer
but beleive me
mera bhi din ae ga
wasy bhi i will staart copying u know
aik din ae ga jab mein bhi acha likhon gy
n u too will feel proud of me ⭐️
 
one more thing
reply karny ki zarroorat nae hy
i guess lamba ho gya ziada
jitny der mein tera comment likhty hn
utny der mein mera pura ff likha jae 🤣
wasy buhut precious comment hy
mama kab sy dant rahy hein
so stopping over here
 
loveeeeeee uuuuuuuu
n missing u
 
Edited by chilluppp - 13 years ago