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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey everyone

I wrote a poem in Damini and wanted to share

Damini Gujral was one of a kind

An independent woman who spoke her mind

In the beginning she was proud, rude and full of arrogance

This was a girl who rode horses and played with guns

Though she was her mother's right hand, this girl was very easy to rile

She was loyal to her sisters and would give anything to see them smile

Her sizzling chemistry with Prithvi scorched the screen

Confrontation after confrontation, scene after scene.

 

Her affianced's infidelity left her hurting and vulnerable

Prithvi's action at that time convinced her he was honorable

Seeing them grow closer her mother the topic of marriage broached

Damini grew fonder of Prithvi was the date of the wedding approached

A softer side of  Damini during this period time emerged

She loved Prithvi and was going to make sure the marriage worked

I found Damini's hesitation and doubts all the more endearing

This made Chandana's portrayal of the blissful bride all the more compelling

 

Damini was troubled and frustrated in her failure to understand her husband

Puzzling over his reasons, wondering over his actions many hours did she spend

Eventually she gave up and decided that this a lost cause

She served her husband divorce papers, that gave him pause.

 

The Marjawan sequence was a pleasure to behold and sensational

Chandana's depicted  Damini's pleasure, shyness and awkwardness

In a way that was completely and utterly believable

She was convincing in the way she portrayed Damini's confusion

And her vulnerability and love before the night of passion

 

Damini was angered and asked Prithvi to leave when his betrayal was revealed

But her mother was really ill a fact her mother had concealed

Inder revealed the secret that to the Gujral name she had no claim

She was cast adrift now, for her identity was tied to the Gujral name

 

Damini's mother had always been her pillar of strength

Her mother's death left her shocked and completely spent

To fulfill her mother's last wish she decided to give her marriage another chance

But bankruptcy and her husband's useless relatives she had to learn to balance

She took over her mother-in-law's care without so much as a whimper

She became such a calm person, was this really the girl with the temper?

 

The useless relatives made her believe she killed Prithvi's mother

The poor girl went through hell and put herself through torture

Then the truth was revealed and her fighting spirit came back

She vowed to get even with them and got started taking them to task

She exposed their evil intentions and brought the family together

All misunderstandings were cleared and they all lived happily ever after


Chandana your acting was the one thing that make the "gharelu" track tolerable

Please after LNMDJ ends take up another assignment as soon as possible

You deserve many plaudits and awards for your performance as Damini Gujral

Congratulations on a stellar performance and best of luck for the future from us all.

                                   ~Jhanavi~



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Posted: 14 years ago
oye meri jaan

fab poem.......fantastic
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum dear,........luved it........muahhhhhh!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
do i have to say anything.............ua poem says it all tat how wonderful it is
each word is beautiful

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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 poem as always jhan😊Described the whole journey of damini from start to finish perfectly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 no words left 4m my side
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous poem Jhanyyy👏

U describd each n every perspective ov her prsnality...

Luuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvdddddddddd ittttt....

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Posted: 14 years ago
u have to thank prida Jhan who made u excellent poet
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pridafan

u have to thank prida Jhan who made u excellent poet



I am grateful to them. 😳
I have already said so 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
jhan awesome .loved loved loved...... it