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superb update !!

waiting for next part..

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the way PRem consoled HEer was romantic
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When will you update Surya chechi
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hi friends....i am so sorry to say.....just a couple of days more.....i was at my sil's home for past 3 days and couldnt work upon the update...😕
but u ppl know me...i'll be posting the next one the moment i finish typing it.....most probably tomm night ....coz i hav college work tomm....
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it's fine
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kkk we will wait till tomorrw night kk then bye
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okay...okay!!!

haha...all seem more than eager for the update...😆

so guys i am not going to check ur patience...
i would like to thank all my dear viewers and all those who gave sweet comments...i would like to welcome mazka chazka ,love premeer and premeer alcohol(😃nice name...)to the thread...
i loved all the comments but now u ppl won't be intrested in my 'thank u's 'so me better go for the update,
dear viewers this update was done in a hurry.so pls forgive my mistakes....
warning....some mature content....😳😆😆

chapter 77

heer tried to quieten Ash who was clinging onto her and sobbing hard.....

they were in the mandir nearby the ghat....

"shhhh...ashu....yeh kya....dekho hum sab kuch clear kar chuke hai na...phir ...."

"nahi di...."Ash cut in sobbing in between.....

"maine aap aur mamma ka rishtha bigaad diya...tha...maa ko nahi pata tha ki aap unki beti hai...phir bhi wo aapse bohot pyaar karthi thi ...lekin maine unko aapke khilaf kardiya....maine bohot bada gunah kiya di....aapko kitna takleef diya aur...."

she sobbed harder....

Heer looked at Prem helplessly.....and rolled her eyes when she saw him chuckling....

"waise ash ...tum ne na...is se bhi badiya kaam kiya hai...pata hai tumhare wajah se heer ghar chodke jaanewali thi....aur yeh kehke ki main shadi tumse karna chahiye....!!"Prem said naughtily....

"Prem..."heer called out in stern voice....

"acha baba....dekho Ash ...tumne anjaane main kiya na yeh sab....and heer fully understands you.....ab rona dhona band karo...."

prem smiled as he saw Ash calming down....

Gauri walked up to heer and hugged her....

"heer mujhe poora vishwas hai ki Veera aunty tumhe apnayega...tum ne to meri zindgi main khushiyaan layi hai....meri dua khali nahi jaayegi..."

"thanks Gauri di...."

all were waiting for a call from Lalit.....

just then Preeth's phone rang.....

heer's heart jumped at the ring as her eyes darted onto Prem's face...he winked at her reassuringly.....

Preet put down his phone silently and turned to heer with a serious face.....

a tear rolled on to her cheek as she was convinced of what the news was.....

"preet ..."Prem called out...but before any one could respond Preet raised heer in his arms and whirled in a circle...

"whoa...di....maa aapki intezaar kar rahi hai.....!!!!"

heer was not believing what she heard.....her eyes and ears echoing the phrases which she wanted to hear from the moment she knew about her mom....!

in JM the environment was full of festivity....

grah pravesh was done with full zest..and cheers..

Gayathri did aarthi of Prem and Heer with a glowing face ....

heer tripped the ricepot and stepped into the vermillion water .....

as she walked into the hall marking her steps she was wondering herself how lucky she was...!

Veera was waiting for her her arms out streched .....

Prem was holding her hand ....heer looked at him...prem smiled and squeezed her hand before letting her go ...

the meeting of mother and daughter brought tears of happiness into all eyes around them....

veera kissed heer and took her face in her palms.....

"mujhe maaf karna heer beta.....main kitni abhagan hoo apni beti aankhon ki saamne thi aur main pehechan bhi nahi paaya..."

"nahi maa..aap yeh bhi nahi jaanti thi ki main zinda hoon....ismain aapki koi galthi nhai hai...."

heer kept her head on veera's shoulders getting the feel of her mother's love .

"are...ab aap dono maa beti aise hi ek doosre main khoye rahoge ya humhe bhi shamil karoge..."

Gayathri asked both ...

