mayur ff:love unlimited(part 19:pg 41)

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#191

Thnx a lot for ur comments will try to update soon and will pm u Sam-18

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#192

hey sariska

i am so happy that you liked my suggestion

i just said the name love unlimited out of the blue

i never thought you'll like it

but i am angry that you said thank you

friendship mein there is no thank you

coming to the update

it was fantastic

i loved it a lot

you made me mayank's sister

i am so lucky yaar

won't say thank you kyunki friendship mein iski zaroorat nahi hoti

but it was so sweet of you

continue soon

luv

mahima

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#193

Part 18 a:
N(in shock)-mayank tum yahan is waqt kaise?
M-uffo pehle andar aane mein meri madad karo phir poochna
N helps M in coming inside the room and after he enters he slips
bymistakely making himself and nupur fall.now he is on top of her.both
hv a cute eyelock scene.
N(blushing)-ma...ma..yank?
M-hmmm ....
N-tum bahut bhari ho plzz mere upar se utho
M-oh sorry
He gets up and helps her getting up.as she stands up he pulls her
towards him and catches her tightly from the waist.
N-mayank chhodo...
M-chodne ke liye thodi na tumhara haath thama hai.
N(blushing but becumin serious)-tum itni raat ko yahaan Kya kar rahe
ho???jaante ho agar kisi ne humein aise dekhliya to Kya sochenge?
M-mujhe kisi ke sochne se koi fark nahin padta.aur rahi baat ki agar
kisi ne humein aise dekhliya to Kya sochenge vo yeh sochenge ki hum ek
doosre se kitnaaaaa pyaar karte hain.
(he kissed her cheeks)
N(blushing)-vo......I'm sorry
M(confused)-kyun jaan tum sorry kyun keh rahi ho?
N-vo aaj afsha ne tumse Jo sawaal poocha uske liye!!!!!I know ki tum
kitna embarassed feel kar Rahe hoge Kya karoon kabhi kabhi bachkani
harkatein karti hai!!!!!
M(removing his hand frm her waist and cupping her face)-it's ok
tumhare liye kuch bhi pata hai kyun?
N gives him a "kyun" look
M-vo isliye ki tum mere liye sab kuch ho sab kuch aur pata hai hamare
is relationship mein tumne mujhe pyar ka Matlab samjhaya hai.
N was blushing
M(now becumin sarcastic)-aur haan if u r really feeling sorry to tum
mujhe kuch de sakti ho...
N-Kya???
M started cumin forward.he came close to her lips and nupur closed her
eyes and as soon as mayank was going to feel her rosy lips someone
knocked at the door.nupur opened her eyes in shock and then looked at
mayank.
N-ab hum Kya karein?
M-pehle pooch to kaun hai?
N(loudly)-kaun hai??
Outside af:di main hoon
N-afsha???mayank tum jao kahin chhup jao
M-kahaan?
N-kahin bhi par tum jao
M-theek hai main washroom mein chhup jaya hoon.
He goes inside the washroom and nupur opens the door
A:di kitna time lagati ho door kholne mein
N(sweating)-by god afsha tu itni raat ko ayegi to obviously time to
lagega.
A-vo kyun??
N-aaaaa....vo isliey ki main Soyi huyi thi
Now afsha entered the room making nupur's heart beat even faster.
A-achcha room ko dekhkar aisa nahin lagta.
N(in mind-yeh meri behen hai ya CID ki agent Jo itna shak karti hai by
god)-are afsha vo Maine blanket isliey nahin khola kyunki mujhe garmi
lag rahi thi
A-oh theek hai vaise di tumhare paas koi achchi book hai??vo Kya hai
na kal college nahin hai ek din ki chuti mili hai isliey....di tumhare
paas lovestory hai?
N-haan hai ek min..she brings the book which she kept it on the side
table of her bed.
N-ye le ab ja
A-kyun?
N(ab isse Kya bataun)-vo mujhe neend aa rahi hai isliey
A-oh theek hai bye
She was about to leave when nupur thanked god and she turned making
nupur stand like a statue.
A-vaise di ek baat to main poochna hi bhool gayi tum itna sweat kyun
kar rahi ho?
This made nupur startled.
N-vo kuch nahin bas aise hi
A-oh ab main samjhi.
N(hell damn nervous)-k...k..Kya?
A-uffo di tum bhi na khidki khule rakhne se kabhi AC chalti hai Kya?
And she started proceeding towards the window to close it.before she
could reach over there nupur stopped her.
N-afsha tu ja main band kar doongi(she stopped her because she knew
that if afsha will go near the window she will see the ladder and doubt)
A-ok di bye
N-bye
As soon as afsha left nupur closed the door and mayank came out of the
washroom
M-uffo tum behnein kitni baatein karte ho??mujhe uss washroom mein
kitni ghutan ho rahi thi pata hai??
N-achcha achcha sorry ab jaao yahan se
M-par mera gift
N-jao
M-kal Milega na??
N-haan baba ab jaao plzzzzzz
M-bye and he climbs down the ladder
Then nups closes the window and is abt to go to the bed when her cell
buzzes
N-hello..
M-I love u
N-yahi batane ke lite phone kiya hai
M-nahin nahin aur bhi kuch
N-batao
M-sweet dreams aur sirf mere sapne dekhna
N-ok ok bye
M-I love u boldo
N-achcha baba I love u
M-aur good night kiss
N-mayank....(angry tone)
M-ok ok bye
Then both of them in their respective rooms think abt each other and
sleep.zzzzz
Aur yahan mera update khatam
I know guys u r very angry on me since I hv not updated it wife two
weeks uske liye dil se sorry I was reallly very busy
Will try to post the next part soon
Till then enjoy
Do comment
Sariska precap:mayank's dad tells them that they have to go to delhi.they stay in the same house

a big fight on the way.

entry of rv.

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#194

main first aa gayi yay

pichle baar last thi iss baar sedha last se first

the update was amazing

but too stort

part 18 b should be longer

your ff is really interesting and nice

mayank and nupur scene was too cute

the balcony scenes and all

afsha's entry was amazing.... cid ki agent..... no doubt

the last scenes were the best

precap sounds exciting

but rv entry....... oh no

continue soon

luv

mahima

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

waiting

edited

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#196

wonderful superp update but was short no broblem plzzz no fight 4 mayur thnx 4 d pm

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#197

Hey u updated after long time that to short one

Not done

Cuming to update

It was nice

Afsha became kawaab mehaddi of such a romantic moment

Waise i thk Afsha can becum CID agent she suspects a lot yaar😆😆

Mayu was sho shweet here

Precap was fab but fght also

Hop not major one

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
wonderful superp update
</div>but was short no broblem
plzzz no fight 4 mayur
<div>
thnx 4 d pm

I'm so sorry for d short update
but I was really busy
will try to make it long next time
thnx

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Hey u updated after long time that to short one
Not done

Cuming to update

It was nice

Afsha became kawaab mehaddi of such a romantic moment

Waisei thk Afsha can becum CID agent she suspects a lot yaar😆😆

Mayu was sho shweet here

Precap was fab but fght also 

Hop not major one