"haan aunty ab mujhe meri bhabhi se kitne kitne kaam karvana hai....games you know...."Sneha chimed in along with Ash,

heer looked alarmed and Preet eased her tension...

"aise kuch nahi di...don't panick...."

amongst cheers from all prem and heer searched for the ring inside the vessal of vermillion water....

"di....jaldi karo ...mere JI-JA-JI ko jaldi harao..."preet cheered

prem naughtily pulled heer's fingers under water...making her blush ..their gaze locked and both got lost in the depth of love in each others eyes.....

"hmmm...match fixing.....!!"

Sneha leaned on to Ash and whispered...and both laughed out loudly...

heer jerked out of her world blushing furiously....

as she brought her hand out of the trough she was surprised to see a ring on her finger....

"oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh........jijuuuuuuuuu...!!!!!!!".Ash and Preet hugged Prem who was looking naughtily at a bewildered heer....!

the games and laughter lasted for more than an hour .

"ab tum log in donon ko thoda rest bhi to karne do...."Gayathri asked the kids...

"nahi aunty ..aise kaise..."preet started to protest but a look from veera silenced him..."okay...okay..!"

heer was whisked away by Ash and sneha....Prem protested as preet took him to his room....

"preet...yeh tera room hai...main yahaan kyu...."

"shhhhhhhhhhh!! saale saahb..ab aap chup chap fresh ho jayiye ..aur thoda aaram kijiye.."Preet said grinning widely...

"tab tak hum agle programmes chart out karthe hai...."

"kya..?!!lekin...?!!!Preet?"prem called out as preet slipped away from the room smiling .

Dev was trying to hold on to his sanity the whole day....

his eyes burned from the heat of unshed tears and his head was splitting by evening.....

dev had stood silently away from heer with much effort.....he never thought this was going to be so nerve cracking.....

every time Prem put his hands around heer he felt a knife searing his heart....

dev was astonished at his own reactions to all these as he slowly realised the depth of love he had for heer...

heer....

his love....his passion.....his ....

the pain in his head was becoming unbearable and muttering an excuse he walked to his room hurriedly.....

upon reaching his room dev panted leaning on to the closed doors....

sweating profusely he staggered to switch on the a/c.....

he tried to calm down by taking deep breaths fumbling with his shirt buttons....unable to decide what he is doing or should do...

then upon a sudden thought he walked up to the wardrobe and rummaged through his bag .....

prem freshened up changing into a simple sherwani and came down to join others in the dinner table....

"his eyes scanned the whole area for heer but she was nowhwere ..

'kise dhoond rahe ho bhayya.....?!"Sneha asked him sweetly coming close to his ears....

"wo kuch nahi....Dev..!Dev ko dhoond raha tha...kaha hai wo...?"Prem asked her avoiding meeting her eyes....

'oh! to aap dev bhayya ko miss kar rahe the,....maine to socha tha ....khair...chodo...Dev bhayya apne kamre main hai...!"Sneha sat beside him giggling making others laugh at Prem's situation....

"ramu kaka...zara yeh khana Dev ko deke aana.."Gayathri handed out the food to ramukaka ...

"are Dev ko kya hua...tabiyath theek nahi hai kya...?"lalit enquired concerned...

"haan thoda sardard hai..use kal subh jaana bhi hai na...rest karne do use"Gayathri said in reply...prem looked concerned but Gayathri assured him that she will take care of Dev...

heer sat on the bed alone....

the whole room....her's and Prem's room before was renovated within a week into one single room ,study on one side ,walk in wardrobe and all facilities such as a small fridge and a wall mounted tv ,exquisite couch set...heer was first taken aback at the grandour of the room when Ash and Sneha took her to the room to freshen up....

she changed into a red lehenga...Gayathri had asked her to wear the jewellary set she had given her earlier...Ash and Sneha made her eat the food and then did her make up...

they along with Preet decorated the room with flowers and sweet smelling candles.....and diyas...

now as she sat alone in the heavily decorated room filled with sweet scent of the candles....she felt a panic gripping her ....

finally her dream has come true.....she is now Mrs. Prem Juneja....!heer felt goose bumps as she slowly said to herself the name ....

today is the first day of their marriage.....and heer was having bouts of panic attack...

she tried to reason with herself.....it was not the first time she was being alone with Prem.....her cheeks burned in shyness as she emembered their intimate moments ..

but all those moments resulted from their impulsive passion...heer realised why she was feeling a bit shaky now....

the anticipation of being all alone with each other and the waiting for the joy of deliberate celebration of love...

prem rubbed his both hands together as he walked to his ...no..their room..he corrected himself with a smile...his eyes were itching to see his heer ...those monsters...!he thought of Preet ,ash sneha trio in anger....itne der heer ke saath yeh log kya kar raha hai...?!

as he was about to enter the foyer leading to 'their 'room his face lost its brightness all of a sudden....

Ash and Sneha stood leaning on to both sides of the closed door ...and Preet..!

he was seated at the doorstep a wicked smile on his lips....

"are Prem BHAYYA...aap ?"all three asked in unison mocking Prem....

prem remained silent fully aware of the gang's intentions....

"awwwwww....dekho na Ash ..kaise mere eklote bhayya ka mooh uthar gaya....!"Sneha shaked Prem's chin ..

"haan...aaj ka haal yeh hai to...."Ash winked at others as all three shouted "kal kya hogaaa...!!!"

"chalo prem bhayya hum aapko ab keliye chod dete hai...ise humara ehsaan mano...lekin....neik diye bina to aap ander nahi jaa sakthe....!!"

sneha said as she helped Preet get to his feet...

prem's face brightened again and he pulled out two boxes from his pocket...

Ash and Sneha looked at preet and each other in confusion....

"mujhe pata tha ...yeh lo ..tum sab ke naik..."Prem handed the boxes to Ash and Sneha...

"wow ....its beautiful...!"Ash exclaimed as both held out a beautiful chain with an antique design pendent...

"aur apne saale keliye kuch bhi nahi...?!"Preet 's voice was miffed.

"are...aise kaise...yeh lo tumhareliye...you were dying to have this na..."

Prem held out a Rado watch...Preet was overwhelmed by this gesture of Prem....he hugged prem..!

"oh!prem bhayya .. you are sooo...."

"ab mere pyare bhai behn mujhe meri biwi se milne denge....?"Prem didnt let preet finish...

"ab aap hume itne pyari naik di hai to...."the trio exchanged happy glances and nodded in positive....

"ALL THE BEST BRO..!"

prem laughed softly as he heard Preet wishing him behind him as he entered the room.....

the feel inside the room was so romantic....prem looked how they had transformed his room into a heavenly place....his eyes sweeped the floral and candle decorations and then rested on the petite figure sitting with arms around her knees......

heer heard all the talks outside and was becoming more and more nervous..

she felt a shiver pass through her spine and her hands dampened suddenly..she sensed the door opening but could not bring herself to look up to him....

prem came to heer ..he could see the slight shivering of her body....which brought a small smile on his lips...

"heer..."Prem called her as he lifted her pallu partially covering her face..

heer sat there silently her heart thudding against her whole frame....

prem drank the beauty that sat beside him...her shy eyelashes casted down added a mystic beauty to her face...

prem traced his fingers on the side of her cheeks bringing it to her chin...lifting it slightly ...making her face him...."

her eyes fluttered up as she looked up to the all too familiar dark orbs sparkling with love for her....

"kya hua ..itni chup kyu ho....?"his voice was husky...and heer felt her insides curl in happiness...

prem took her hand and caressed her fingers....

"tum khush ho na...?"

his question made her crack up out of her thoughts....

khusi...?!she was having no words to explain how happy she was feeling now....

prem's breath on her face made her realise their closeness..and his fingers moving along her cheeks feeling them were doing unknown things to her mind and body..

as he moved close to her Prem felt so content....his lips grazed her cheeks ,slowly and dlibrately seeking their way to her lusciuous lips.....

her breathing became heavy with anticipation and as their lips met....they melted into each other....lips seeking out each others ...with an urgency ..with a desire and passion...

when they parted unwillingly heer leaned on to his shoulders..

"prem ...i love you...."heer nuzzled close to him...

"ouch..!"Prem let out a sound of pain..heer loked at him alarmed...

"kya hua prem...?"

prem pointed his finger to her ears....

"lagi..."he said pouting....

"i am so...."heer was not allowed to finish her sentance as prem's fingers moved along her shoulders to her ears....picking her earings

heer sat in front of Prem in a submissive attitude ...her eyes locked in his .....weaving his magic around her .....

his fingers travelled along her bare back....sending shivers in her spine.....

Prem slid the dupatta off her head and made her turn away from him.....

he moved the dark curls to the side revealing the pure creamy skin outlined by the low cut blouse...his fingers on her neck and lips on her back made heer take a sharp breath....

prem held heer's waist with his left hand and undone the necklace.

"tum bohut sunder lag rahi ho....ek dum pari jaisi....!"Prem whispered into her ears keeping his chin on her shoulder..

heer turned and prem landed softly on her lap ....he looked at her his eyes drinking the sight of her unmade beauty as her hair fell onto the side of her face ..

heer stroked his hair with one hand the other resting on his chest ....

they had alot to say ..but it seemed that their bodies wanted the chance first to speak.....

prem kissed heer's exposed part of stomach.....

passion began to build up within them and heer hugged him tightly her fingers going in deep into his dense hair.......

prem eased out of her hold and began kissing her all over...his hands roamed on her body invoking sensual feelings within her...

his fingers tugged her flimsy dori to untie the blouse and heer moaned in pleasure as he caressed her swollen softness...

both were breathing raggedly carried away by the wild desire to melt into each other....

heer fumbled with Prem's buttons .....

"heer ek minute...."Prem got up and joined her after removing the barriers....

heer moaned in explicite pleasure as prem moved along her rubbing his slight stubble on her belly....some times prem was aggressive as she felt crushed in his arms when he hugged her fiercely ....catching her lips in a wild kiss....sometimes gentler than a soft wind as she felt worshipped when he kissed her ankles and toes...

slowly she was being brought up into a heavenly feling of intimacy.....feeling the same urgency in his body too....

her hands entwined on his back ...feeling the tiny beads of sweat ....pressing herself onto his broad frame.....

suddenly Prem looked up to her in confusion....

"prem ..kya hua....?"she cupped his face and planted a kiss on his lips.....

"kuch nahi heer...bas ..yahi soch raha tha ki tumhe bache...kitne chahiye...?"

heer blushed crimson....

prem pulled her on his lap covering her with the black silk bedspread....

"wo main soch raha tha ki ....thode der baad theek rahega na....i mean..."prem looked up heer who was looking at him with a contented smile....

"tum kuch bolti kyu nahi...."Prem asked a bit miffed....

heer scooped his head and placed it on her chest hugging him and prem snuggled close...

"aap ko bache bohot ache lagthe hai na...?"heer asked softly.....

"haan wo tho hai...lekin...tum ..you know...itni jaldi nahi chahiye to i am with your decision...."

heer kissed his forehead ....

"mujhe junior Prem chahiye ..aur bohut jald chahiye.!"

prem looked up to her in disbelief...."sach...!heer you don't have to..i mean,,,..you are just 20....and.."

heer caught his lips with hers and Prem forgot what he was going to say....!

each minute passed passionately when the two lovers tried to excel each other in showing the many ways the word love can be expressed.....

their mind ,their body and their soul...merging into a oneness ...

sometime later ..as they lay beside each other ,their arms around the other in a protective way...Prem kissed heer's forehead.....heer smiled faintly even in her deep sleep murmuring

"prem..."

so guys i've kept my promise....😃😛 and i want long comments ....😛😉 love you all....good night😳 surya
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yupieeeeeeeeee first to camment....................🥳

awsome di................................
no words n u want long comments.................

nw m sure definitely with experience
hai na..................................

lovely
such a sweet PYAAR K PAL
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